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My Writing On Goodreads > TWENTY CHAPTERS OMG

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message 1: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarahhh009) | 171 comments I just reached twenty chapters on my story The Entertainment!!!! :)


message 2: by Claire (new)

Claire Awesome! We should all post here when we've reached that


message 3: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarahhh009) | 171 comments Yeah haha great idea!!


message 4: by Claire (new)

Claire K i know ur proud and all but its really rushed, and there's almost no detail. And i don't really like the direction the plot's going in...but all the same its good please don't think i'm being mean


message 5: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarahhh009) | 171 comments u told me already haha :P no need again hahah


message 6: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarahhh009) | 171 comments And I responded :) thanks for the helpful criticism


message 7: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarahhh009) | 171 comments Woohoooo!!!!! Go Jessica!!! :)


message 8: by Claire (new)

Claire ♫ Kate wrote: "u told me already haha :P no need again hahah"

I'm sorry that sounded WAY more harsher then i intended!


message 9: by Sarah (last edited Feb 24, 2011 04:50PM) (new)

Sarah (sarahhh009) | 171 comments haha no no its fine ur right about it being rushed but u had already told me haha so i was like 'ouch..!'
hahaha


message 10: by Cynthia (new)

Cynthia (cynthiavargas) | 223 comments Jessica wrote: "Okay, I reached 22!"

yayy Jess!


message 11: by Claire (new)

Claire do you think mine's rushed too?


message 12: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarahhh009) | 171 comments It's not that it's rushed... It's more like it's too fast. Like what is happening in the story with the whole attack scene. I had to reread because I wasn't sure what happened


message 13: by Claire (new)

Claire so like..more detail and longer chapters?


message 14: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarahhh009) | 171 comments More detail yes and make sure every action she does isn't as quick. Well actually I understand that she's supposed to be doing quick movements, but what y write needs to be linger. Idk if what I'm saying makes sense. I have the same problem tho. I still haven't mastered putting alot of detail into one, sharp quick movement. It's hard :/


message 15: by Claire (new)

Claire No i get it! But some authors can't do that, even published ones like i have to reread a paragraph a few times and THEN i go 'HOLY CRAP HE DIED!'


message 16: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarahhh009) | 171 comments Oh i know right?!?


message 17: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarahhh009) | 171 comments Hahah


message 18: by Cynthia (new)

Cynthia (cynthiavargas) | 223 comments Claire wrote: "No i get it! But some authors can't do that, even published ones like i have to reread a paragraph a few times and THEN i go 'HOLY CRAP HE DIED!'"

yea me 2 i don't really understand nd then it finally hits me! lol


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