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message 1: by ♠ TABI⁷ ♠ (last edited Nov 10, 2011 10:27AM) (new)

♠ TABI⁷ ♠ (tabi_card) Ok, so I've finally gotten some of my stories on this site. I'd like to get y'all's opinion on them, ideas, editing tips, and etc.
My stories so far are:
'Duel' http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
'A Guava's Life' http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
'Jamie Bycarne'http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2..., and,
'Spring Daughter'. http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
The first three are short stories, and 'Spring Daughter is a novel I'm working on, and I've put the first four chapters up.
So, if you'd take the time to read them, comment and/or give suggestions, I'd be SUPREMELY grateful.


message 2: by Jen (new)

Jen | 154 comments Could you please post a link to each of your stories so that it is easier to find them. I would love to read them and give you feedback, but for some reason when I searched the writing I could not find the stories. Thanks:)


♠ TABI⁷ ♠ (tabi_card) Ah, yes, thank you for mentioning that. Will do. ;)


♠ TABI⁷ ♠ (tabi_card) Jen*Jello Monster* wrote: "Could you please post a link to each of your stories so that it is easier to find them. I would love to read them and give you feedback, but for some reason when I searched the writing I could not ..."

There you go! :)


message 5: by Jen (new)

Jen | 154 comments Thanks! I have read and commented on your first two stories- I really liked them, good job! I will read the other two either later or tomorrow. Keep writing!


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