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message 1: by ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱, This is my witty title (head mod) (new)

ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱ (charlie_awesome) | 766 comments Mod
Post it here, or give some links :D


message 6: by Sherri (new)

Sherri (fabledhattress) A Lovely Past


Fool's Entertainment


Prologue to my novel


I have a few more on my profile but the first two are a couple of my poems, and the last speaks for itself lol :)


message 7: by ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱, This is my witty title (head mod) (new)

ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱ (charlie_awesome) | 766 comments Mod
thank you guys! Seeems interesting


message 8: by Sherri (new)

Sherri (fabledhattress) It does! Thank you Joe for liking one of mine btw :p I would've read through all of them but I got booted off after I posted mine :/


message 9: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah1324) | 328 comments I have some writing but it isn't on this website. I am thinking about putting it on here though. Well, this is some of my work on Fictionpress:

http://www.fictionpress.com/u/805502/...


message 10: by Just Joe (new)

Just Joe (justjoe) Welcome ^_^ I like your second one as well. I had an experience somewhat like that... But no one told me not to in that kind of sense *shrug* it was a bad idea I'm over it. Got a new guy who is totally amazing ^_^


message 11: by Sherri (new)

Sherri (fabledhattress) Haha good for you ^.^ I kinda wrote that after my second ex and i broke up, and I've been single since, and that was in October of 2010 xD


message 12: by lafon حمزة, Pensmaster! (new)

lafon حمزة نوفل (lafon) | 178 comments Mod
Here is a poem of mine that I came up with rather spontaneously. It was fun actually. My poem!


message 13: by Sherri (new)

Sherri (fabledhattress) Dude, I LOVE your ninja librarians avatar! So freaking awesome!!!


message 14: by lafon حمزة, Pensmaster! (new)

lafon حمزة نوفل (lafon) | 178 comments Mod
Sherri wrote: "Dude, I LOVE your ninja librarians avatar! So freaking awesome!!!"

Thanks! And I really liked the prologue you wrote.


message 15: by Sherri (new)

Sherri (fabledhattress) Haha, thankies ^.^ I don't have anything past chapter 2 yet except random scenes *shakes head shamefully*


message 16: by lafon حمزة, Pensmaster! (new)

lafon حمزة نوفل (lafon) | 178 comments Mod
No shame, no shame. It was the same with me. When I was writing regularly, I would write bits and pieces at a time and then sort of combine them to make a cohesive whole. Plus my favourite things to write were action scenes and dialogue. The one thing I couldn't do was write a beginning. It was actually quite funny.


message 17: by Sherri (new)

Sherri (fabledhattress) Lol yes well this writer's block has plagued me for almost a year now except for random scenes every now and again *sighs*


message 18: by Just Joe (new)

Just Joe (justjoe) Hmm try think of your story as a movie. Make it a trailer for how you want it to play out and write it down. I did that and that helped me a lot when I was writing my book.


message 19: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah1324) | 328 comments Interesting. That's cool, Joe!


message 21: by Sherri (new)

Sherri (fabledhattress) Btw, I got over my writers block by rp'ing like crazy!!!! :D


message 22: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah1324) | 328 comments Cool!


message 23: by ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱, This is my witty title (head mod) (new)

ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱ (charlie_awesome) | 766 comments Mod
That works!


message 24: by Holly (new)

Holly | 69 comments This is a little darker than my usual stuff, but its the only one I actually have typed out. I'd appreciate some criticism:)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/9...


message 25: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid Hi my name is Ingrid. I am new and am hoping you could criticize or comment on my writing. here's the link


http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

you can also go to ingrid's writing after clicking the link to view all of my stories I have written


message 26: by ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱, This is my witty title (head mod) (new)

ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱ (charlie_awesome) | 766 comments Mod
Ingrid wrote: "Hi my name is Ingrid. I am new and am hoping you could criticize or comment on my writing. here's the link


http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

you can also go to ingr..."


Hi Ingrid! Welcome! I read two of your poems and really liked them! You have talent!


message 27: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid Thanks!! I really appreciate it!


message 29: by Holly (new)

Holly | 69 comments Read it, and I liked it. Poor Dess!


message 30: by Sierra~Kelley (new)

Sierra~Kelley Aww thanks so much Holly:DMeans a lot to me!


message 31: by sucre'd fiend (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 39 comments I'm editing them when they're done :)




message 32: by ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱, This is my witty title (head mod) (new)

ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱ (charlie_awesome) | 766 comments Mod
It would mean a lot to me if someone read my story.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 33: by Sierra~Kelley (new)

Sierra~Kelley I DID!AND I LOVED IT!


message 34: by ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱, This is my witty title (head mod) (new)

ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱ (charlie_awesome) | 766 comments Mod
THANK YOU SISTER!


message 35: by Just Joe (new)

Just Joe (justjoe) I've only read the first chapter but I'm already hooked!


message 36: by ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱, This is my witty title (head mod) (new)

ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱ (charlie_awesome) | 766 comments Mod
Thank you so much!


message 37: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah1324) | 328 comments I just posted my first story on GR and I would love you forever and ever if you would read it and comment with feedback. It is called THE KIDNAPPER'S GAME. There is only one chapter so far, but I plan on continuing. You can get to it from my profile. Thank you sooooo much!


message 38: by lafon حمزة, Pensmaster! (new)

lafon حمزة نوفل (lafon) | 178 comments Mod
Sarah wrote: "I just posted my first story on GR and I would love you forever and ever if you would read it and comment with feedback. It is called THE KIDNAPPER'S GAME. There is only one chapter so far, but I p..."

Sarah, your profile is private so I can't access your writing.

ETA: Found it. It's pretty good (a lot like how The Golden Compass had the Gobblers. And of course the mash up with the Hunger Games.)

I'm not gonna put any feedback yet, 'cause it's too short, but it has great promise.


message 39: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah1324) | 328 comments What does ETA mean?

And thank you for reading! I am glad you like it so far! I have actually never read the Golden Compass, but I'd like to soon. Anyway, thanks again Lafon!


message 40: by lafon حمزة, Pensmaster! (new)

lafon حمزة نوفل (lafon) | 178 comments Mod
ETA stands for Estimated Time of Arrival. We computer types use it for way more than that though. In this case it means that after I posted the comment I figured out a way to find your story.


message 41: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah1324) | 328 comments Okeedokee! Well, thank you for reading my story!


message 42: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah1324) | 328 comments There are now three chapters to my story, The Kidnapper's Game, so please take look! Enjoy!


message 44: by Sierra~Kelley (new)

Sierra~Kelley katnuto wrote: "http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/9...

this is a peice i just wrote and wanted your thoughts"


It's pretty good!I can't wait for you to begin:P


message 45: by Sierra~Kelley (new)

Sierra~Kelley Julius wrote: "http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Who will dare?"


Is this the part where we fall over ourselves to proclaim our heroism by CLICKING ON THAT LINK? O.O


message 46: by Julius (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 13 comments Only if that's what you wish. I thought this group was all about the dramatic.


message 47: by Sierra~Kelley (new)

Sierra~Kelley It is.Play it up!


message 48: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah1324) | 328 comments I just added Chapter 4 to my story The Kidnapper's Game so please read!

Chapter 4
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...


message 49: by ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱, This is my witty title (head mod) (new)

ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱ (charlie_awesome) | 766 comments Mod
Eek! Write more!!


message 50: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah1324) | 328 comments I am almost finished with Chapter 5! I am having a productive day! :D


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