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message 1: by Fault In Our Stars (last edited Jun 28, 2011 12:58AM) (new)

Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) (no name)

Darkness is washing over me
As i sink into a Shadowland
It's Evernight in a place with no key
In this kingdom the living are band

Everlasting flame is so dark
Wishing for stars burn bright
I linger near hope that is light
Wishing for the blue sky with larks

Forgiven for my mistakes of yesterday
Yet i'm never going Home or going Away

By Sammi G.


message 2: by Fault In Our Stars (last edited Jun 28, 2011 12:58AM) (new)

Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) (no name)

Their souls to steal, to take
Hushed into silence so loud
kingdom of dusk and twilight
screams in yesterdays wake

A dark flame is the only light
Kept in their souls secrets
Before their kings they bowed
They must pay for love, a life dept

Evermore a slave to the kings
Thier stories and lives ending

By Sammi G.


message 3: by Fault In Our Stars (last edited Jun 28, 2011 12:59AM) (new)

Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) (no name)

Darkness is washing over me
they have forgiven me
my kingdom of the sky awaits
this place holds me in
this place of Evernight
no moon no stars no light
i keep the enternal dark flame for sanity
It Is My
Salvation
this Hunger keeps me Here
Waiting for
Something
Someone
Anything

By Sammi G.


message 4: by Fault In Our Stars (last edited Jun 28, 2011 12:59AM) (new)

Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Fast Forward

A voice
of sweet purity
her love not yet tainted
a voice with an owner that
has not known Hate
I spill teardrops
for her Her voice will AGE
the Hate seeped in deep
to her exsistance to her soul
that Others will take
And the stars
will countine to burn
Evermore

By Sammi G.


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Taking Chances

My reflection is
glimmering in the Glass
Tempted to Change
my heart Untamed
i am Destined for More
or Less
i awaken myself
to see

By Sammi G.


message 6: by Fault In Our Stars (last edited Jun 28, 2011 01:10AM) (new)

Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Who i Am

i am
the huntress
the princess
the guardian
the angel
one who is uncorperated
by greed
anger
hate
tainted love
my fear is a gift
my love is for all
my surrender will never come
or be given to darkness
it will become me if i do
i once was
the huntress
the princess
the guardian
the angel
my status is gone
but that's what I'll be
Evermore

By Sammi G.


message 7: by Fault In Our Stars (last edited Jun 28, 2011 01:15AM) (new)

Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Bleeding Inside

infinite nights
stolen hours
borrowed time
hourglass tipped
devine intervention
everafter changed
memories lost
pictures faded
ties frayed
unnatural
she is everlost
not to be found
soul is gone
she is bleeding
from inside
bleeding silver
blood the color
of frost
shiny unnatural
ice

By Sammi G.


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) anyone wanna comment? but, nobody will probably.....*sigh*.....


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Siren

Sirensong
goes through the air
her voice sweet
her music stolen
from anothers mind
a beautiful song
dark devine
soul songs
passion
put to words
in a lament
a tune stolen by
a Siren Girl
with a Kiss
you'll never remember

By Sammi G.


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) (no name)

A world away
distain in time
truth twisted
love throtled
misguided by all
i missed it all
my bad habit hidden
keeps me thrown in dark

By Sammi G.


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Memmories

I remember
when the days were long
with childish fits
trying to show dignity
then the summers ending
the cold air
you were so condesending
this is all that's left
empty bottles and spent cigerettes
need to let it all go

By Sammi G.


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) What I Want

Turn to you
push and pulling
me down to you
But, i don't know
what i want
had to stop myself
from saying something
should of never thought
you got it
your not the one i believe in
not in my heart
his name echo in my heart
I now know what I want

By Sammi G.


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Take A Fall

Got a whole lot left to say
trying to hard you froze
i know
what do you say
just take a fall
your going to be one of us
the Spotlight is on
one thing your fighting to hold
be the one thing you got to let go
when you feel the law
cannot be done going to die to try
cause you don't care
is there nothing like that
inside of you anywhere
cause every one would
rather watch you fall
then see you win

By Sammi G.


message 14: by Kübra ℂ⋆ (new)

Kübra ℂ⋆  (khadija_kubraa) Wow!!!! I like Bleeding in Love......its soo depressing but you really want to keep going at the same time...........kinda like little stories


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) thanks!!


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Secrets

Secrets, forever
Truth to myself
Love to give
Mine, mine forever
What is there left?
To me, myself, and you
No one but me
No more lies to you
To me
Myself
All of it gone
To you.

By Sammi G.


message 17: by Kübra ℂ⋆ (new)

Kübra ℂ⋆  (khadija_kubraa) Confusing but interesting....nice!!


message 18: by Fault In Our Stars (last edited Jun 28, 2011 02:21AM) (new)

Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Ascent, Descent

To see
to feel
to no one
to me
once we see
how to be free
the ascent will beckon
with the promise of love
as the descent beckoned
with a promise of power.

By Sammi G.


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Tomorrow

To you, to me, to anyone
who can see this,
to those who know tomorrow
is never a promise
but love with no regret,
to us with a single
thing in common.

By Sammi G.


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) two more poems....


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh goodness. Don't expect me to read all of them. There are so many of them.


message 22: by Fault In Our Stars (last edited Jun 28, 2011 04:46AM) (new)

Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) 16. there are 16.

but, are the ones you read good?


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

Beautiful.


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Thanks so much!!! You just brightin up my day!!!


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

You're welcome. :D


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) :) it's midnight! So you just brightin up my yesterday and today!!


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

lol. I have to go. Where I live, it's almost time to get going to my last half day of school. My ELA class is having a party, and I have to pick up some food for it.


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) kk! have fun!!


message 29: by Rebecca (new)

Rebecca There really good Sammi :D


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) thanks....


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) (No Name)

They have not forgiven my mistakes
My kingdom looks to the stars
Seasons they steal and they take
The blue sky so far

In Darkness they left me
In this place with no sun nor moon
A place they locked with no key
I hope for rain a monsoon

To bring me back to life
To take away all the strife

By Sammi


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) i'll add a few more a little later


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) (no name)

All that I'm after
Is my love ever after
And I hope I'll be
Laughing in the end with you
All that still matters
To me is you
My heart and yours
Is at risk
And it's not your fault
But mine
And it's your heart on
The line now
I really fucked all of it
Up this time
Didn't I?


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) ((inspired by The Sky Is Everywhere by Jandy Nelson))
((no name))

Everywhere I look is pain
It's forever, isn't it?
It seems like once every never
Something doesn't fall apart
But every second something does
Some people let you forget
Others tell you to remember
I think both options are shit
In there own ways
It's silly how foolish we are with time
How oblivious and stupid we can be in the name of others
Mabye that's life, how it is
Mistakes made, apologies not acceptted
In this room, the walls close in
The despair wafts around me
There is so much love left behind by those who leave
And it seems like I'm the only one
Who's broken up inside without reasons besides choices
I don't know because I would need to know myself to know that
How is it possible that I don't?
Falling under pushes thoughts away
And I'm falling under every second that passes


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) I
wish
my
shadow
would
get
up
and
walk
beside
me.


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) In this house of grief
Love is not lost
Just left behind
With all those words
You could never find
It hurts to think about it all
Trying to take it all on
I let my brain try to forget
My soul tries to remember
Tearing myself apart from the inside out


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Do you feel it
Wrapping around you
Enclosing you in it's webs
I feel my panic start to rise
Pulling me under, messing with my head
Telling myself to get a grip
All it does is fuel my fear and anger
Pity is something most people don't want
I feel so meek and powerless
When people look at me with pity or disgust


message 38: by Fault In Our Stars (last edited Nov 15, 2011 08:41AM) (new)

Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Listen

My thoughts are written in these pages
You want to know what they are now that I'm a goner
Maybe you'll finally hear what I'm saying
When you finally understood that I'm gone forever
That's when you tried to listen but, the words I screamed out loud were so far gone
Hear me out, my love is in pieces
Shattered glass on the floor
Sweep away because you needed to protect yourself
Let the cherry blossoms fall into the water
Sinking deeper and deeper till your a goner
There were people who said they'ed love me forever
But who would have thought that love hurt so much in the end
Sometimes love last but sometimes it just so much instead


message 39: by Fault In Our Stars (last edited Nov 15, 2011 08:41AM) (new)

Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Void

This could be a sweet dream or a beautiful nightmare
I couldn't tell you
The darkness swirls around me, making me forget
Is that a good dream or a bad nightmare?
My pain eases and my heart stops aching
I do not dare wake, lest the pain and passion flood my senses once more
I stay in this void
I hope light will never penetrate this beautiful darkness
When it begins to peak through, I see what I need
Turn the lights on to chase the darkness away
It still lingers, though, as it does in every heart


message 40: by Fault In Our Stars (last edited Nov 15, 2011 08:47AM) (new)

Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Sleep

The light burns my skin
I feel my memories rising to the surface at once
The darkness is closing in till, all I can see is the beautiful stars
That are scattered across the sky
This illusion of darkness gives me peace of mind as my body goes weightless
My eyelids become heavy with the promise of darkness and sleep.
Beautiful, dreamless, blissful sleep


message 41: by Fault In Our Stars (last edited Nov 15, 2011 08:47AM) (new)

Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) After You

All that I'm after
Is my love ever after
And hope I'll be
Laughing in the end with you
All that still matters
To me is you
My heart and yours
Are at risk
And it's not your fault
But mine
And it's your heart on
The line now
I really screawed all
Of it up this time
Didn't I, my dear
Didn't I, my sweet
My most precious delight


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Everytime I see it all
It hurts so much
I'm falling into the sky
So much time has passed
Me by so fast
Do you know how broken
I am on the inside
How torn I am
Waiting for you
Seven times you shattered
My heart, my soul
Seven for the Seveth Circle of Hell


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Does it hurt so much when everything falls apart
I never knew I could feel so much at once
Will this last forever? Will I get over it?
I feel like I'm standing still, watching you take the fall
For us but, the price is never waking up
Is the amount to high for me to pay
I believe, no, I know it is
I could not live without knowing that it was my fault
They say you are to use your guilt as a tool
Instead of something that brings you down
But I think that's a bunch of BS
Because what happens when all you see is how you could have changed
All you see is how you failed
All that everyone else sees is someone to pity
And that gives me anger
I'm not fragile, just mending
In need of mend
The fall split me down the middle
And now it's almost to late to me
But everyone else it's never to late for a second chance


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Grief is a house where things disapear and mistakes are made. It blinds you, the wall blocking people outside. When they come and knock on the door, it sinks into the ground, hiding. The windows are dark as you wander through the halls that are filled with despair. All this grief is tangible to me, tasting the bitter flavor it leaves on you. The flowers wilt and die as they grow. The thorns warp around the doors and windows. The sky is everywhere and the sun shines but never seems to reach you in that house of grief. Full of happiness and sadness, full of beauty that waits right here. Yet you stay inside your house. Grief is a house that you built, that I wish you would come out of.


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Here I created a world of just us. You, me, and her. When you go in to the darkness, I'll follow. Their will be no dawn and no day here in this dark world of just us. Always in this twilight, in the shadow of your love. I'll do anything for you because of love. I'll stay here with you in the tidal waves of darkness. I'm running, through nothing, screaming silently for each other, burning in cold fire. They scatter around us, in our minds only. Killing and taking what we have left. Death is mercy in our world of just us.


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) You left me here in the dark, you run and play while I lock myself tight. To keep myself, my all. We all used to sit in this dark but you all stood up and left. I sit here silently trying to find my way back but also sitting still. Never mosing from the pain the burns my flesh and binds me together. I run from myself and hide away. It eats away the years till all I have left is nothing.


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) I wake up from the daze that blinds me. Everything before is a haze that is meaningless. Everyone says time will help and only time. I don't know if I can take it so I'll cawl under my blanket and hide away from thw world around me. I can't stop seeing your face, can't wait for it to wash away so I can stop running. Always inside myself, pulling away from the world. I've been left alone and they carried all my happiness away.


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) Was always in the twilight of my wonderland this peaceful underland. I'm losing it all to reality. Between flight and fight I can't decide. All I feel is broken now. Sweet sorrow hits me. Maybe if I had stayed I would have known how to svae your life. I lost you in the bitterness that ate away my mask.


message 49: by Silver (new)

Silver Sammi *Won't Somebody Find Me?* wrote: "Grief is a house where things disapear and mistakes are made. It blinds you, the wall blocking people outside. When they come and knock on the door, it sinks into the ground, hiding. The windows ar..."

this is amazing.

Sammi *Won't Somebody Find Me?* wrote: "I
wish
my
shadow
would
get
up
and
walk
beside
me."


so is this.

will you join my group? http://www.goodreads.com/group/show/5...



and then you post three more... it's all so amazing DX


Fault In Our Stars (KingdomHeartsII) oh. thank you. I think I will join the group


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