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message 1: by Allie, You make me happy whether you know it or not (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) | 13023 comments Mod
scaary


message 2: by Anoleflash (new)

Anoleflash | 4545 comments :)


message 3: by Annie/Soul, Soul sayz "Ignore my creator; she’s delusional.” (new)

Annie/Soul | 8852 comments Mod
CCOOOL!
I'm kind of saving most of my poems for songs for Musickit...But here's one I was planning for her to say in the future.


message 4: by Annie/Soul, Soul sayz "Ignore my creator; she’s delusional.” (last edited Oct 17, 2008 06:36PM) (new)

Annie/Soul | 8852 comments Mod
It was for after a battle and some cats had died.


Slumber through twilight, sleep through the dawn,
Bright in our memory from first light each morn,
Rest through the winter beneath the soft snow,
And in the spring, when bright blossoms show.
Warriors brave, who gave all you could give,
Offered their lives so that others could live
No one can tell what my heart longed to say,
When they had to leave here. And I had to stay.


Like it? And if you don't how should I improve it?


message 5: by Allie, You make me happy whether you know it or not (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) | 13023 comments Mod
oh i love it! it sounds kinda like a prayer... now i want to think of a poem...


message 6: by Keyanah, "Hold me together. Be forever near me, breath of Heaven." (new)

Keyanah (drizzleherb-peacelover) | 7333 comments Mod
I......LOVE.....IT!!!!!!


message 7: by Willowmist, Bankai, Daiguren Hyōurinmaru! Willow come back! (new)

Willowmist | 7835 comments Mod
omg AWESOMENESS annie!!! :D


message 8: by Annie/Soul, Soul sayz "Ignore my creator; she’s delusional.” (new)

Annie/Soul | 8852 comments Mod
*blushes* Thanks! I have others...But I kind of saving them up right now.


message 9: by Lami (new)

Lami | 2797 comments IT RHYMS! I love it Annie! your such a good writer!


message 10: by Anoleflash (new)

Anoleflash | 4545 comments Breezes blowing,
Rivers flowing,
Older cats leaving,
And young cats growing.
Slowing, slowing,
Leaving, loving,
Growing, going, away.

Something that Waterkit/Waterpaw/Watersoul sings after listening to Musickit. When Lemonkit dies.


message 11: by Willowmist, Bankai, Daiguren Hyōurinmaru! Willow come back! (new)

Willowmist | 7835 comments Mod
awesomeness!! :D


message 12: by Anoleflash (new)

Anoleflash | 4545 comments Thankses.


message 13: by Allie, You make me happy whether you know it or not (last edited Oct 19, 2008 12:16PM) (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) | 13023 comments Mod
this isn't exactly for the roleplay or warriors...but it's a poem that i wrote---
I see you there
Girl in blue
Do you see me too?
Why are you sad
Girl in blue
Whatever has happened to you?
A face of an angel
Girl in blue
But is that a devil too?
Such feelings clashing
Girl in blue
Oh what have you been through?
Girl in blue
Oh Girl in blue
I see you in the mirror
But who are you?


message 14: by Susie/Ashmoon (new)

Susie/Ashmoon (snicolaysen18) | 6702 comments HI ALLIE!! I LOVE IT!


message 15: by Allie, You make me happy whether you know it or not (last edited Oct 19, 2008 12:18PM) (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) | 13023 comments Mod
omg hi!!! and thx!!!!


message 16: by Susie/Ashmoon (new)

Susie/Ashmoon (snicolaysen18) | 6702 comments Haha...lol


message 17: by Allie, You make me happy whether you know it or not (last edited Oct 19, 2008 12:18PM) (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) | 13023 comments Mod
hihi...rp?


message 18: by Susie/Ashmoon (new)

Susie/Ashmoon (snicolaysen18) | 6702 comments Sures!


message 19: by Allie, You make me happy whether you know it or not (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) | 13023 comments Mod
k!


message 20: by Tanglesky (last edited Oct 20, 2008 02:47PM) (new)

Tanglesky darkness falls,
cats lay,
bodies ruined,
spirits astray.

few lived,
many died,
battle spoke,
tranquility lied.

the dawn is bloody,
the future black,
evil has taken many souls,
there's no turning back.

there's worse than death,
lives lay in ruin,
repentance found them,
all to soon.

we need to leave,
the scene is wrong,
the time is right,
we've waited long.





message 21: by Keyanah, "Hold me together. Be forever near me, breath of Heaven." (new)

Keyanah (drizzleherb-peacelover) | 7333 comments Mod
Cool poem! I stink at poetry!


message 22: by Allie, You make me happy whether you know it or not (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) | 13023 comments Mod
that's really good...


message 23: by Susie/Ashmoon (new)

Susie/Ashmoon (snicolaysen18) | 6702 comments It is!


message 24: by Tanglesky (new)

Tanglesky thanx! I have to go! bdw, Lilycloud is from fireclan, she ran away after the battle. She abandoned her kits because she almost saw them die, and she already lost a whole litter wen she was a loner!


message 25: by Lami (new)

Lami | 2797 comments wowies......*gazez at all the poems i could never write*


message 26: by Willowmist, Bankai, Daiguren Hyōurinmaru! Willow come back! (new)

Willowmist | 7835 comments Mod
xD awesome poems!! yay!!


message 27: by Anoleflash (new)

Anoleflash | 4545 comments I really need feedback on this poem!!!


message 28: by Nicole (new)

Nicole (NicoleChoi) | 38 comments I sort've just made this up at this instant...

Rawr! The cry of battle is signaled.
Boom, shake, Rumble.
The sound of paws answer.
Clans clash, sometimes together.
Cats die, while warriors are born.
Some lifes end and some begin.
But all are hurt, with some to starclan.
Some mourn, but never cry.
While others celebrate,
a vicious victory.

Do you like it? Its free verse.


message 29: by Silver (new)

Silver cool :)

The Seasons

Snow is melting,
Colors changing,
Greens and yellow,
Pink and purple,
Flowers blooming,
Apple blossoms,
Faces glowing,
Baby chipmunks,
Spring time is here.

It does not last,
Seasons change,
Better or worse,
Circle of life.

The sun is hot,
School is over,
Multiplied bugs,
Mosquitoes bite,
Swimming lessons,
Independence,
Vacation time,
Go to the beach,
Shopping for school…

It does not last,
Seasons change,
Better or worse,
Circle of life.

Leaves are falling,
Winds are blowing,
Colder, colder,
Jumping, digging,
Through leaf piles,
Brown and golden,
Red, Orange, Yellow,
School has started,
Homework is back.

It does not last,
Seasons change,
Better or worse,
Circle of life.

The first snowflake,
Leads to the fun,
Sledding, snowmen,
Soft, warm blankets,
Hot chocolate,
Warm winter clothes,
Nice holidays,
Visiting friends,
And family.

Even winter,
Though it seems long,
Cannot stay now,
It must move on,
To start again.
Circle of life.




message 30: by Nicole (last edited Nov 14, 2008 04:22PM) (new)

Nicole (NicoleChoi) | 38 comments Thanks. Thats really good!
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message 31: by Annie/Soul, Soul sayz "Ignore my creator; she’s delusional.” (new)

Annie/Soul | 8852 comments Mod
Pretty long! I like it!


message 32: by Annie/Soul, Soul sayz "Ignore my creator; she’s delusional.” (new)

Annie/Soul | 8852 comments Mod
Here's a funny one I wrote up, It's a small ditty I have for Musickit:

If I were a leaf upon a tree,
I would live quite happily,
I’d grow up flat and green and big,
Unless of course I was a twig,
A twig with a leaf open its end,
And then the leaf would be my friend,
I’d grow to such a wondrous length,
And from the branch I’d take my strength.
If I were a branch open a tree,
With leaf and twig for company,
I’d grow so round and fair and trim,
Sprouting from a great stout limb,
But if I were a limb all think and wide,
Branch twig and leaf I’d hold with pride,
And they would all depend on me,
And the mighty trunk of my big tree.
Then if I were a tree with bark for husk,
I’d stand up firm from dawn ‘til dusk,
And limb branch twig and leaf would be,
All through the season part of me!



message 33: by Keyanah, "Hold me together. Be forever near me, breath of Heaven." (last edited Nov 14, 2008 06:44PM) (new)

Keyanah (drizzleherb-peacelover) | 7333 comments Mod
Cool, Annie!

I got one that could work for this group!

Red
Orange
Yellow
Green
Blue
Indigo
Violet
Warriors wake to the stop of the rain
They look into the sky
To see the color of gray the same
And never they question why
But slowly as they look away,
The colors start to change.
A signal to the medicine cat of the danger on the way
For a prophecy was given to her moon and moons ago
That they would be attacked by who? they did now know
When they would be attacked, it said
When the sky was colored
Violet
Indigo
Blue
Green
Yellow
Orange
And Red


This is, like, the ONLY good, serious poem I've written!


message 34: by Nicole (new)

Nicole (NicoleChoi) | 38 comments Heres another one, it could be related to warriors...

They gathered
While the moonlight shone
to talk for enternity

Do ya like it?


message 35: by Anoleflash (new)

Anoleflash | 4545 comments Night is falling,
When evil cats are crawling,
Waiting to pounce.
Dawn is coming,
A battle is begining.
Tooth and claw,
Kits stare in awe,
ecxept for the medicine cat,
and her looks of horror.


message 36: by Silver (new)

Silver If I were a leaf upon a tree,
I would live quite happily,
I’d grow up flat and green and big,
Unless of course I was a twig,
A twig with a leaf open its end,
And then the leaf would be my friend,
I’d grow to such a wondrous length,
And from the branch I’d take my strength.
If I were a branch open a tree,
With leaf and twig for company,
I’d grow so round and fair and trim,
Sprouting from a great stout limb,
But if I were a limb all think and wide,
Branch twig and leaf I’d hold with pride,
And they would all depend on me,
And the mighty trunk of my big tree.
Then if I were a tree with bark for husk,
I’d stand up firm from dawn ‘til dusk,
And limb branch twig and leaf would be,
All through the season part of me!
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I like it, Annie! of course, as soon as I saw it I immediately put it to the tune of "if I were a butterfly" :)


message 37: by Keyanah, "Hold me together. Be forever near me, breath of Heaven." (new)

Keyanah (drizzleherb-peacelover) | 7333 comments Mod
What about mine? *pouts*


message 38: by Silver (new)

Silver I like yours too :)



message 39: by Keyanah, "Hold me together. Be forever near me, breath of Heaven." (new)

Keyanah (drizzleherb-peacelover) | 7333 comments Mod
Yay!


message 40: by Keyanah, "Hold me together. Be forever near me, breath of Heaven." (new)

Keyanah (drizzleherb-peacelover) | 7333 comments Mod
I like yours, with the seasons, too!


message 41: by Silver (new)

Silver Yay :)


Oh great now I have "If I were a butterfly" stuck in my head... My sister had to memorize it in the summer.


message 42: by Nicole (new)

Nicole (NicoleChoi) | 38 comments Here's another one!
(i made it up)

Peace
a powerful word
Peace
when friendships are allowed
Peace
a wish that has been granted
Peace
is Love
Peace
bans war
Peace
restores laughter
Peace
a hope for Me





message 43: by Swiftfire (new)

Swiftfire I LOVE IT! only sad.............


message 44: by Nicole (new)

Nicole (NicoleChoi) | 38 comments Yeah.... THANKS though! Well, here's a happy one to cheer everybody UP!! :)

Two kits playing
happily in the sun.
Two kits chasing
a butterfly.
Two kits
having fun.

Like it?


message 45: by Swiftfire (new)

Swiftfire YAY HAPPYER!


message 46: by Nicole (new)

Nicole (NicoleChoi) | 38 comments YAY!!!
BRB


message 47: by Oceanwaves, Chew gum for Oceanwaves Stay Active Mission (new)

Oceanwaves (oceanwavesheartsoul) | 8408 comments Mod
Sweet, Nicole! The kit one was cute!


message 48: by Nicole (new)

Nicole (NicoleChoi) | 38 comments THANKS!!!!!!! :) *hug*


message 49: by Oceanwaves, Chew gum for Oceanwaves Stay Active Mission (new)

Oceanwaves (oceanwavesheartsoul) | 8408 comments Mod
Your welcome! *cyber hug back*


message 50: by Tanglesky (last edited Dec 13, 2008 06:55PM) (new)

Tanglesky A poem for the enemy:

Evil enters souls
Driving them to limits
Twisting their faith
And making them kill
Leaving them
Stripped of life
Bleeding love
Yet trying to fight
Fight the darkness
But they will give up
Never rising
Because of those dead
The blood is on their paws
And they embrace it
Even now
In the shadows
They've lost it all
And they kill to live
To live in torment
Even now
They cannot rest
And there they lie
Never wishing for another chance
Being brave
As they die to serve many
That they killed
For themselves
And now they rest
In pain forever.





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