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Aug 22, 2008 12:20PM
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cool! ok, mine has chapters, so i won't post it, but plz read it! here's a link:http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1...
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yeah, i no u read it, but ur the only 1. *sigh*
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So there was this girl named Kendra who was the most beautiful girl of her village called Lechair. She had long Egyptian sparkling dresses with patterns. She had long black hair down to her waist. She had blue eyes and maroon colored lipstick. She had pink nail polish and had like 10 earrings on each ear but no tattoos or anything like that. she had the most handsome boyfriend in the village and his name was Lucas but he always tried to scare Kendra with all these legends. Kendra believed every one of those legends except for the one about Bloody Mary. He said if you were in a bathroom with lights off and candles lit and you turned around 3 times while saying Bloody Mary, then Bloody Mary would come out of the mirror and stick out her bloody cut hands which would make you feel pain and die. Kendra thought this was nonsense so she said she'd actually try it but Lucas told her not to do it.
She didn't listen and asked all the people in the village to be there when she did it and they all said that she shouldn't do such a thing cause she could die. She just laughed at this. So Lucas and her stormed over to a bathroom but he was trying to stop his girlfriend from doing this. He left the bathroom door open in shock. Kendra turned out the lights and found a bunch of candles and lit every one of them. She then was in front of the mirror. Lucas kept telling her not to do it and he was afraid. So she didn't listen one bit and started turning around saying the name Bloody Mary. She spun around 3 times while saying the name and nothing happened. She waited and waited but nothing happened. Then all of a sudden she saw a bloody figure pop out of the mirror and stuck her hands out. She didn't touch Kendra who was so shocked she didn't move. then she started feeling pain in her heart shrieking bloody murder. Lucas ran to her as she was falling but the time he got to her she was dead on the floor and Bloody Mary was gone.
He then started crying like crazy and told the village what happened. Everyone was sad. The next year was Kendra's funeral which happened to be on the day Kendra died.
Plz tell me what you think of this story!
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At least read a little, you'll get caught into the story before you know it! :-)
Some info about it:
When They Cry takes place during June 1983, at a fictional village called Hillgrove. The main character, Kai, moves to Hillgrove and befriends his new classmates Wren, May, Reilly, and Sandy. Kai joins their after-school club activities, which consist mostly of card and board games (and punishment games for the loser, usually him.) Hillgrove appears to be a normal, peaceful village to Kai. However, the tranquility abruptly ends after the annual Cotton Drifting Festival, a celebration to commemorate and give thanks to the local god, Oyashiro-sama. Kai learns that every year for the past four years, one person has been murdered and another has gone missing on the day of the Cottton Drifting Festival. Kai himself soon becomes drawn into the strange events surrounding the Cotton Drifting Festival and Oyashiro-sama.
Hey! I'm Frogg and I love writing poems and hearing feedback!http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/1...
Heres the link, PLEASE COMMENT (even if you hate it!)
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plz read this story!~ It's a romance story. It's about this girl named Hessa which is really a girl named Merdosa and when she's Hessa, she meets a boy named Aladdin who works for her and she's new to Brown Ridge which is a town and Aladdin shows Hessa around the town and they fall in love. They both hate the mayor of the town so they do everything they can to get him fired. There's 2 parts to this and I'm not done with the story but read it anyway!
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http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
hello! i'm brigid and i'm new to the group. i write a lot and i have lots of writing on goodreads! woohooo!! here's a link to all of it. pick a story, any story. ;D or poem. haha. but the stories are better than the poems, probably.http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/8...
now i just to read all of u guyz' stuff XD yay!... that was terrible grammar. pfffft like i care. :P hahaha
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Okay my stories are WAY to long to post here go so check them out ^-^http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1...
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Want another fact? He's my brother
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What Woogi World?...
That made no sense...
lol. i feel like midevil RPing.
Well I know what Woogi World is but...yeah
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I know but he just randomly said Woogi world and I have no clue how it ties into the conversation.
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ooooohhh okaynow i get it
i didnt get it b/c i didnt read the story
but NOW i do
lol!
ohhhhhh i ci didnt kno wat it was at all so like...lol
lol I know it's hardly known but it's awesome XD
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