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message 1: by adi (new)

adi (restartaugust) | 125 comments Hey guys! It's me again. I just wanted to let you all know that i'm in the process of writing Slip. It's a little bit different, but still has the same idea so don't worry. There shall be no more plot holes!

In the meantime, would you mind reading http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
I'm really proud of it, so I would really love it if I could get some reviews.

Thank you!


message 2: by Morgan (last edited Nov 23, 2008 07:07PM) (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 181 comments YAY, YOU'RE WRITING IT AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've missed that story!!!!


message 3: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
me too


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

omg adi that story is SO awesome!! you're a great writer!!


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

what's slip about? is it realistic fiction??


message 6: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
...If I remember correctly, it has something to do with vampires.


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

shucks. im not a fan of science fiction and fantasy. well, i used to but my mood changed. so in about five minutes im gonna like fantasy again. :D


message 8: by adi (new)

adi (restartaugust) | 125 comments yeah it's a weird dystopian future vampire type thing.


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

where's the link?


message 10: by adi (new)

adi (restartaugust) | 125 comments i see you found it :)
i'm actually totally rewriting it, but it has the same basic story line. just minus all the plot holes.


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

WHAT?! come on adi that was the best story ever!!!

plot holes? im confuzzled. what're PLOT HOLES??! please dont say thats the whole freakin book.


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