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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

This is the intro to the story I'm working on, tell me if you like it!

Life was already rough, starting middle school and all, but to carry a secret around? That was the true burden of this hectic life. You are probably wondering right now what the heck I'm talking about, but now....

... the secret's out


message 2: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) Like it!


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

thanks! I have other intros for other things, but i lost them... oh well!


Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ AWESOME!!! Even though I already read it. :)


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Yay!


Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ YAY!!!!


message 7: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) I am a bit confused but i guess when i read more.....i wont be:) I love the way you string it.


Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ She is published.


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks!


Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ ??????


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Think Twice (actually chorus of song I wrote)

I was on thin ice, and I
didn't think twice,
so I stepped in, and took the plunge.

I didn't stop and look,
into that killer brook,
and did something really, really dumb.

Thought I made a friend,
thought my troubles found an end,
but my troubles,
were far, far from gone...


Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ Is that about the person.


message 13: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) Cool


Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ AUREA!


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

I have another manuscript I'm working on, but it's kinda childish and I'm not sure if I should show it. Not yet, at least.


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

Ooh! But I do have a part of a song I'd like to share! I know lyrics technically aren't author-dom, but I still like writing them. And then spending FOREVER on working out the music. Anyways, here goes:

"Just A Bully"
Hiding in the back of the room, just,
Waiting for my chance to bloom, but,
You are cutting me down.

Waiting for my chance to shine, but,
those dreams just can't be mine, when,
You are pushing me to the ground.

Hoping, pleading, begging you for mercy,
Wishing, dreaming, that you'd never hurt me, anymore...


message 17: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) Love it!!!;)))


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

thanks! :D


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