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A little poem I came up with out of nowhere yesterday. :)

She's falling away
She won't tell a soul.
I want to relay
That we were a whole.

She's lost in the depths
She's not coming back.
She's about to snap-
We can't glue her back.

Who is the devil
That made her so mellow?
Who is the devil
That turned her heart black?
Who is the devil
That lost me a friend?

Doesn't he know that now she is dead?

RIP Freya


Firestormkittycat Wow, you're really good!!! If you write more I wanna read it!!!


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