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message 1: by Breeana (new)

Breeana (breeana_puttroff) | 17 comments Here is a link to the first three chapters of a novel I'm working on. Chapter four isn't finished yet, although several later chapters are. :) Would love feedback, questions, and ideas!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/5...


message 2: by Breeana (new)

Breeana (breeana_puttroff) | 17 comments Wow! That was a fast response. :)


message 3: by Sam (new)

Sam | 9 comments Just finished chapter one and I have to say, I really enjoyed it. The situations were realistic the characters were distinct and had individual personalities. I like how you described them, just enough to make your point, yet, left enough room for the readers imagination. The only thing that gave me pause was the name of the town. Is this a real place? If not, perhaps shortening it to Bristle? Idk, just something I was thinking about. Great work :)


message 4: by Breeana (new)

Breeana (breeana_puttroff) | 17 comments Thanks so much Sam. :) It's fun to have someone read it.


message 5: by Sam (new)

Sam | 9 comments You're welcome! :)


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