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message 1: by Lacey, The New Mod (new)

Lacey | 419 comments Mod
Post all your entries in here!


message 3: by Jennifer (new)

Jennifer Murgia (jennifermurgia) | 898 comments Pic of prizes coming soon! Come on people.... it's going to be too hard to resist this contest when you see what you could win!:)


message 4: by Jennifer (new)

Jennifer Murgia (jennifermurgia) | 898 comments Mariela:) This is amazing!!!! Thanks so much for entering!


message 5: by Lynsey (new)

Lynsey (lynseynewton) | 6 comments When my heart is heavy and full like the moon
I find myself wondering if you’ll be here soon.
I call out in the darkness, my time of despair
And hope to God that you’re standing right there.


In my head I can see you, with arms stretched out wide
You wait to embrace me, as I embrace the light.
All at once I feel peaceful, as calmness descends
And I know I can count on my angelic friends.


My heart fills with joy at your feathery touch
And I never believed in heaven so much.
I love that you love me and all that you are
Always remember, you’re my Angel Star.


message 6: by Jennifer (new)

Jennifer Murgia (jennifermurgia) | 898 comments AWWWW! Lynsey!!:):)


message 7: by Reaganstar (new)

Reaganstar (StarShadow) | 1 comments The Light fills my heart with love
your feathers smooth and soft as doves
my heart completed when your here
with you I lack of fear

But deep inside theres more
I am afraid that I am completely torn
For another plays a part
one whom is completely dark

My heart is broken in half, one side light and one side dark
and how you both play a huge part
however, I cannot choose
I am afraid there is to much to lose.

Protected by my love and fear
I am glad they are always near
for without them Id be just a host
for nothing more than a simple ghost


message 8: by Lacey, The New Mod (new)

Lacey | 419 comments Mod
This is an entry sent to me in my message inbox:

ANGELS AMONG US
BY P.Q. GLISSON


Have you ever been in a closed room and suddenly felt a slight breeze?

Have you ever been in a car and a little voice warns you to swerve just before you see something fall off the back of a truck, landing right where you were scant seconds before?

Have you ever been in a dark place and just about the time you feel like screaming from fright, a small voice assures you everything will be alright and you’ll soon be in the light once more?

Have you ever been crying about something you have no control, and suddenly feel a calm come over you like a peaceful pool of water?

That slight breeze might be the flutter of Angel’s wings.

That warning could be the breath of an Angel whispering into your ear.

That comfort could be the reassuring touch of an Angel.

That peaceful feeling could be an embrace as an Angel takes you into his loving arms.

So open your mind and your heart and believe in the unseen…there could be Angels among us.


message 9: by Jennifer (new)

Jennifer Murgia (jennifermurgia) | 898 comments These are all so incredible!


message 10: by wolf spirit (new)

wolf spirit | 51 comments Lightness of Dark

Wings bind me; bind me to what?
To this inner strength and love or
this doom to the underworlds of devilish spawn.
Through the strength of heaven I give you life; life to live
The protector of sleepy children
Protector to those that cry at night; to those that needs wings to lift them
I give you my breath to live on.
Your wings of silver, of gold and pure silk collide with the essence of your majesty
Your voice ringing through the clouds to the wind like teardrops of an Angel.
The light of your darkness shatters evil; into a million pieces.
The light of your heart breaths the life of a honeysuckle praise
as your wings whispers through the wind, the air, and our soul like cotton candy to our hearts.
Your blood pumps sparkles of who we are to the world as you live on for us
standing behind your faith and glory of our ancestors.
You are the eyes to which we cannot see beyond the Milky Way
You are the comforter when all else fails.
Feathers caress the sky as a million voices ring and soar with the heart of rhythm and of love.
You are the love to which pours our wings to you.
With the heart of a lion, the angel of our soul, and the faith of a thousand raindrops we are you
Your wings of light break down darkness as He tries to reach out.
Those that pour venom into our human veins; those that have the eye of selfish
You crush into molecules that dissolve into nothing.
Through the comet and stars is your touch that shines for stars and reaches around the world for all to see.
The sun sets as the stars dance around you welcoming you into their blood
Baby’s first breathing shatters your ever existence as you were one of them.
The tenderness of baby’s first breath brings you closer to humanity
as the everlasting evil lives on.
Swirls of colors of vibrant speak through you as you are the knight of our honesty and our humanity.
We bow down; a messenger of God
to which wisdom wears around your heart.
You gave us wings to help us understand the heavens heart
You see the best in us an immortal against mortals.
Because you… are our light against the darkness of our humanity


message 11: by wolf spirit (new)

wolf spirit | 51 comments Awesome enteries everyone! I love everyone's work


message 12: by Precious (new)

Precious (preciousvalisno) | 4 comments Okay, I'm nervous. I haven't written poems for a while now. This is my attempt to capture that light vs darkness. It's about an angel in between heaven and hell, what I would call earth bound.



The rays of sunlight creeps on the grass
Slowly, making its way to me
As if it knows that I crave it.
Underneath the shade of the ruins,
I watch and wait
For another day, another chance
To say goodbye to my old self.

The feathers on the ground are changing
From dull white to a grayish hue, almost black
Reminding me of what I did, that I desired
A girl who wasn’t meant for me.

Desire, strong and black inside me, swirls.
I don’t know if this is love or lust.
But I’m sure it was enough to lose my Master’s trust.
Am I masochistic or sadistic, for descending?

She wanted me, needed me.
Not in the same way that I did, and still do.
She was wrong. Forbidden.
A challenge. A chance to feel human.

Temptations seduced me from the sky
And lured me down here.
To freedom, to love, to lust and to passion
Things I never had but wanted.
Now I’m stuck in between.
Not worthy enough to fly back,
Not guilty enough to go down.
Inside my head, I sense it. Feel it.
There’s another voice inside.
Hard, demanding and persuasive.
It took me a while to recognize it was mine,
Buried inside, caged.
Sometimes I listen, sometimes I ignore.
There’s never enough time to deal with both

I can feel the weightlessness of light inside
Trying, hoping it could fight back
The heavy shadow lurking over it.
It’s my struggle, my battle.
But deep down I know
No matter which side wins,
I will lose.
Two things can happen once I decide,
If I choose darkness, I’ll lose myself,
Be thrown into hell.
But if light prevails, I will be cleansed
Until my wings glow again.
But up there, where everything is perfect,
I will not have the satisfaction
Of seeing her.
What’s left up there for me
Is a life without her.


message 13: by wolf spirit (new)

wolf spirit | 51 comments Awesome Poetry Precious


message 14: by Jennifer (new)

Jennifer Murgia (jennifermurgia) | 898 comments Every entry here is incredible and entirely deserving of recognition! I can't thank you all enough for taking the time to enter this contest! Choosing will be hard - like I said, they are all beautiful:)

For anyone who still wishes to enter the contest closes in 3 days!


message 15: by wolf spirit (new)

wolf spirit | 51 comments I agree Jennifer everyone that has entered should be recognized that they took their time to submit beautiful artwork...everyone of these pieces is epic..Thank you all for posting and good luck to all of you


message 16: by Precious (new)

Precious (preciousvalisno) | 4 comments Thank you!:) I tried.

wolf spirit wrote: "Awesome Poetry Precious"


message 17: by wolf spirit (new)

wolf spirit | 51 comments Your welcome Precious =)


message 18: by Jennifer (new)

Jennifer Murgia (jennifermurgia) | 898 comments One more day to enter!!


message 19: by Mariela (new)

Mariela OMG!!!!! i cant wait!!!


message 20: by Jennifer (new)

Jennifer Murgia (jennifermurgia) | 898 comments Eeek, now we have to pick! Omigod the PRESSURE!


message 21: by Lacey, The New Mod (new)

Lacey | 419 comments Mod
Hey guys!! I tried sending out a message but it's not letting me so I'm announcing here in hopes you guys will check it!!

Tomorrow monday the 14th we will be announcing the winner of this contest!! So stay tuned and I wish you all Luck!!

-Lacey


message 22: by Lacey, The New Mod (last edited Mar 14, 2011 02:00PM) (new)

Lacey | 419 comments Mod
Hello fellow members,

We have finally picked the winner to the writing Contest, it was a tough choice, considering all the wonderful entries we recieved, but we had to choose one. So without anymore delay:

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Contrats Precious!! Send your mailing info. my way so that we may send you your pize!!

Well I hope everyone has a wonderful evening and if there's anything you need don't hesitate to message me!!

-Lacey


message 23: by Lacey, The New Mod (new)

Lacey | 419 comments Mod
Here's the winning poem:

The rays of sunlight creeps on the grass
Slowly, making its way to me
As if it knows that I crave it.
Underneath the shade of the ruins,
I watch and wait
For another day, another chance
To say goodbye to my old self.

The feathers on the ground are changing
From dull white to a grayish hue, almost black
Reminding me of what I did, that I desired
A girl who wasn’t meant for me.

Desire, strong and black inside me, swirls.
I don’t know if this is love or lust.
But I’m sure it was enough to lose my Master’s trust.
Am I masochistic or sadistic, for descending?

She wanted me, needed me.
Not in the same way that I did, and still do.
She was wrong. Forbidden.
A challenge. A chance to feel human.

Temptations seduced me from the sky
And lured me down here.
To freedom, to love, to lust and to passion
Things I never had but wanted.
Now I’m stuck in between.
Not worthy enough to fly back,
Not guilty enough to go down.
Inside my head, I sense it. Feel it.
There’s another voice inside.
Hard, demanding and persuasive.
It took me a while to recognize it was mine,
Buried inside, caged.
Sometimes I listen, sometimes I ignore.
There’s never enough time to deal with both

I can feel the weightlessness of light inside
Trying, hoping it could fight back
The heavy shadow lurking over it.
It’s my struggle, my battle.
But deep down I know
No matter which side wins,
I will lose.
Two things can happen once I decide,
If I choose darkness, I’ll lose myself,
Be thrown into hell.
But if light prevails, I will be cleansed
Until my wings glow again.
But up there, where everything is perfect,
I will not have the satisfaction
Of seeing her.
What’s left up there for me
Is a life without her.


message 24: by Jennifer (new)

Jennifer Murgia (jennifermurgia) | 898 comments Congratulations Precious!! Your poem fit the essence of dark and light so perfectly!

Thank you so much everyone for all of your entries! Picking was hard and we were torn! Everyone here deserves a huge congrats on jobs well done!


message 25: by Precious (new)

Precious (preciousvalisno) | 4 comments Awww...Thank you!! ^_^ This really made my day! It's been a long time since I wrote a poem. I didn't expect to win! Thanks Jennifer & Lacey! So excited for Lemniscate!


message 26: by wolf spirit (new)

wolf spirit | 51 comments Awesome Precious... You still got it in you to write poetry...Me would like to congraduate you on a job well done as well as everyone that has participated. =)


message 27: by Black Queen (new)

Black Queen (blackqueen) My favorite one I wrote:

I wanna put my tide
Water in a turning pike
And watch me spin away
Cause everything is your way

My secret has a mystery
To this mystery my secret
I am an agel with no halo
What you don't know
It makes me think
I am inside this head way too much
This impairs me

Feels like my thoughts are a crutch
Too bad you can touch me!
Now I whine from time to time
Seems like that's all we're good at

My generation
Mine turn to talk
Why don't we just do it
And Learn how to walk
Instead of just crawling?


message 28: by wolf spirit (new)

wolf spirit | 51 comments Thats cool Quantisha...it sounds like rap.


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