This is the poem i wrote after i got my heart broken for first time, let me know what you think.
Shattered Pieces. 2.13.03 By: Jenia
I felt as someone stepped on my heart I never felt so alone, in my life You crushed me Shattering my heart, into pieces Ones I’ll never be able to pick up again.
I cherished you! I thought you did too I was wrong To think you were special
I truly thought you were The One, for me
You proved me wrong.
You were the first one I ever loved
Why did you have to hurt me this way? Did I mean anything to you? Or were that all lies?
You told me I was special That I was the first and only one, you love That we’ll get married, someday
I believed your lies But then... You crushed my heart
Do you have any idea, how long it took me? To get over, the pain You left inside of me?
I wanted to hate you, for what you done to me But no matter how hard I tried
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Shattered Pieces.
2.13.03
By: Jenia
I felt as someone stepped on my heart
I never felt so alone, in my life
You crushed me
Shattering my heart, into pieces
Ones I’ll never be able to pick up again.
I cherished you!
I thought you did too
I was wrong
To think you were special
I truly thought you were
The One, for me
You proved me wrong.
You were the first one
I ever loved
Why did you have to hurt me this way?
Did I mean anything to you?
Or were that all lies?
You told me I was special
That I was the first and only one, you love
That we’ll get married, someday
I believed your lies
But then...
You crushed my heart
Do you have any idea, how long it took me?
To get over, the pain
You left inside of me?
I wanted to hate you, for what you done to me
But no matter how hard I tried
I knew
That I’ll always, love you