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message 1: by Melanie (new)

Melanie (noreally) | 46 comments Mod
Love writing about romance? Share your writing here for constructive criticism and feedback on your writing. The best romance stories will get featured!


message 2: by Jessie (new)

Jessie (jessiejean) | 11 comments Mod
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

that is the link to my story :) please read, im still writing it too


message 3: by Melanie (new)

Melanie (noreally) | 46 comments Mod
jessie wrote: "http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

that is the link to my story :) please read, im still writing it too"


I like it! Try adding more details or else its such a fast pace that it's hard to keep up. But it's really great. It's featured!


message 4: by [deleted user] (last edited Jan 29, 2011 05:13AM) (new)

I didn't find a fantasy topic, so I added it here.
Freak: Chantal Boone was living a normal life. Until she trespassed the forbidden land and was cursed to bear a life of hiding and running. When she finally thought everything was okay and that she was safe, trouble showed up in the shape of a beautiful ice-blue eyed boy.
Link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 5: by Melanie (new)

Melanie (noreally) | 46 comments Mod
Abby wrote: "I won't take it personally if you don't want to read it, though. I know it's not for everyone. :)"


Sorry but some of the members in this group might be a bit younger, we might even have a few preteens, so even if I like it, I don't want to post about it. However, if you have anything else you want to share, we'd definitely love to read about it! :)


message 6: by Melanie (new)

Melanie (noreally) | 46 comments Mod
Charlotte wrote: "I didn't find a fantasy topic, so I added it here.
Freak: Chantal Boone was living a normal life. Until she trespassed the forbidden land and was cursed to bear a life of hiding and running. When ..."


I really loved the prologue poem, so its featured under the poetry category :)


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Yay, thanks >.<


message 8: by Jessie (new)

Jessie (jessiejean) | 11 comments Mod
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
this is a new story i started a few days ago.
hope you like it


message 9: by Melanie (new)

Melanie (noreally) | 46 comments Mod
jessie wrote: "http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
this is a new story i started a few days ago.
hope you like it"


OMG I love it!
Your plotline is amazing, it really reels you in you know? Try adding more details to the surroundings, developing characters more, taking it slow. Have the same scenes happen but make them twice as long by adding descriptions and details, and check your grammar.

However, other than those things, KEEP GOING!
It's AMAZING.
Please comment here as SOON as the next chapter comes out!


message 10: by Jessie (new)

Jessie (jessiejean) | 11 comments Mod
Nicki wrote: "jessie wrote: "http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
this is a new story i started a few days ago.
hope you like it"

OMG I love it!
Your plotline is amazing, it really reels you in y..."


thank you :) I just put up another chapter.


message 11: by Melanie (new)

Melanie (noreally) | 46 comments Mod
Great! I'll go check it out right now :D


message 12: by Jessie (new)

Jessie (jessiejean) | 11 comments Mod
I started another story, I wuold like it if you read it and tell me what you think. here is the link.....

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 13: by Melanie (new)

Melanie (noreally) | 46 comments Mod
I love your stories! This one too (:

The thing I've noticed is that you jump right into your stories, but I think that if you developed them and gave a bit of a background or description it will clear it up and make them a bit less confusing. Other than that, they definitely got better!


message 14: by Alaina (new)

Alaina  (PeaceLoveWriting) here is one of my new story called "My secrets,"

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 15: by ♥Gracie♥ (new)

♥Gracie♥ | 13 comments This is a poem I wrote about a month ago.

Author's Note: I exaggerated a lot in this poem. My teacher wasn't nasty.
~Grace~

Dedicated to a teacher of mine.


You made Us:



You made us do our work,

Perfect to every detail;

Bibliographies set out correctly,

or else we'd fail.



You made us study for tests,

Flashcards, mnemonics-everything;

Everything by your standards,

Or else we'd see your temper exploding.



You made us do our work,

Putting school before pleasure;

And if we didn't have time,

You'd make us cut out leisure.



You made us do our work,

And miss out on the Christmas cheer;

But even though you did all that,

I know I'm going to miss you next year!

~~~ ~~~

This is just a poem I wrote for fun. What do people think?


message 16: by Jessie (new)

Jessie (jessiejean) | 11 comments Mod
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

this is my newist story, I really like it, so i hope you like it too


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message 18: by Reeya (last edited Apr 16, 2011 01:00PM) (new)

Reeya Patel | 7 comments http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/5...
I just started writing stories and could you give me some advice to get this horror story better. I want to get good at writing now cuz i want to be a writer but im only 11 now but still could you?


message 19: by Jessie (new)

Jessie (jessiejean) | 11 comments Mod
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

I started this one yesterday, and I like, maybe you would too?


message 20: by Reeya (new)

Reeya Patel | 7 comments I LIKE URS JESSIE BUT MAYBE U SHOULD CHANGE JACOB AND UR A WEREWOLF CUZ IT'S RESEMBLING ON TWILIGHT WHICH IM READING RIGHT NOW


message 21: by Jessie (new)

Jessie (jessiejean) | 11 comments Mod
Reeya wrote: "I LIKE URS JESSIE BUT MAYBE U SHOULD CHANGE JACOB AND UR A WEREWOLF CUZ IT'S RESEMBLING ON TWILIGHT WHICH IM READING RIGHT NOW"

Yeah...I'm gunna do that


message 22: by Reeya (new)

Reeya Patel | 7 comments COOL


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message 24: by Jessie (new)

Jessie (jessiejean) | 11 comments Mod
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
I already posed this link earlier but the story is done now and I continued it from her sisters point of view in a second book.
here is the link for it.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

Daughter of the scorpion (Ch. 3): http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 27: by Jessie (new)

Jessie (jessiejean) | 11 comments Mod
Please read my story Always and Forever
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 28: by Joel (new)

Joel (jp223) | 2 comments Have a read and enjoy, all comments are understood and taken into account

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


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