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Hmmmm.... here it goes:
starting where u left off...
Like a prisoner just let go.
You like that line? I wouldn't make the whole thing having "Free me" in it. just some constructive critisism. i think thats how its spelled....
starting where u left off...
Like a prisoner just let go.
You like that line? I wouldn't make the whole thing having "Free me" in it. just some constructive critisism. i think thats how its spelled....
im writing a song too. let me know what u think.
There's a guy who doesn't know my name.
He thinks it all is just a game.
He's just a child on the inside.
He's always afraid to say goodbye.
Then again aren't we all.
Ever since we started to crawl.
We're all afraid to say goodbye.
But in the end, with a sigh.
We have to say those dreaded goodbyes.
So... what do u think? thats all i hav so far. plz comment. just dont make fun of it.
There's a guy who doesn't know my name.
He thinks it all is just a game.
He's just a child on the inside.
He's always afraid to say goodbye.
Then again aren't we all.
Ever since we started to crawl.
We're all afraid to say goodbye.
But in the end, with a sigh.
We have to say those dreaded goodbyes.
So... what do u think? thats all i hav so far. plz comment. just dont make fun of it.
Thanks. I like yours too. I'm guessing its too a beatles kind of beat? even though im not a big fan of this genre, mine kind of has a country feel to it, just a teensy weensy bit.
Wow, you all write lyrics...Not songs. Songs have notes, >I< write songs. For piano, saxaphone, trumpet, clarinet, and the occasional chelo piece...
Well, i don't really write the notes, the tune just came when i was writing it.
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do u play the sax?
Greg wrote: "Wow, you all write lyrics...Not songs. Songs have notes, >I< write songs. For piano, saxaphone, trumpet, clarinet, and the occasional chelo piece..."Be nice, greg..
it's ok and i already have an account on quizilla..idk if it's still active...i'm pretty sure it is..
Answering amy..... i dont really write down my songs. they just get filed away. sometimes the tune changes when i hum it to myself.
wel... mine suck...I will post mine on my writing soon
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ya...same here
So, any comments on mine? any lines that could help it get longer? it can't be that short! Any other songs? I want to see other songs too!
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Ok, well for mine, I want it to kind of be about how it's hard to say goodbye, since saying goodbye's always been hard for me. Let me check yours.....
Sarah you could sing your song with a country accent. and its great. and Amy yours is great too
Great Songs guys though they dont have to rhyme do they?
Her Golden Locks Were Shining Her dress was glittering your arms swept her up and lay her on the swing.
( Part of a song I wrote Bad, huh?)
Her Golden Locks Were Shining Her dress was glittering your arms swept her up and lay her on the swing.
( Part of a song I wrote Bad, huh?)
Wow, you guys are all good at writing lyrics. If I have any ideas later, I'll remember to post them.
You should, you might discover a new talent! :)
Here are some lyrics i made......
I was just a girl,
ready to break free,
No one ever knew,
the person I could be........
A little help please.
I was just a girl,
ready to break free,
No one ever knew,
the person I could be........
A little help please.
Free me!
like a bird who flies alone,
Free me!
like...
do u have any advice for the rest of my song?