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message 1: by Ilana (new)

Ilana (lamort) Hello, I'm new and hope I'm doing this right. This a link to the first chapter of story I'm working on.


message 2: by Ilana (last edited Jun 18, 2011 11:02AM) (new)

Ilana (lamort) Here's a link to my poetry blog. I try to add to at least once a week but I have to admit I’m not that very good at it.

Clockwork Angels Narrative
Clockwork angels
Heads of glass
Wings of brass
Hang flightless in the air
Hourglass is turned
They shift in measured stride
Blinking slumber from their workings
Their bodies stuffed with gears
That would fill their bodies with life
And now they dance

Up one comes with wings out stretched
The light alights on brassy wings
Glittering in the murkiness
whirling slow to steady pace
Slanting down they glide
flapping softly with a clink
Brassy murmur

Quickly one ascends
flaunting its gleaming wings
against the night
darting here and there they play
flittering, quiver, flutter shimmer
in delicate dance

The last sand falls
sluggishly they slow
the flapping wings
sedated their heads hang low
Their dance has ceased
Clockwork angels
Heads of glass
Wings of brass
Hang flightless in the air

message 3: by Ilana (new)

Ilana (lamort) Short story I wrote. Working on part two by popluar demand. I think it dosen't need a part two, please tell me what you guys think.

message 4: by Ilana (new)

Ilana (lamort) My latest project.

Deceit and betrayal are two things Elisha is exceedingly familiar with. He is called back into the service of the Empire by special request and there is no refusing the call no matter what. Bitter, jaded and angry at getting pulled back into a life he has spent the past ten years trying to forget with drugs and alcohol. Elisha must face his past and all that comes with it.

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