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♫♥♪Amy♪♥♫ (musicrox) | 70 comments Mod
i need help with my lyrics...here they r:
Free me!
like a bird who flies alone,
Free me!
like...
do u have any advice for the rest of my song?


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Hmmmm.... here it goes:
starting where u left off...

Like a prisoner just let go.

You like that line? I wouldn't make the whole thing having "Free me" in it. just some constructive critisism. i think thats how its spelled....



message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

im writing a song too. let me know what u think.

There's a guy who doesn't know my name.
He thinks it all is just a game.
He's just a child on the inside.
He's always afraid to say goodbye.

Then again aren't we all.
Ever since we started to crawl.
We're all afraid to say goodbye.
But in the end, with a sigh.
We have to say those dreaded goodbyes.

So... what do u think? thats all i hav so far. plz comment. just dont make fun of it.


♫♥♪Amy♪♥♫ (musicrox) | 70 comments Mod
i like tht! thts really good!


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks. I like yours too. I'm guessing its too a beatles kind of beat? even though im not a big fan of this genre, mine kind of has a country feel to it, just a teensy weensy bit.


♫♥♪Amy♪♥♫ (musicrox) | 70 comments Mod
kinda...ya


message 7: by Greg (new)

Greg Owens | 1 comments Wow, you all write lyrics...Not songs. Songs have notes, >I< write songs. For piano, saxaphone, trumpet, clarinet, and the occasional chelo piece...


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

Well, i don't really write the notes, the tune just came when i was writing it.


♫♥♪Amy♪♥♫ (musicrox) | 70 comments Mod
same with sarah, except i wrote the notes to a couple of my songs...
do u play the sax?


message 10: by Emily (new)

Emily (emilyamazingxx) Greg wrote: "Wow, you all write lyrics...Not songs. Songs have notes, >I< write songs. For piano, saxaphone, trumpet, clarinet, and the occasional chelo piece..."

Be nice, greg..


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

sorry.
set up an account on http://www.quizilla.com/ peoples!


message 12: by Emily (new)

Emily (emilyamazingxx) it's ok and i already have an account on quizilla..idk if it's still active...i'm pretty sure it is..


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

Answering amy..... i dont really write down my songs. they just get filed away. sometimes the tune changes when i hum it to myself.


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

wel... mine suck...I will post mine on my writing soon


♫♥♪Amy♪♥♫ (musicrox) | 70 comments Mod
i bet theyre not tht bad



♫♥♪Amy♪♥♫ (musicrox) | 70 comments Mod
Sarah wrote: "Answering amy..... i dont really write down my songs. they just get filed away. sometimes the tune changes when i hum it to myself."

ya...same here


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

So, any comments on mine? any lines that could help it get longer? it can't be that short! Any other songs? I want to see other songs too!


♫♥♪Amy♪♥♫ (musicrox) | 70 comments Mod
can u tell me more about the song...like wat u want it to be about? go to my profile and check out my songs and tell me anything i could do better on or anything


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

Ok, well for mine, I want it to kind of be about how it's hard to say goodbye, since saying goodbye's always been hard for me. Let me check yours.....


message 20: by Corey (new)

Corey Proctor | 4 comments Sarah you could sing your song with a country accent. and its great. and Amy yours is great too


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

Great Songs guys though they dont have to rhyme do they?

Her Golden Locks Were Shining Her dress was glittering your arms swept her up and lay her on the swing.

( Part of a song I wrote Bad, huh?)


message 22: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (last edited Jun 06, 2009 12:37PM) (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) Wow, you guys are all good at writing lyrics. If I have any ideas later, I'll remember to post them.


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

You should, you might discover a new talent! :)


message 24: by Miley (new)

Miley (sing123) | 15 comments ya u might


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

:)


message 26: by Miley (new)

Miley (sing123) | 15 comments ;)


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

Here are some lyrics i made......

I was just a girl,
ready to break free,
No one ever knew,
the person I could be........

A little help please.


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