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message 1: by Jessica (new)

Jessica  (jessicaafrank) | 40 comments Maria woke up slowly, knowing it was Monday and she didn't have her history paper done.


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

"i guess this means another detentionQ! ahhh, it dont matter," she yawned


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
She knew that it was already the third week of HS, and she had alreday gotten 7ndetentions


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

she put on her black volcom tshirt and dark ripped skinny jeans with her studded belt and chains. when she was done putting on her clothes, she went to pu on her makeup--thick black eyeliner and dark purple eyeshadow


message 5: by Jessica (new)

Jessica  (jessicaafrank) | 40 comments She grabbed her stuff and decided to go for the window. No point in facing the old people downstairs. Her parents just didn't understand why


message 6: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 28, 2008 10:07AM) (new)

and her old man is drunk evry single friggin day


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
lsat week, she even got away with pracitcally having mild S*x with her bf,Romin, on the TABLE when the dude was watching TV


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

((lol, wow caitlin))
and she stopped being a virgin at the age 10


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
that memory haunted her because herbf became gay after leaving he for antoher man


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

and his new bf was pretty hot


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
so she snuck away to a BF wangs with him


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

she was a total rebel who did things to get attention--from having se* with boys to shoplifting


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
one time she did both. sheshopplifted then had s*x with the clerk


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

the clerk let her go cuz of that


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
she got away with 600 dollars worth of merchandise


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

she could get away with anything as long as she used her body! she was a 36 B cup and was very fit


message 17: by Carole (new)

Carole B (caroleaburkett) But there was a hole inside her, a hole she couldn't fill with any of her rebellious actions. Whatever she stole, whoever she used, she felt empty.


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
she could rob a bank and kill 300 hundred lives and feel something that wasnt' guilt, but what was it?


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

it was loneliness....


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
she had one friend that she met in a juvi delinuent meeting. He was so funny and clever


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

and she liked him, but he already had a gf


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
plus at the time she was 14 and he was 16


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
She felt a little bad


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

but if it gave her some attention she didnt care


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
She walked throught school in her torn jeans. Some people looked at her, some hesitated with their gossip.


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

she rolled her eyes at the gossipers and....


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
Kicked her locker so hard it opened, silence fell. "Shut it, i cant hear my cell phone!" she yelled.


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

"god! wats ur damage!" someone said
"BULLSH**!! UR THE PROBLEM OK!!" she yelled
"we're just talking like regular humans!"
"YEAH, HUMANS WITH BULLHORNS!! JUST SHUT THE HELL UP!!"


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
No one had a mind for her. Justwhen that happened a boy exactly like her came along. He


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

punched the locker,"U HEARD HER!! SHUT UR TRAP U SHI**Y A**HOLES!!"


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
She had fallen in love for the first time


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

she gazed at him,"hi,"


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
"sup," he said. SHe realized what her life had been like all up until she met him. And it flasshed by her. She was disgusted


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

she felt like she had ruined her life and wasted her virginity on the wrong things


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
she turned to him. "hey, wanna see a movie with me sometime?" he turmed. "Why would i waste my time in movies..." he said. She looked dissapointed. She started walking away. "when i have Metallica tickets!" he said. She turned in happiness. "Wanna come?"


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

she grinned widely,"i'd love to,"


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
She had never felt so light and carefree. she started to shiver and feel really great. She felt like she did wen she was sent to the police staion but in a positive weay!


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

she looked kind of creepy cuz she hardly smiled unless she was beating someone up


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
she went home. What she had looked like was terrible. Her dark burnette hair was in a messy ponytail and her makeup from last week was smudged. she had a chin of acne and a bunch of other twisted things. She was wearing purple and deep indigo. She had to work hard!


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

she started caring bout her looks and taking care of her skin


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
she styill wore black, but not all the time. on the day of the Metallica concert, she came to meet Laurence or Larce" at his house/.


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

she wore black jeans and pretty white blouse


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
it wasnt really good enough for the thing though


message 44: by [deleted user] (new)

she just wore it to look cuter and brighter, but she knew it was gonna get ruined


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
She really needed to blend in, so she lold Larce that she was going to change. She bought a red Metalica tee and tried it on...


message 46: by [deleted user] (new)

it looked good, so she stuck the blouse in her bag and met up wih larce


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
"You look more in the crowd now, butyou didnt have to change, babe" Larce said.


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
((wadya mean?))


Billy  Mays (Caitlin) | 546 comments Mod
"Thanks," she said like a girl when her crush was commenting her. Wait, wasn't her? And aren't all girls like that at one point in thier lives.


message 50: by [deleted user] (new)

he saw her confused look,"something wrong?"


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