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message 1: by Vivian (new)

Vivian | 133 comments Mod
k here we can put and talk about peoples storys


message 2: by Vivian (new)

Vivian | 133 comments Mod
i will startPrologue
As the sun set it cast an orange glow about the land. Everything was quiet and still. It felt as if nothing could ruin the peace that the rolling hills and swaying grass seemed to instill upon the sole. As always in this universe the peace could not and would not last. The ground began to shake, an earth shattering boom emitted from over head. Out of the sky flew a ball of fire. It hit the ground in a cloud of smoke and ash. For several minuets nothing happened then from out of the crater came a monster more horrifying than you can imagine skin as dark and night eyes a sickly crimson color. The devilish monster gazed around for a moment then I slithered into the obis of night without a trace without a sound and without the knowledge of anyone.
good bad ugly?


message 3: by Brickney Sue (new)

Brickney Sue (BrickneySue) | 81 comments your mom, ha ha ha jk that was really good! like amazing!


message 4: by Vivian (new)

Vivian | 133 comments Mod
you like to say that dont u?


message 5: by Brickney Sue (new)

Brickney Sue (BrickneySue) | 81 comments yes i really do! i am done with the third chapter!


message 6: by Vivian (new)

Vivian | 133 comments Mod
of your book?


message 7: by Brickney Sue (new)

Brickney Sue (BrickneySue) | 81 comments yes! what else would have a thrid chapter vivian?


message 8: by Brickney Sue (new)

Brickney Sue (BrickneySue) | 81 comments third! sorry!


message 9: by miah roo (new)

miah roo | 3 comments hey hey



message 10: by Vivian (new)

Vivian | 133 comments Mod
ooh sorry!


message 11: by miah roo (new)

miah roo | 3 comments what


message 12: by Vivian (new)

Vivian | 133 comments Mod
not you ms Miah roo!


message 13: by Vivian (new)

Vivian | 133 comments Mod
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