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Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 94 comments Name: Lieutenant Richard J. Wheeler
Appearence:
Age: 29
What You Know About The Character So Far: Richard Wheeler was born in 1984 in New York City to a Navy Lieutenant and a marine sniper. At age 18, he enlisted in the ROTC program at Syracuse University. On September 12th, 2011, wheeler parachuted into Iraq and joined the JSOC task force in charge of tracking down Saddam Huessien. He drops off the map at this point, working mostly black-ops projects. Three years later, he reappears when he is selected for a job at a clandistine governemnt agency(MAD) that specializes in assassinations. He carried out twenty-three confirmed kills and three suspected kills before dropping off the map. He is a suspected serial killer with five kills to his cause.
Where you think the character will end up: He will either get captured or killed by the protagonist, Jonathan Bell.
I need help with: Character flaws, qualities, stuff like that.


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Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments IT'S FRODO!


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Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments Or Elijah Wood. Whichever you prefer.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 94 comments Frodo is awesome. and now he's a serial killer.


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Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments Smeagol is the serial killer. Get it right.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 94 comments But Smeagol would be hard to spell all the time.


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Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments No it wouldn't. Smeagol. Only 7 letters.


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Perhaps one of his childhood dreams was to deal cards at a Casino in Las Vegas.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 94 comments Ohh, that's a good one.

I also need an MO, a modus operandi for this whack job. Any ideas?


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How gross do you want it to be? I have a sick mind.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 94 comments As gross as you want. Have some fun. make this guy a sicko. :)


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Whenever he kills someone, he cuts them open and performs a bit of an autopsy on them. When he is finished he takes out their organs and places them in various places around the house. He then lays them in their bathtub (if they have one), which is full of their blood.

Perhaps he only kills people who have bathtubs.


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Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments You're so sick.


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Chrysanta Greene | 31 comments My God. I feel like I need to read a children's book now...


message 16: by Mitch (new)

Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments Cassie tends to have that affect on people.


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Chrysanta Greene | 31 comments You mean the I-feel-like-I've-died-a-little-inside-and-want-to-curl-up-in-a-corner-and-never-leave-again-affect?


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Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments yeah.


message 19: by Chrysanta (new)

Chrysanta Greene | 31 comments I see that now.


message 20: by Mitch (new)

Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments Well, she did say she has a sick mind.


message 21: by Chrysanta (new)

Chrysanta Greene | 31 comments Remind me to take her seriously next time. Please.


message 22: by Mitch (new)

Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments I will. I know from experience.


message 23: by Chrysanta (new)

Chrysanta Greene | 31 comments I can tell O.O My sympathy goes out to you.


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Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments Thanks.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 94 comments Chrysanta wrote: "My God. I feel like I need to read a children's book now..."

Oh man, I wish this site had a like button. I would have clicked it like a billion times.

SKitts/Cassie [swimming through sick lullabies] wrote: "Whenever he kills someone, he cuts them open and performs a bit of an autopsy on them. When he is finished he takes out their organs and places them in various places around the house. He then lays..."

I think I may need a cold shower after reading that. Yikes.


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Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments Jordan [Just another brick in the wall] wrote: "Chrysanta wrote: "My God. I feel like I need to read a children's book now..."

Oh man, I wish this site had a like button. I would have clicked it like a billion times.

SKitts/Cassie [swimmin..."


I told you I have a sick mind.


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Jordan [Just another brick in the wall] wrote: "Chrysanta wrote: "My God. I feel like I need to read a children's book now..."

Oh man, I wish this site had a like button. I would have clicked it like a billion times.

SKitts/Cassie [swimmin..."


I can tone it down a bit if you like.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 94 comments No, that's...that's perfect.


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Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments *snorts*


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RedPath | 562 comments So...do you still need help?


message 31: by Mitch (new)

Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments Or did Cassie just make you want to stop writing about this guy altogether?


message 32: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 562 comments *like*


message 33: by Mitch (new)

Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments *bows*


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I'm good at making scary/disturbing characters.


message 35: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 562 comments No, really?


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*beams*


message 38: by Mitch (new)

Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments *whispering to RedPath and Jordan* Run away, she's crazy. She eats people's faces.


message 39: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 562 comments I know T-T


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I LOVE FACES.

They be yummeh..


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Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments Oh wow.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 94 comments Mitch. Nice profile pic.


message 43: by Mitch (new)

Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments Fits my personality, doesn't it?


message 44: by Mitch (new)

Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments FRODO YOU KEEP PSYCHING ME OUT


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 94 comments hehehe.

Mitch, I keep looking at your profile pic and thinking it's Winnie the Pooh for some reason. It's sorta freaking me out.


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XD


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Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) wrote: "hehehe.

Mitch, I keep looking at your profile pic and thinking it's Winnie the Pooh for some reason. It's sorta freaking me out."


DUDE. YOUR PROFILE PIC.

That episode was terrifying.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 94 comments I KNOW.
I love that episode. It's one of my favorites.


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It makes me freak out whenever I see an angel statue.


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Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) wrote: "I KNOW.
I love that episode. It's one of my favorites."


Dr. Who is one of the scariest shows I know of.


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