The Hunger Games
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Mar 01, 2012 03:24PM
I think we should start a story that people can contribute to, like someone will start a sentence... and then someone else can continue off that sentence yeah know? I think we should keep it around a story line like hunger games. But maybe other suggestions would be good?
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Should we make new characters, or use the original characters from the book?
Create new ones. and it shouldnt be exactly like the hungere games.. but kinda like that? idk :P . or we can just start from scratch and just make a random story up lol
sounds like fun, i"ll startEvery day in District 12 starts the same, we go to school and end up spending all of our free time trying to find food for our families, but today was different.
Today the air was filled with danger, and that feeling that told us "something is wrong" didn't disappear in the whole day.
It all started when i woke up at 6:00am.
*SUGGESTION* we should copy and paste the entire story whenyou add on.
and then i saw the rabbit...
the rabbit means bad luck in my district, i got that sinking feeling in my stomach.
The fox ate the rabbit
The rabbit seemed like a bad omen. I got a sinking feeling in my stomach. Something bad was going to happen.
I tried to forget about it, maybe it was just a superstition. I started getting ready for school.
When i went down for breakfast i saw that my mother had cooked up some soil and leaf soup.
I gratefully poured myself a small bowl full. I took a sip of the bitter-sweet blend of ingredients.
I thought it was the worst stuff I had ever eaten, but Icontinued to eat it, when......
I heard the pitter patter of rain tapping against our weak roof. I looked up at the roof, expecting it to collapse any minute. Luckily it didn't. I was watching my sister Adonis walk to the kitchen when I heard a loud sound. As it grew louder I began....
...to look around, wondering what could make that sound. Like the rain... but louder; stronger. It viberated through the air.
I looked at my mother and at Adonis. Their eyes grew wider and wider as the sound grew stronger and stronger. Closer... I immediatly got up, and ran to the window. Sliding it open I peeked out of it and looked up at the sky. Then I saw the source of the noise.
Soldiers. Row apon row. Hundreds of them. The sound wasn't a booming, echoing thump, but thousands of booming, echoing thumps. They were walking through the streets, getting closer and closer to my house. To my family.
hugh hovercrafts were going flying over head and people were running bilistically around desperatly trying to get to there homes.
My sister ran over to me to see what I was looking at, and soon my mother joined us. Adonis straightened her back and tried to stand tall, but she was only eleven! Hear eyes turned red and she bit the inside of her left cheek like she always did when she was frightened. We all stayed calm on the outside, but we were frantically trying to figure out what to do to stay alive. I looked at Adonis, and I swore I saw a light bulb go off above her head. A plan had dawned on her. She opened her mouth to tell us her idea....
in which I told her it was awesome idea. So we..........
immediatly took action. As soon as the soldiers had surrounded our house, we heard a knock on the door. I squeezed my sister's hand. She looked at me and then...
bravley yet cautiously with Adonis in the lead we creeped over to the door, slowly. We were standing facing our old rotting wooden door when another louder and harder knock sounded. I took one last look at my mother and Adonis, giving her one last squeeze then i extended my long bony arm and twisted the broken door nob...
Pulling the door open I...
revealed a opening to another door that lead to place of safety or so I thought until I saw...........
something terrible..
huge bunnies with sharp teeth that began to chase us through a maze. I thought that it surely can't get worse. I stopped and for some reason prayed that we would get out of this situation. The next moment a door opened. We started for the door then.............
saw that behind it were the soldiers. We jumped backwards and ran the other way. My sister pushed through one wall of the hedge maze and continued doing so until...
we got to a dead end, she gave me an utter look of terror and that is when i made up my mind...i was going to
then i was shot and i died
but there was a flash of lightning and it struck me. I felt very groggy but got up slowly, and tried to run (it was really a stumble) through the storm...
um im pretty sure i just ended this story or what ever it is... its boring
Yes, but some other people might want to keep writing ;)
yes we do want to keep writing so please stop ending it
Ciara wrote: "but there was a flash of lightning and it struck me. I felt very groggy but got up slowly, and tried to run (it was really a stumble) through the storm..."ok lets start again from here
The rain paused for a moment. I kept going and going. Then the rain decided to start again, but when the small sprinkles landed on my skin, they burned like acid...
Danielle wrote: "yes we do want to keep writing so please stop ending it"no thanks;)
Maryam wrote: "Cassie wrote: "The rain paused for a moment. I kept going and going. Then the rain decided to start again, but when the small sprinkles landed on my skin, they burned like acid..."my skin began b..."
The dogs bore their teeth and stamped at the ground. They roared and raged, wicked red orbs of light flaring up in their eyes, suggesting war. My legs shook under me and no longer could support my weight, and I collapsed to the ground as another deafening crack of lightning went off.
painfully turning into dogs...i stare down in horror and my slowly mutating body, i scream in pain as my bones break and i turn into something else. an animal. i shrink to my knees and pray for death. but i am not answered. I lay there, writhing in agony, as the cold rain hits my burning face. Finally ... darkness
(Can i just say to "Julie" that you are a very rude person and if you are not interested in joining in these other people in having a bit of fun creating a story then don't come on the thread. Leave them alone and take your rudeness with you.)
Grace wrote: "painfully turning into dogs...i stare down in horror and my slowly mutating body, i scream in pain as my bones break and i turn into something else. an animal. i shrink to my knees and pray for d..."
just before i fall i see Adonis gaping at me while she herself quivers falling. With one last struggle the darkness finally cosumes me and then everything is black
and cold. I start to shiver uncontrollably and my teeth start to chatter. I look around wildly hoping to see some form of light, then
something comes up from behind and grabs my shoulder, i can feel sharp claws digging into my skin. As i go to turn my head
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