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ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱ (charlie_awesome) I'd love to read it!

message 2: by [deleted user] (last edited May 30, 2012 06:36PM) (new)

I just wrote this when I had stomach flu that's why it's so lame and bad. Many people think it's not. BTW the I Solemnly Swear is a fanfic in fanfiction.net....
Here goes....

Writing is simple
Yet addicting and powerful
Writing differs
Whether romance or humor

'Tis never too young
Nor too old nor just right
For writing's for all
Old and child alike

I started nine
Fanfiction's the style
Never wilted my interest
In Harry Potter sets

James love Lily
My favorite story
I Solemnly Swear
About Marauders, go dare

I suck at poetry
This one's the proof
So go comment and tell me
Is my career going to poof!?

message 3: by lafon حمزة (new)

lafon حمزة نوفل (lafon) No, it's actually pretty good. It's closer to doggerel than anything else, but don't let the term fool you. I use this word for poetry that is similar to Dr. Seuss. I like it. Although you might wan't to think about removing the "Lame ryt" part.

Oh and in response:

Said to the girl who
couldn't appreciate praise:
I like it, you see?

message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

there, i removed it.

message 5: by Nicole (new)

Nicole I wrote a poem long time ago. :))
The Leaving It's not that good. :))

message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

this ones kinda cheesy i was bored in algebra class when i wrote it:

Not enough light to hide the flame
Not enough dark to hide the smoke

Not enough love to hide the hate
Not enough left to hide the hurt

Not enough to go around
Not enough to hold on

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