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TWENTY CHAPTERS OMG
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Sarah
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Feb 23, 2011 05:52PM
I just reached twenty chapters on my story The Entertainment!!!! :)
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Awesome! We should all post here when we've reached that
K i know ur proud and all but its really rushed, and there's almost no detail. And i don't really like the direction the plot's going in...but all the same its good please don't think i'm being mean
u told me already haha :P no need again hahah
And I responded :) thanks for the helpful criticism
♫ Kate wrote: "u told me already haha :P no need again hahah"I'm sorry that sounded WAY more harsher then i intended!
haha no no its fine ur right about it being rushed but u had already told me haha so i was like 'ouch..!' hahaha
Jessica wrote: "Okay, I reached 22!"yayy Jess!
It's not that it's rushed... It's more like it's too fast. Like what is happening in the story with the whole attack scene. I had to reread because I wasn't sure what happened
so like..more detail and longer chapters?
More detail yes and make sure every action she does isn't as quick. Well actually I understand that she's supposed to be doing quick movements, but what y write needs to be linger. Idk if what I'm saying makes sense. I have the same problem tho. I still haven't mastered putting alot of detail into one, sharp quick movement. It's hard :/
No i get it! But some authors can't do that, even published ones like i have to reread a paragraph a few times and THEN i go 'HOLY CRAP HE DIED!'
Claire wrote: "No i get it! But some authors can't do that, even published ones like i have to reread a paragraph a few times and THEN i go 'HOLY CRAP HE DIED!'"yea me 2 i don't really understand nd then it finally hits me! lol
