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message 1: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
:)


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
so..i heav e a plot....its a plan for 4 books:

air
Fire
water
earth or w/e order

its about theese kids with powers oover elements. first girl controls air. :D good sound to you ? also she falls in love with the boy with the power of fire


message 3: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
Sounds great!
So don't we first need to sort out the characters?


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
*sigh* sue, where are the characters:

wel from teh story, we can change the names

by the way wrote this idea when i was 13/14

Air: Aora (ugh, y hat name?), 13, grey eyes, pale skin, long, wavy blonde hair ('cauxse ofher power i think), big scar across her face (remember, wrote this last year(

Water: Alex, choppy black hair, blue eyes, 13, normal skin

Earth: Lil(l)y, shoulder lrngth brown hair, brown eyes, tan skin, 13

fire: short copper hair, gold eyes, olive skin, 13, luke


i wrote like 5 chapters but then i ;ost the workbook i wrote it in :'( all that hard work!!


message 5: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
Hmm...let's change the guy's name..Luke...to something more exotic.Whaddya say?
I like the girl's name..Aora-now that sounds exotic!
So yeah the plot's pretty good,all we have to do now is build a character for each one.
Let Aora be rude and arrogant to begin with.She can also be very compassionate when it comes down to the poeple whom she cares about.
.........


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
but... luke's my fav male name....oh ok

:P lol

waora: in my story her parents died by some unknown cause in my mind since i haven't figure that out yet. She lived with her grandparents 'till she was chased by these men who finally catch her and take her to this prision place. She is put on the electrocution type chair where all her energy and unfound power is sucked away from her. She is taken to another cells where the other 3 are. then these people come and rescue them but aora thinks they are bad people so she fights then (3 days atfter she lost her energy) and she uses her power :P and so deos luke...and she runs away and holds onto teh bottem of the ppl's truck adn they drive to this place where she gets off and runs to the nearest town... the leader dude has her power...aka they also have elemental powers and they were gonna teach them how to use them or something....


that was a s far as i had gottem


message 7: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
wait..does aora know about her powers in the very beginning of the story?


message 8: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
oh and I said to change Luke's name not because I don't like it but because I thought it was a very common name


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
1) nope, aora deosn't know anything
2) i know, i know, I KNOW!! CHill ^_^ on another site that wazs a name i used to use... CHil ^_^ he ehe h


message 10: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
i'm chillin all right!No tensions whatsoever :P


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
:P

but i don't think aora should be a mean/ beach

she should be a shy girl

i think chil should be...chill ^_^


message 12: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (last edited Jun 05, 2012 05:10AM) (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
I hate girls who are shy because they portray such a vulnerable character.And our female lead should be strong.
Oh and she isn't rude to everyone.Just the ones she don't know.maybe a little mysterious and introvert and then comes Luke and poof! she becomes and even better person than she used to be...


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
hmmm.......how about she is like...looks shy and weak but she reallyis strong-willed and a kick-ass beach at first then she meets luke and is like that to him really mena 'cause he is chilly and mesyrious and dark to her adn then she discovers more of his persionality and falls in love


message 14: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
works for me!


message 15: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
but I don't want her to be whiny and needy like some other *cough*bella*cough* characters.


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
yep bo worries....

HEY I GOT AN IDEA! this is what i did with my friend, instead of heaving a roleplay lets write one line at a time than it will become a full story1!!


message 17: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
cool!Let's just let it flow


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
.......wanna start? starts off with her being chased


message 19: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
(all right.i'm starting)

There was not a single star in the sky above.


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.


message 21: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
(hey , add the comment with the otehr sso later on we can use it as a story)

There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.


message 23: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead.


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.


message 25: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
will reply tomorrow


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
...O_O i mean later on today


message 28: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
okie:)


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
Her vreathing got ragged from fear.


message 30: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around


message 32: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (last edited Jun 06, 2012 06:59AM) (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around.
I backed away frantically but didn't get too far.


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around.
I backed away frantically but didn't get too far.
The man wsn't alone., another one grsbbed me from behind.


message 34: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around.
I backed away frantically but didn't get too far.
The man wasn't alone, another one grabbed me from behind.
The first man had covered by nose with the cloth in his hand and before I passed out I realized that it was choroform.


message 35: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
The kidnapping's over.Hey don't we need chapters or something?


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
....yeah thats teh proglgue..ui ahve the chpters all figured out.


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
....yeah thats teh proglgue..ui ahve the chpters all figured out.ll in dot point only different:

chpt 1: the kidnappe, my version has a chase in it.
cht2:she finds herswelf in clel with 1 window with moonlights and its too small to do anything other than give light. water gets thrown in.2 days past without them getting any food only water from the cell's bathroom. earth gets thrown in.on air;s 5th day a man comes and takes water away (person). the man comes back, takes earth awat. end chpt 2/1


message 38: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
Ok so your chance to write the next line now.


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around.
I backed away frantically but didn't get too far.
The man wasn't alone, another one grabbed me from behind.
The first man had covered by nose with the cloth in his hand and before I passed out I realized that it was choroform.
I passed out into teh darkness of unconsiousness


message 41: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around.
I backed away frantically but didn't get too far.
The man wasn't alone, another one grabbed me from behind.
The first man had covered by nose with the cloth in his hand and before I passed out I realized that it was choroform.
I passed out into the darkness of unconsiousness.
When I woke up,I was blinded because of the sudden brightness.


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around.
I backed away frantically but didn't get too far.
The man wasn't alone, another one grabbed me from behind.
The first man had covered by nose with the cloth in his hand and before I passed out I realized that it was choroform.
I passed out into the darkness of unconsiousness.

When I woke up,I was blinded because of the sudden brightness.
I opened my heavy eyelids to see the moon bright in teh sky, its rays like lasers after bthat horrid darkness.


message 43: by Sierra~Kelley, And they say I'm the evil one! (new)

Sierra~Kelley | 790 comments Mod
There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around.
I backed away frantically but didn't get too far.
The man wasn't alone, another one grabbed me from behind.
The first man had covered by nose with the cloth in his hand and before I passed out I realized that it was choroform.
I passed out into the darkness of unconsiousness.

When I woke up,I was blinded because of the sudden brightness.
I opened my heavy eyelids to see the moon bright in teh sky, its rays like lasers after bthat horrid darkness.

Before I could start panicking I heard a screech somewhere.


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 517 comments Mod
There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around.
I backed away frantically but didn't get too far.
The man wasn't alone, another one grabbed me from behind.
The first man had covered by nose with the cloth in his hand and before I passed out I realized that it was choroform.
I passed out into the darkness of unconsiousness.

When I woke up,I was blinded because of the sudden brightness.
I opened my heavy eyelids to see the moon bright in teh sky, its rays like lasers after bthat horrid darkness.

Before I could start panicking I heard a screech somewhere.
I tryed to get up to see what it was but found my wrists shakled.

(a screech?)


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