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Writer of the Month > Rayana's Abyss (Watch your step, there may be demons lurking about)

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message 1: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Yeah, I'm kinda late on this one >.<

My word count shall be: 100 per day

You know with homework and stuff like that, I'm quite busy...
I'll probably be writing short stories anyway...


message 2: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) omg ray joined! yay!!!!


message 3: by Just Plain Ray (last edited Jan 05, 2009 06:06PM) (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments *claps*
okay:
Day One:
Story worked on: a short story about a sandwich for Science class
Words: 325

Oooh, I went over my limit! Yay :]


message 4: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments good work!


message 5: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
Hooray!!! You went over your min. by 225 (which is five cubed (I'm a nerd. :P)) words!!! Yay!!!

Oh, and I just want to say that I like your picture. And I like the show Psych! :D


message 6: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Hehe thanks!

Day Two
Story worked on: None XP
Words: None (*sigh* I MUST WRITE)


message 7: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Ahem *clears throat* I will now write a short story..*sigh* I need to think of a topic...


message 8: by Just Plain Ray (last edited Jan 08, 2009 05:54PM) (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments My heart was as cold and petrified as the iceberg that sunk the Titanic. Nothing could melt it. Not even the world's largest chisel. I was born to kill, not to have a social life on the sidelines. My life is just centered around one thing: to kill who I'm told to. Even as I watch the blood drain from their faces, my face is emotionless. I work for the I.E.A (or the Incredibly Evil Agency...ironic, no?), and am the top agent. The job pays well, but I'm more into it for the glory. Just getting that kill gives me such a surge of energy. I loved my life(not that I knew what 'love' was), until that one fateful morning. I was sent to kill a woman named Sarah Jones. Never knew who she was, never planned to find out much. Just anything I basically needed to know (i.e. address, looks, place of work, etc.). So I had set out to find her. When I did, my jaw dropped to my knees in surprise. My heart rate had increased ten-fold, and I felt jittery all over.
I had fallen in love with my victim.


message 9: by Just Plain Ray (last edited Jan 09, 2009 03:13PM) (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Day Three:
Story worked on: the short story that is up there *points*
Words: 194

Yay, i went over my limit again! :]


message 10: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) omg thats awesome!


message 11: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Heehee, thanks :D


message 12: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) XD any time!


message 13: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) and now i gtg.... bye ray!


message 14: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Awww, bye Mimi! :[


message 15: by Just Plain Ray (last edited Jan 09, 2009 03:13PM) (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Day Four
Story worked on: Some of 'In the Dark' and some summary thing of a dream I had
Words: 105


message 16: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
Gooo Goth_vamp Gooo!


message 17: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
Hmm that does not look right... It should be GOOOoOOOOO not goo :(


message 18: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Heehee, yeah ^^


message 19: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1367 comments GO GO GO!


message 20: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1367 comments heehee


message 21: by Just Plain Ray (last edited Jan 09, 2009 03:13PM) (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Day Five:
Story worked on: Finished Chapter 11 of 'In the Dark'
Words: 302


message 22: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Gah, i messed up on the day numbers...*edits*


message 23: by Madeline (last edited Jan 09, 2009 03:23PM) (new)

Madeline haha pineapple haha ooohhh i am never going to get over that! i love you forever for putting that picture up!! lol it makes me happy


message 24: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Heehee, no problem


message 25: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Day Six:
Still haven't written anything...MUST WRITE


message 26: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (last edited Jan 10, 2009 08:01AM) (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
*Sets the pretty box, with a big red ribbon, containing thousands of wonderful words, on Goth_Vamp's desk*

Wishing you a day filled with magical moments of writing.

*dances out of the room, tripping on nothing but my own feet*

Drat it, I can never make a graceful exit :]


message 27: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Thanks Dee!
But I haven't written yesterday (shame on you, Rayana)...but I am typing write now

*checks word count*
86 words! :O
Only 14 to go!


message 28: by Just Plain Ray (last edited Jan 10, 2009 08:07AM) (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Well, yesterday I didn't get anything done...

January 10, 2009
Story written:

Lorenzo ran through the forest, his breathing heavy, and his face scratched and dirty. The branches of trees scraped at his bare skin like merciless spears. He ignored them, however, and kept running. He ignored the screaming pain in his feet, his head, and hisself as a whole. He would shut down in any minute, unable to go any further. But first, he had to get to his destination. He wanted it so badly, that he would drive himself to insanity if he didn’t get it. He could see a light up ahead. Yes, the end of the forest; the end of his troubles. He stumbled out into a clearing and ran a few more yards. He collapsed at an alter, quivering with joy.
“Yes! I’m home!” he cried out, “I’m home!”

Word Count: 132 words


message 29: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (last edited Jan 10, 2009 08:22AM) (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
<--stumbles a lot... I can relate :]

Very nice!


message 30: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Hehe, thanks :]

Now I'm off to finish my math homework...*sigh*


message 31: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Okay, I typed some of my lab report...which included 360 words..

So my total word count for today is:
492 words


message 32: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
Yeah! :]


message 33: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments I still have like half of it to do
Which includes:
Results(with a data table), conclusion, i have to make up a question, and a cover...

Yay me...


message 34: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
I JUST finished my software review...my grown-up homework :)


message 35: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
YAY!!!!!!


message 36: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments January 11, 2009:
Story worked on: A few paragraphs of a new story I might write(I'll post an excerpt in the next post)
Word count: 440


message 37: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments
Zane gripped at Max’s shirt hungrily, his lips pressed against his neck. Their breaths came out in short gasps, and their hearts pounded wildly. Max trailed his quavering hand down the planes of Zane’s bare chest. Zane felt his breath catch as Max slipped a slender finger into his belt loop. Max’s eyes fluttered closed and Zane looked at him, a sickeningly sweet taste lingering on his lips.
“Zane,” Max purred, “Zane, oh, Zane…”
“Yes?” Zane asked, looking down at Max, an angel in his misery. His savior; the love of his life. Max opened his eyes a fraction of an inch, revealing two orbs of blue heaven.

Max slid his hand from Zane’s chest and wrapped it around his neck, pulling Zane’s face closer so that their noses were brushing gently against each other.
“Tell me you love me.” Max murmured his voice barely above a whisper. Zane took in a deep breath.
“I love you, Max.” he said softly and Max smiled slightly. Zane’s heart skipped a beat when he saw that smile.

“Forever.”


(^^ Teehee)


message 38: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
Holy Crap...that was outstandning writing! I am impressed.


message 39: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Heehee, thanks ^^


message 40: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
The back story of your story...please.... :]


message 41: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Wait..you want me to write it?

*rubs hands evilly*


message 42: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
Well, yes, please...as I cannot "hear" you talk about it... :p


message 43: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) wait wait wait... i is conflustered.


message 44: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments True...
I'll start typing the prologue...
but Max isn't necessarily in it yet...and that particular scene isn't one of the first...

and I typed another section of the same story, but if I posted it, it would reveal too much...


message 45: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
*sits down with Michelle and waits patiently*

Hey Michelle, me thinks it be's a Vampire thingie


message 46: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) oh, cuz im like "whats that about?"


message 47: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments *opens Word and begins typing**puts DO NOT DISTURB sign on forehead*


message 48: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1367 comments *D


message 49: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments *sigh* nevermind...I have to go to volleball class...


message 50: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) class?


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