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omg adi that story is SO awesome!! you're a great writer!!
what's slip about? is it realistic fiction??
shucks. im not a fan of science fiction and fantasy. well, i used to but my mood changed. so in about five minutes im gonna like fantasy again. :D

i'm actually totally rewriting it, but it has the same basic story line. just minus all the plot holes.
WHAT?! come on adi that was the best story ever!!!
plot holes? im confuzzled. what're PLOT HOLES??! please dont say thats the whole freakin book.
plot holes? im confuzzled. what're PLOT HOLES??! please dont say thats the whole freakin book.
In the meantime, would you mind reading http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
I'm really proud of it, so I would really love it if I could get some reviews.
Thank you!