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message 1: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) Cool

message 2: by Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ (last edited May 30, 2012 02:19PM) (new)

Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ Pairs

I see people walking in pairs,
most people would care,
I have to hide my in sadness in a dome,
My lonely tears have become my home.

message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

Whoa. Since when do you write like that?!? You've been holding back on me! You're amazing!

Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ Be quiet. I have always written like that.

message 5: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) Wow,thats great!:)

Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ Thanks.

message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Not in front of me! Well, not in poetry. Actually, I've never seen a poem before of yours! I wonder why...

message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

I am soo not trying to be rude though... oops!

message 10: by Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ (last edited May 30, 2012 02:53PM) (new)

Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ Sue

There ounce was a girl named Sue,
Who couldn't tie her own shoes,
She'd get her hands in a knot,
Hey! this is a stupid plot!
Who would write about this anyway?

message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

I like that a lot! It made me have a giggle attack!

*giggle giggle*

Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ I ran out of rymesis.

message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh, Rue-Lu... :D

Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ Let me think.........I am making these up on the fly.

message 15: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) cool

Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ Thanks.

message 17: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) hehe

message 18: by Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ (last edited Jun 08, 2012 09:01PM) (new)

Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ Imagination

Everyone has imagination. It is something that you don't ask for, or even know they have it! you, only, you can find it. The people who have decided to use it have done GREAT THINGS! Use your imagination. I beg of you.

message 19: by kayla (new)

kayla  (kaylacaylen) Man your poems are great I wish I can make poetry like you.!

Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ Thanks. :) I like you picture.

Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Love your poems. Can you check out my writing please under Corinne's writing.

Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ Okay.

Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Lu-Lu wrote: "Okay."

Thank you and say your thoughts about please.

Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ It is amazing.

Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ Un-noticeble

None notices me. It is almost like they can't.
Everyday. Alone. All I have to say.
Tell others about me, tell them to notice those who are unseen, un noticeable. Please, if you know an un-noticeable like me, tell them of my story, it might help them I have a name......but none cares to know about an un-noticeable like me.

message 26: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) :)

Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ Thax.

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