Constructive Criticism!!! Hey, I can read, edit and offer advice on stories. :)

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lol!!

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hey crystal!

[ichigo_menthol]

OH MI GOSH!! THANKYOUUUUU!! I've been looking for someone who could give me constructive critism!! I have this story that is....pretty old now and there is just something not right with it.....I've already noticed a few bad things about it but I don't want to change it incase it's just me being paranoid....so please help! be as mean as you can! And pleaaaaseeee helpme!

I can't update it untilI know what's wrong with my writing....

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Thankyouuuuuuuuuuu! Forever and ever. (i am excpecting some harsh words, do not sugar coat, lady!)

[Shayne]

Here's my first story:) Thank you for your support! Enjoy and please don't be afraid to criticize!:)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

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Read mine please! Tell me what you think!

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http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

[Sarah]

I've got a story you might wanna read :)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

The Days Of Kelsea's



Demi Costello is heartbroken, frustrated and scared. She is living in a world of grief and horror.
Kelsea Richardson was her best friend. And three weeks ago, she went missing, leaving no trace or information.
Then Demi finds her diary. Of course the police want any evidence they can find, or anyone can find, but that diary is full of Kelsea's life, her hopes, her dreams, her hardships, and secrets.
Demi can't hand it in. Yet. She has to find out what happened first, before anyone else does.

In this story, we take a journey through two best friends' lives, written in two different formats - Kelsea's heart warming, breath taking diary enteries, filled with love, tenderness and sorrow. And Demi's flashbacks, and memories, of her time spent with her best friend.
And every step along the way, the reasons why become clearer . . .