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message 1: by Grouphug (new)

Grouphug | 14 comments This is how it goes:
gonna try describe my state of mind
(how much of this isn't an exaggeration?)
please try and understand I have done this before and people have sung me lullabies, that came to nought
I‘m tired,
stuck in this groundhog day
(this is not a phrase, it will not go away)
need singing to ‘cause otherwise I’m tearing up inside
who wants to manage me?

Not scared of the dark.
More afraid of greeting a stranger. Facing the day all over again. I am scared of
The people in the street. Scared of the faces I watch in wonder. What relation am I to them?
I sit and wonder.
Will I ever be equal to them?
Will they step down one day.
Just show me.
I'm scared of the people.
Their faces I can't read.
Rushing around me. Their words, facial expressions.
Feel like shouting: will you look at me?
Some day you will.
Crowds will part like the miracle Moses performed with the sea.
People will stop in wonder.
They will take a look at me and see...
I'm a freak.
Your not who you used to be.
Are you kidding me?
There isn't no one like me. I'm unique.
Oh please.


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Jamesdean wrote: "This is how it goes:
gonna try describe my state of mind
(how much of this isn't an exaggeration?)
please try and understand I have done this before and people have sung me lullabies, that came ..."


pretty good


message 3: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ Cool! :)

lol, when I first read the title of this topic I thought it said "Ultimate freak porn" and I was like, "WHAT?!" but then I quickly realized what it actually said. >_< I have a dirty mind, I guess...


message 4: by Hala (new)

Hala (halanagi) | 5 comments its cool i loved it


message 5: by Lydia (new)

Lydia (somewhere-only-we-know) | 106 comments Brigid *Flying Kick-a-pow!* wrote: "Cool! :)

lol, when I first read the title of this topic I thought it said "Ultimate freak porn" and I was like, "WHAT?!" but then I quickly realized what it actually said. >_< I have a dirty mind,..."


Lol! xD


message 6: by Lynne (new)

Lynne weir | 27 comments quite strange but in a good way


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