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message 1: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
I will choose the winner of this contest. Please write a short story that does not exceed more than a couple of pages. There has to be atleast 4 characters in it. One of the characters has to be named Riley, and one of the lines has to be: "She didn't have to die".
Good Luck!
I will choose a winner by January 12th!


message 2: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) Do the characters just have to be mentioned? Or do they actually have to be in the story?


message 3: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
Riley does not have to be human.


message 4: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
There characters can just be mentioned if you want, but what are you planning to do? There must be some characters in the story. Unless you have a different, better, idea...


message 5: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) Well, I was planning to do something, but then as I went along, it changed, but I'm thinking I might go back and edit it so that a few of the characters are only mentioned o.O


message 6: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
Okay, I can't wait to read your story. Also, try to get some of your other friends to join the contest. The more participants, the better!


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

I've started on mine. It's about twins, Riley (girl) and Anna. Riley's a witch, and Anna's a human. But their blood scent is twisted. Thus the title "Twisted Twins"


message 8: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) Lolz, I started mine. It's about a guy named Ryan, and his wife, Meganne died. Their daughter is named Riley.


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

sweets.
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XP
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message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

I am sure that you can change it to a he.


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

do we put it in link, or straight on here?


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

I'll just link it, but if you want pasted here then I'll delete the link and put it straight on here. it's short.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...



message 13: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
Natasha wrote: "...Could we possibly use he instead of she in the line "She didn't have to die"?"




message 14: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
my reply is, if you really have to, I'll accept that, but I would prefer you didn't.


message 15: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
I like your ideas! Can't wait to read them!
So far, I've only read Bells' is.


message 16: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
i meant Bells' story.


message 17: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) *bounces* UGH! I finished mine, but I really, really don't like it!!


message 18: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
Natasha: Ok, whatever you want to do.
Rosie: too bad! but i bet you can make it better!


message 19: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
Come on, guys, only one person has entered in the contest. I want as many people as possible to enter!


message 20: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
ok, heres my story. I hope you like it :) http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...


message 21: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
natasha ur going down :p


message 22: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
probably, but I'm gonna win this contest. and theres nothing u can do about it :p


message 23: by Natalia (new)

Natalia | 1 comments Im going to do it if i have the time


message 24: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
It's ok, Natasha. I always go over the page limit, without knowing it and then its too late. :)


message 25: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
thanks for your stories so far, guys! *wicked, evil smile* very interesting stories.


message 26: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
2 More Days!


message 27: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
r u sure u cant choose me as the winner 2day or even 2morrow? ;)


message 28: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
I am sooooo gonna win. u dont stand a chance agaisnt my supreme writing skills. :p


message 29: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
I think Natalia might also b competing and maybe Amanda.


message 30: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
im not being argumentative. u r by disagreeing w/me. Besides all I'm saying is the truth. I am gonna win :p and 6 people is still awesome :)


message 31: by Olivia, everything in moderation :P (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) | 229 comments Mod
Yah, I definitely think more people should compete. I might compete.


message 32: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Here's my story, because (obviously) I'm never going to get around to fixing. Just as warning, it might be confusing. SORRY! I wrote it late at night, and was feeling in a sappy mood.


message 33: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
great, now we have four people entered!
Don't worry Rosie, it doesn't matter.


message 34: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
the winners picked tomorrow!!! :D i cant wait untill i win! ;)


message 35: by Olivia, everything in moderation :P (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) | 229 comments Mod
Hey, guys, since obviously there will be no more contestants, I am down to the final two. It will be so hard to pick! All four of your stories were really good, but one of you didn't have the line "she didn't have to die".


message 36: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
Hey, guys, the previous comment was made by me, not Olivia. I do not know why it says Olivia, that was really wierd I think I double clicked on her photo or something when writing it....?!
Anyway, the previous comment was made by me.
Srry




message 37: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
when will u post the winners? tonight (please), tomorrow morning, after school, or in the evening?


message 38: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) Could you, ya know, tell us who the final two are?


message 39: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
is it me and Rosie? ;)


message 40: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
ur not in the top 2, im sorry but ur in last place. i told u, u shouldnt have done a genie story. ;)


message 41: by Mallory (last edited Jan 11, 2009 04:55PM) (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) Oh, harsh. Lolz, why am I in both of your options for top two? My story really isn't that great.


message 42: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
because ur story is awesome and isnt about genies :D


message 43: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (last edited Jan 11, 2009 05:09PM) (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
no I'll be in 1st, rosie will be 2nd and natasha will b 3rd. Zandy will announce me the winner and everyone will shower me with chocolates and money!! ;D


message 44: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) Well, good luck with the chocolates and money part, Sarah! I, for one, have no intention of giving any up ;)

Oh, and thanks both of you :)


message 45: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) Oooh! I LOVE CLICHED STORIES! Usually. :)


message 46: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) Yeah, that's where my usually comes in xD


message 47: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
u people r just jelous of my awesome story :p


message 48: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
If you want, I will tell you one of the final two, but I don't want to get anybody's hopes down.
I will announce the winner tonight, it is so hard to choose!


message 49: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) Can you tell us the final two? Or at least me xP.


message 50: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
can u tell me 2? its ok if u dont want 2 disapoint natasha and just tell rosie and me ;)


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