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message 1: by Sammy, I think you're awesome! (new)

Sammy (IreneAdler) | 968 comments Mod
Post your poetry here.


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umm


message 3: by Sammy, I think you're awesome! (last edited Jul 06, 2011 03:05PM) (new)

Sammy (IreneAdler) | 968 comments Mod
Didn't you post the link to one in the future writers group? I really liked it :P


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

really?


message 5: by Sammy, I think you're awesome! (new)

Sammy (IreneAdler) | 968 comments Mod
Yeah! It was awesome. I liked how it was really meaningful and you made it rhyme without letting it sound weird like my poem I wrote about you!


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Thanks! :P


message 7: by Ruth (new)

Ruth (ruthgibson) | 23 comments I have one... but I wrote it down on paper and that bit of paper is allllllllll the long way up 13 steps! so I might post it at some point but it's not very good :/


message 8: by Katie (new)

Katie | 221 comments Mod
I posted some poetry on my profile... but its mostly kinda sad. I mostly write when I'm upset


Jeanna-Has Probably Read It! (j3j3real) I have a few poems/blog posts on my profile...Everyone is more than welcome to read. Here is my latest poem though.

Unsure

Boy likes girl.

Girl sorta likes boy.

Boy shows interest in girl.

Girl gets scared and tries to push boy away.

She's curious about boy but doesn't think she should let her heart out to play.

Boy attempts to draw girl out of shell.

But this makes girl act like this boy smells.

See what this boy does not know is that this girl has been hurt one time too many.

And just the thought of another heartbreak could send this girl's world a spinning.

Instead girl hides out and makes excuses not to see boy

and boy starts to see that and becomes annoyed.

Eventually girl makes boy not interested anymore so doesn't phone.

and girl is okay with that because all she has ever been is ALONE.

Did she really just miss out on love?

Girl always wonders should she have seen if he fit her like a glove.

But she would never know if he was the man

Because she never could give him a chance.


message 10: by Sammy, I think you're awesome! (last edited Jul 09, 2011 05:51AM) (new)

Sammy (IreneAdler) | 968 comments Mod
I REALLY like that!!!!!!!! :D It's really awesome how you used the words girl and boy like names.


Jeanna-Has Probably Read It! (j3j3real) Thank you so much Sammy. I have more under my profile that I would love for someone to read. I'm hoping that one day I can put all of my daily rambilings together. Who knows maybe I'll put them in a book of some sort.


message 12: by Sammy, I think you're awesome! (new)

Sammy (IreneAdler) | 968 comments Mod
You're welcome! Are your daily ramblings under your writing?


Jeanna-Has Probably Read It! (j3j3real) Yes, they are. I also have a blog site I use under www.thoughts.com J3J3Real is the name but everything I have there I put it out here. :)


message 14: by Ruth (new)

Ruth (ruthgibson) | 23 comments This is one I wrote. Its kind of long.

There once was a girl
with flaming red hair.
He heart, it was broken,
broken beyond all repair.

there once was a boy,
19, as young as that.
he broke her heart, oh so bad
guilt was all he felt.

He went away one day,
to fight the war, the war of the day.
he went so far so far away,
to fight for his country, his homeland, his way.

The girl was at home,
Feeling so sad, so alone.
With her love so far away,
did she really want to stay?

Her letters kept him going,
with out her even knowing,
that he loved her so much,
hoe he wanted there to be an "us".

return did he not,
in no way, shape, or form.
the girl did she cry.
his soul far far gone.

No time for Love,
for marriage, for kids.
their love, it was a secret,
not even one kiss.

Sad it was, for her poor broken heart,
so sad living was really rather bad.
she got a gun and pulled the trigger,
the join her love. be united forever.


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

I LOVE POETRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Afterwards (6/18/11)

The skies darken
with the approaching storm
As rolling clouds consume the sky
Angrily throwing lightening down to the earth
The rain comes next
Pounding the trees
And the animals in them
Tossing the lives around
Unaware of their fragile nature.
But as the winds sweep over the fields and the forests
A sense of calm befalls
As the rain abates
And the thunder slows
Leaving destruction behind
So new life can grow in it's place

- Samino Chene

((From our other group))


message 16: by Ruth (new)

Ruth (ruthgibson) | 23 comments Samino wrote: "I LOVE POETRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Afterwards (6/18/11)

The skies darken
with the approaching storm
As rolling clouds consume the sky
Angrily throwing lightenin..."


Trying to work out if this is metaphorical. :/


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

Wait what?


Jeanna-Has Probably Read It! (j3j3real) Samino wrote: "I LOVE POETRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Afterwards (6/18/11)

The skies darken
with the approaching storm
As rolling clouds consume the sky
Angrily throwing lightenin..."


I likey. Good job.


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

Pessimistic... my poems are geared towards nature and junk.


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

my poems are normally about nature, and then every now and again you'll come across one in my poem note book that is completely random :P


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

I like random poems. Like ones about THG.


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