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The problem with the pregnancy is that Stephenie violates the rules (express and implied) of her made-up world to work the story out. That is NOT LOGICAL. She has given us many clues about the uses of vampire venom in the first three books and in interviews. Vampire venom, once introduced to the human blood stream, creates a new vampire. So, logic in Stephenie's world would dictate that the moment Edward released venom into his wife, Bella would begin the process of transforming into a vampire. Instead, this venom created a baby. That does not make sense based on what we know (because the author told us) about vampire venom.

Jael, no vampires don't exist, but then, neither does Bella Swan. We accept them because Meyer tells us they exist. She lays it out for us. We are told certain things ABOUT both Bella and the vampires which we take to be "true" in the context of the story. If these facts are later contradicted, we're going to want an explanation.
As an example, we are told that the story takes place in Forks, Washington. If we turned the page and found ourselves in Bangor, Maine with no explanation, would we shrug and say "it's fantasy!" or would we want to know why the rules as we thought we understood them suddenly don't apply?


Ah she said most fluids in vampires are absent, not all. She also said venom was one such example of a fluid still present in vampires, not that it replaced all other fluids in vampires.
And the fact that it is fantasy is a legitimate enough explanation to justify why Bella having a baby through a vampire is not incorrect. It is supernatural fantasy, and supernatural fantasy does not cohere with science, which is why it is fantasy, not science fiction. The fact that vampires can move when they're supposed to be dead is already scientifically incorrect, as living cells are needed to conduct cellular respiration which utilizes the energy needed to move muscles needed to move your body. The energy that the vampires use for everything they do supposedly comes out of nowhere. Why? Because blood can't be the energy source as all the cells in vampires are meant to be "dead and hard" and as aforementioned, cells need to be alive to conduct cellular respiration which changes the glucose extracted from consumables (i.e. blood, in the case of vampires) into energy usable to cells (i.e. ATP). Therefore the energy that vampires use comes from nowhere. But, because Twilight is a suspension of reality, that idea of energy coming out of no where defies all the laws of nature. The energy must come from some scientifically-incorrect source in order for it to cohere with her suspension of reality. The only explanation is that it is a supernatural source, that source being some kind of magic, because science cannot explain why vampires are dead but still alive. They also have fully working sensory organs and an active peripheral nervous system! How do you explain that? All of these things have been inconsistent with the extension/suspension of reality since the very beginning, unless MAGIC explains it. Because it's fantasy, right?
That same supernatural magic that moves vampires when they're dead can be used to explain Renesmee. Because if magic can keep dead people alive, then why can't it bring dead people alive through living people as well? Magic, right? Stephenie didn't say venom created Renesmee...in fact she never explained it fully, which is why she obviously didn't think it through well enough, but the idea of it being fantasy is still reason enough to explain Renesmee. Not enough to explain all her silly ideas but enough for vampire pregnancy. Maybe she did think of it and thought it was implicit enough for people to get it, but whatever I'm not going to defend her anymore than that, she isn't my personal friend or anything.
Obviously no one actually believes that vampires exist just because they've read Twilight...well I hope no one does because that's rather delusional. But I understand that people are irritated with the book because of certain inconsistencies in the book. But vampire pregnancy is not an inconsistency because Stephenie Meyer never actually stated that it was impossible for vampire babies to happen. Just that it was impossible for female vampires to have babies. Stephenie Meyer made the mistake of involving scientific ideas (i.e. no. of chromosomes in vampires, werewolves and humans, which IS an inconsistency in logic/fantasy/science) but failing to reinstate the ideas of supernaturality into her books, as well as loosely throwing in ideas that she did not justify.
Still vampire pregnancy is not an inconsistency and is fully explainable by the fantastical/supernatural aspect of the books. It explains why vampires can exist, and it can do the same for vampire pregnancy. Either way the idea that magic explains it all is a deus ex machina, but hey, that means that all fantastical books involving supernaturality are deus ex machinas too because magic is used to explain things in those worlds too. So I'm fine with it. "It's fantasy!" after all. =P That is what I believe.

The problem with your explanation is that Meyer HAS introduced science, and once you do that, "fantasy" as an excuse goes out the window...not that it was ever a valid excuse anyway because as others have stated (so many times it should be on a T-Shirt), the argument is irrelevant if the problem people are having is with the canonical inconsistencies within the story and not the genre of the story.
Ah she said most fluids in vampires are absent, not all. She also said venom was one such example of a fluid still present in vampires, not that it replaced all other fluids in vampires.
Actually, the implied exception was saliva (which is venomous). Interestingly enough, seeing as humans are over 60% water, I'm curious as to why her vampires always look like shiny pretty stone and not prunes. I wonder if water changes to venom when one is changed into a vampire in her universe.
Also, If sperm remained, it would either (1) be human, and you only get one "load", since nothing grows or changes post transformation or (2) venom, which raises the question as to why Bella didn't change when she and Edward had sex, at least if Meyer bothered to adhere to her own canon. She really should have introduced incubi as a separate entity. THAT would have made things interesting.
And the fact that it is fantasy is a legitimate enough explanation to justify why Bella having a baby through a vampire is not incorrect.
NOT if the canon of said fantasy has already stated that such a thing is impossible. That would be like Bambi's mom getting shot and killed and then being around at the end of the movie. It's not a real story, but if that had happened at the end of the movie, I'm sure there would have been a lot of people looking like "O_o".
It had already been established that the mother was dead, just like it had already been established (by the author, in her own words even) that such a thing was not possible, for a female OR male vampire. Fantasy or not, once something is written in stone, you can't just un-write it without a logical explanation. It would have been ideal if she had done so BEFORE writing the book or even releasing it, rather than simply relying on everyone to completely overlook all the plot holes and inconsistencies.
The only explanation is that it is a supernatural source, that source being some kind of magic, because science cannot explain why vampires are dead but still alive.
I honestly would like Meyer to have said "MAAAGIIIIC!" early on in explanation of her characters. Unfortunately, she doesn't.
She gives her vampires extra chromosomes in such a way that it's expected to explain their uniqueness, and when you bring biology (read: science) into the picture, magic can no longer be a valid explanation, because science must now act as an explanation because as you yourself said, it cannot cohere with "magic".
However, I say this in the sense that unlike magic, science requires specific explanations that make sense to the reasonable and logical person. When you say magic, it is a wonderful disclaimer that can make anything be true. I sincerely wonder why she didn't go this route.
That same supernatural magic that moves vampires when they're dead can be used to explain Renesmee.
Forgive me, but oh hell no it can't. Even if we were to throw out the canon-crushing conception, we still don't know why Edward's sperm wasn't pure venom, since that's what literally should be the only liquid in his body and Bella didn't begin changing post sex, or, forgetting that, why the human sperm that is "magically" still there isn't human, since that was his species before the change (unless his mama did something she shouldn't have), and why the pregnancy is accelerated (see previous reply as to why "magic" is not a valid explanation), or why Bella's baby is vampiric because human sperm + human egg = human baby.
Also, if the baby WAS vampiric (and I still can't believe NOBODY has brought this up, self included), why the hell didn't Nessie's venom change her mom? Is it selective venom?
This isn't a case of "supernatural elements" explaining all...it's bad writing. Period.
But vampire pregnancy is not an inconsistency because Stephenie Meyer never actually stated that it was impossible for vampire babies to happen. Just that it was impossible for female vampires to have babies.
Wrong, she said that vampires of neither sex could procreate. She only explained the female part of the problem in more detail because it was pertinent to the actual question. However, it was made clear that it was true for both males and females. If it weren't the case, then she should have said so and let it only be true for female vampires.
Without that, the implication for male vampires is that the reason they cannot procreate is because sperm is incapable of growing due to the body not changing and or sperm being incapable of swimming since everything is frozen in place. Or, that like other living tissue, the sperm was destroyed by the change. At least, that is the logical implication that must be made with the information provided and her failure to explain in more detail is what lead to people going "O_o" at the pregnancy.
Still vampire pregnancy is not an inconsistency and is fully explainable by the fantastical/supernatural aspect of the books. It explains why vampires can exist, and it can do the same for vampire pregnancy.
Nope, the existence of vampires can be treated scientifically, because the belief of her fictional society is that they do not, and for scientific reasons. The mythology and folklore is non-scientic, and here is where the supernatural element is. How one approaches the situation depends on who they are: Bella, knowing first hand the existence of werewolves and vampires would be more likely to see the supernatural than say, her science teacher, who would think she was nuts if she attempted to explain their existence without any scientific proof.
Whereas the means of explaining vampiric existence in Meyer's world is debatable, the issue of pregnancy is not; it purely is a scientific one. Why? Because of the introduction of science. She both attempts to treat her vampires as another species and as human by saying that nothing changes. She says vampires humans in suspended animation in one breath and then starts handing out additional chromosomes in the next. She never actually treats the existence of the baby as magical, it is merely poorly explained using mythology, mythology I might add, that is irrelevant to her vampires as she made them. So then, we are left with science as the only means of explanation, and science says, "LOL WUT?"
Nothin' doin. Meyer should have either made vampires another species altogether or made everything magical and left the science the heck alone. Since she didn't, fantasy/magic is no longer the be all end all explanation.
Which, again, makes me wonder why she brought science into the picture in the first place.

But then, the science was there from the beginning, regardless, whether she decided to mention it in the end of her series or not. It was there from the minute she placed vampires into her world, her "suspension of reality", because science and all logic straight away goes "LOL WUT?". =P Maybe if she did not throw in the vampire procreation the science debate would've been left untouched, but it was still always there. She just shouldn't of brought it up. Like pointing a gun to her head. But what's done is done, she's already placed the gun in front of her and everyone is dashing to get a hold of the trigger. I'm going to stand back and believe that MAGIC will happen...and she won't end up killing herself/setting up for her own murder.

That comment is both endearing and frightening at the same time. :D The only thing magical I can believe in at this point is that the guide that Meyer intends to release will completely fill in the holes in her canon and explain everything definitely once and for all.
Also, in regards to the science of vampires in Meyer's world, like I said, people don't believe in them because in her fictional world, there's no scientific basis...no KNOWN scientific basis. There must be, or they wouldn't exist, now that we have introduced the wonderful world of science into a fantasy novel. (yay?) Why oh why did she have to add chromosomes?
First she gives us this great werewolf legend, and then she goes on about biology. Ugh...

TL;DR: You can use science to explain why something doesn't make sense of science is introduced into the story, and problematically.


Seriously, why did she need to bring in the science? SO LAME! I would have preferred if Carlisle had just said, "WE'RE MAGIC! There is no reason as to why we exist. We just do. Perhaps we're the puppets of satan. I have no other idea as to why we are here. TOTAL MIND TRIP, HUH? Here Bella have some 'shrooms, it makes it easier to wrap your mind around the whole thing"


In Meyer's world I just think that the idea of Bella getting pregnat angered me because Bella was a stupid immature kid who had no time to grow up (mentally, that is) and see the world outside Edward. Meyer just gave her no choice, she didn't let Bella grow as a person, as an individual. The fact that wether it was possible for Edward to get her pregnat is totally irrevelant. Meyer can have Bella pop flowers for all I care because after all is the world that she created. Now that goes the same way with my complaints, it is her world and her characters, so I just have to get over it.
p.s. I belive in vampires,witches,wizards,ghosts, faires, angels and aliens, so there, I AM A HUGE DORK/GEEK!

Heck, that's even less of an issue as far as I'm concerned. I don't mind a good plot twist every now and then but the plot twists need a good explanation, especially when said plot twist is going against all canon originally set up by Stephenie Meyer. I don't like that she tried explaining it away in less then a few short sentences. It didn't work for me and a lot of other people.
In my opinion there were far too many plot twists in this book considering it's length and the fact that the last three books didn't throw surprises at us, left and right. There was just too much going on for it to work for me. I was willing to accept the baby, willing to accept the disgusting imprint (begrudgingly) and I was set for some sort of final battle. But you add the fact that Bella was the most powerful, amazing, sexy, smart, in-control vampire of all time...well, I thought it was a cop-out and a pretty lame one at that. Then she brings Charlie back into the story and he's totally cool with werewolves and some other type of creature running around Forks. It's amazing that he doesn't even question the complete makeover Bella underwent (*cough* new face, new voice *cough*) and the fact she has a toddler when he only gave her away two months previously. The fact that said toddler can read 'War and Peace' at the tender age of 2 months (I still don't get why she was so blasted smart, but whatever) Then, add in the sex-lust Bella can't seem to control (even though she CAN control her blood-lust), The tons of vampires with mad skillz in various fields (when Edward himself says in TWILIGHT that vampires are rare and vampires with magical powers are really rare). Then add the anti-climatic battle...well, I just couldn't like this book. It was lame.





Shannon, well put. That's exactly why it makes no sense. Bella would have turned. She was about to turn in Twilight after what's his face bit her but Edward sucked it out and she didn't. If he skeeted (excuse the language) inside of Bella, wouldn't it work the same?

Was something that Stephenie Meyer said on the FAQ on Breaking Dawn. It makes sense, I guess. Obviously fluids are needed in a vampires body to do those extra things, which they wouldn't be able to do without...like moving (not that that explains how they're able to move, since their cells are technically dead and incapable of producing the energy needed for movement...but I suppose that's something you accept since they are vampires, supernatural and all) and being highly flammable...infallible, with the exception of fire... Not a sound scientific explanation, but reasonable enough, unless your scientific knowledge could better explain/rebuke her vampire science...if there is such a thing...O_o

"oh no have we been found out?!" (stops draining latest victim and speeds into the night to warn the others)

Science does not produce statements of absolute fact, but rather statements of what we know currently, which might change at some point in the future. Since all of our information about vampire reproduction came from characters within the Twilight world, it's entirely possible that they just passed on the information they had at the time, which was subsequently proven wrong.
The hard-cells-with-venom-lubricant thing doesn't ACTUALLY work (because as far as I can see, there's nothing to prevent these lubricated cells from sliding right past each other like marbles, making the vampire disintegrate into sparkly cell-dust [unless venom-lube is adhesive, in which case vampires would feel at least a little sticky and still wouldn't be able to move under their own power]), but if we just roll with that, the pregnancy is at least feasible.
Peace wrote: "here is q for anyone. does even vamp exsite at all?or are they just some made up thing, that from the book?"
are you for cereal right now? the question of the existence of vampires is what this discussion is all about.
are you for cereal right now? the question of the existence of vampires is what this discussion is all about.
sorry i just didn't understand why you were restating the question


*blink blink*
This thread is getting kinda gross. :P
This thread is getting kinda gross. :P


Are vampires real?
I don't WANT to live in a world where sparkling vampires live so I seriously hope not.
I don't WANT to live in a world where sparkling vampires live so I seriously hope not.

And I sure do hope that vampires exist I would love to meet one
Peace wrote: "Sarah wrote: "There are many different kinds of vampires. In every myth and story about vampires its different. In some stories vampires can have children and in others they cant. Its not that hard..."
Yeah...and probably not live to tell the tale.
Yeah...and probably not live to tell the tale.

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