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message 1: by Clare D' Lune (new)

Clare D' Lune You have until Saturday afternoon to post a poem on here before the Topic changes. Please post it directly onto this topic, rather than posting a link. You're welcome to discuss poems on here also.

This week's Topic is Star. If anyone has any objections to this topic, please go to the Poetry Topic Objections post.

Poems can be as long and short as you want them to be. This is not a contest, it's just for fun and to show off our own poetry.

message 2: by [deleted user] (new)


Sparkle, Sparkle
Twinkle, Twinkle
Shine so bright
Live so high
Standing out
In the dark
Inky black surrounds

Swirling Twirling
All around
In your own galaxy
You just fly
Passing by
Standing out
To all

Jump so far
Aim so high
Up above
To it all
Don’t forget
You are my
Little star

message 3: by Eric▲ (new)

Eric▲ | 38 comments STARS

Up in the night time sky,
thousands of lights fill my eye.

More than anyone can number,
and trying to just got dumber.

Giving us a glimpse of the vast unknown,
amazed at the speck of space we own.

Once thought as patternles specks,
now seen as animals or ship wrecks.

They make one wonder how
they got where they are now.

When asked "The stars are from where?"
I respond "God simply put them there!"

message 4: by Clare D' Lune (new)

Clare D' Lune cool!!!

message 5: by Eric▲ (new)

Eric▲ | 38 comments thank you!

message 6: by Clare D' Lune (new)

Clare D' Lune Twinkle twinkle, little star,
In my lover's eye.
Shines so bright,
Sucks me deep,
So far, that I'll die!

Kiss me, love! Make me whole,
Love me as I love you.
Hold me tight,
I love you so,
Say you love me too!

message 7: by A Filthy Youth groupie (last edited Nov 02, 2008 04:43PM) (new)

A Filthy Youth groupie | 28 comments Stars

I wanna be a star
I'll play the guitar
Stars get a ton of power
But sometimes fame is sour

Many stars live in Hollywood
And that is easily understood
I want to live there too
Instead of living in a zoo.

A Filthy Youth groupie | 28 comments I love your guys's poems!

message 9: by Carmela (new)

Carmela (heyohitscarm) Silver light,
Brilliant light,
shinning down,
throught-out the night.

Scattered here,
scattered there,
Stars follow you,
Every where!

message 10: by Arthur, Live a little Give a lot (new)

Arthur | 554 comments Mod
That's definitely alright!

message 11: by ♥Hannah♥ (new)

♥Hannah♥ ♥Roxie♥ (rox-ie) | 4 comments Shining Brightly through the trees,
I can see a world far away...
A world of stars, scattered throughout the sky.
I often fly from here to there,
So i can see the stars everywhere.
They sparkled like diamonds,
on that engagement ring.
They make me so happy i could sing,
Sing that ol' song,
And listen to the children sing along.
Then soon all is quiet again,
The breeze is blowing through my hair,
And my eyes grow week and weary,
And asleep I fall,
Under the stars, that sing to all...

wow that sucked...haha

message 12: by Clare D' Lune (new)

Clare D' Lune w/e! WICKED!

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