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Issaaabella savill | 1 comments http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
please read read pleaseeeeeeeeeee


message 2: by Daniela-Goddess of Reading (last edited Nov 18, 2011 09:13AM) (new)

Daniela-Goddess of Reading | 16 comments Mod
I love you way Izabelle character is pro played, like the way you make her seem more real. I found myself laughing at times, especially at the end.

"Sighing as I stepped up to the ticket area I thought of how ridiculously low the payment was $0.60c! What did they think I was poor or something?"
-Izabelle World-Nothing Else Matters-One

I love that part. I laughed out in BIM class, when I read that and everybody was looking at me.
:D


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