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message 1: by Caroline (last edited Jun 07, 2012 01:28PM) (new)

Caroline (godwithus) Heres a couple:

A poem

A red rose,covered in thorns. A single curse.

A paint chipped door. A changing life.

A waterfall,trickling my name. A loving mother.

The birds,singing their loving songs. A poem.


We all wait,for some change,
Even though you stand and watch.
I wait,for miracles,
Even though they won't happen.
She waits for that round belly to become her child,
Even though she knows it has trouble.
He waits for his true girl to love him drooling at her,
Even though he doesn't think about her only him.
We know that things will happen,
So why don't we get out there and do it?

message 2: by Nyghtmare, Head Moderator (new)

Nyghtmare | 34 comments Mod
I love these

message 3: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) thanks,i just came up with them. i like yours a-lot

message 4: by Nyghtmare, Head Moderator (new)

Nyghtmare | 34 comments Mod
Yours are a different, but unique style

message 5: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) Ya true

message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

They're cool Caroline. You did a good job (as always).

message 7: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) Thankyou really!

message 8: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid these are amazing! would u mind critiquing mine for advice on how to make it as good as yours?

((truly great))

message 9: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) ((Thankyou!))


message 10: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) ((Thankyou!))


message 11: by Ingrid (last edited Jun 20, 2012 02:02PM) (new)

Ingrid Caroline [Who paints the day] wrote: "((Thankyou!))



thanks. do u take writing classes?

((a link to my poems: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...))

message 12: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) No...I want to. Do you?

message 13: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid yes, yes a million times yes. If i did i would become an author by now. But anyways i'll wait till i can get my own agent. Are they costly?(classes)

message 14: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) Who knows. Depends on some stuff.

message 15: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid i guess. have u made any new writing during the summer. the summer is usually when my writing blossoms:D

message 16: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) :)im writing new. ill add more if peeps like it. there better.

message 17: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid i would:D:D

message 18: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) :)

message 19: by A. (new)

A. (ameanie25) I love your style!

P.S. do you mind if I include the first poem in my collage (that I'm in the process of making). I will credit you, of course.

message 20: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) Not at all! Thankyou so much!:)

Ill add more today;)

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