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message 1: by JSWolf (last edited Jan 16, 2011 01:44PM) (new)

JSWolf | 649 comments

The first error is this is part of The Lost Era, but they are not numbered. So #1 is out.

Next is the cover is not all that wonderful since the original image for the cover is so small. Please replace with the following cover...

next the description is sort of messy and the first paragraph is split up.

This is the proper description...

"Five years after the presumed death of Captain James T. Kirk, the U.S.S. Excelsior, commanded by Captain Hikaru Sulu, is at the forefront of exploration, diplomacy, and the defense of the Federation.

Unprecedented peace talks with the violently xenophobic Tholian Assembly trigger a deadly confrontation aboard the Excelsior. Now Sulu and his crew -- including Chekov, Rand, Chapel, Tuvok, and Akaar -- are thrust into an unexpected conflict between the Tholians and a mysterious new enemy, the Neyel...whose origins, if revealed, could lead to war with Earth itself.

As the Tholians weave a web of vengeance, the Excelsior is flung beyond the galaxy to discover the hidden truth about the alien Neyel, forcing Sulu to question where his responsibilities lie -- with the fragile peace he must preserve, or with the victims of his own world's tragic past."

And lastly is the page number. It should either be 339 for the ePub page numbering or no pager number at all. 416 is the number for the MMPB version which this is not.


message 2: by Chris (new)

Chris  (haughtc) | 159 comments Got it...

message 3: by JSWolf (new)

JSWolf | 649 comments Thank you very much.

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