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message 1: by Kyle (new)

Kyle T (kyletee) | 75 comments Post more! I'm interested to see what the tory develops into


message 2: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments This is the only thing I've written since April. It feels good to have something to post.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 3: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments Bigfoot Night Chapter Two
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


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message 6: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments Bigfoot Night Chapter Five
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 10: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments This is a new novel *road trip* called 'En Route to Sandusky, Ohio.'
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 11: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments En Route to Sandusky, Ohio
Chapter one (the above was the prologue)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 12: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments Yue and I are cowriting a novel :D And you should definitely read it. I give you THE VIRGINITY WARS!!!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 13: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments NO WAY.


message 14: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments YES WAY. YOU SHOULD GO READ AND LET US KNOW WHAT YOU THINK.


message 15: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22636 comments Mod
DUDE THAT SOUNDS LIKE A BRILLIANT BOOK.


message 16: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22636 comments Mod
I WILL. BUT RIGHT NOW I AM PACKING. AND PLANNING FINNICK-Y THINGS.


message 17: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22636 comments Mod
Which boy is yours and which boy is Colby's?


message 18: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22636 comments Mod
Awesometastic!


message 19: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments YUE I DON'T KNOW HOW TO ITALICIZE ON HERE.
Well, I do, but every time I try, it won't let me just italicize part, it italicizes the whole thing. I mean, if I put the close thing in, it stays there. IDK IF THAT EVEN MAKES SENSE.
But. I posted Where Things Stay Hidden here on Goodreads. It's been reviewed by majoy reviewrs (AKA Yue) and got great reviews.

"I don't know what to say. It's freaking awesome. Also, character is awesome. Idea is awesome. I just used awesome three (four) times in a row now. THAT'S AWESOME."

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 20: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments No, I know. Whenever I put that there, it's like, YOU KNOW WHAT? I'M JUST GONNA STAY HERE.


message 21: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments THIS MESSAGE IS IN ITALICS
Okay, NOW it works!
THIS MESSAGE IS IN BOLD.
Eff.


message 22: by Colby (last edited Apr 03, 2012 05:58PM) (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments *bump*
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Where Things Stay Hidden has a few more chapters up since the last time I posted here.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

PLEASE PLEASE read it! I really love your guys' criticism.


message 23: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments Wait, the book or that cover which I am not using but still posted?


message 24: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments AGREES. I'm not a huge fan of the cover I just made, I was simply bored.


message 25: by Mirvan. (new)

Mirvan. Ereon (mirvanereon) | 51 comments Colby wrote: "AGREES. I'm not a huge fan of the cover I just made, I was simply bored."

hahahah but it is very appealing.


message 26: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments I just prefer its old cover.
I'd post a picture, but I'll hope that you'll be interested enough to click the link and then get into the story. ;P


message 27: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments ♪NOW THE PARTY DON'T START TILL I WALK IN♫

Hi Colby!


message 28: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments Hey! (Thanks for bumping my topic. Now EVERYBODY MUST READ MY STORIES.)


message 29: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments (You are welcome. THEY ARE FORCED TO READ THEM. MWA HA HA.)


message 30: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments (Btw, have you edited your book since I last commented on it?)


message 31: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments (No I haven't.)


message 32: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments (*Glares* EMILY GO WRIIIIIIIIIIITE.)
(Even though I'm being totally hypocritical because I haven't written like all week. AND I NEED TO.)


message 33: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Colby wrote: "(*Glares* EMILY GO WRIIIIIIIIIIITE.)
(Even though I'm being totally hypocritical because I haven't written like all week. AND I NEED TO.)"


(I will when I'm on my computer. I'm on the family computer because I'm home alone.)


message 34: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments YUE HOLDEN DOESN'T WANT TO KNOW WHO WRITES WHO SO YOU BEST HOPE HE DOESN'T COME HERE.
And. Um. Yeah. I shall write after I do my Gatsby homework.
And it makes it just a little bit more awkward that I got into a chapter of WTSH and am now here to post it...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
*backs away awkwardly*


message 35: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments I already read my Gatsby chapter, so I jsut need to do book logs. It can only take me like 20 minutes, and my backpack's right over there. But I'm sooo lazy to reach for it.


message 36: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments You go study, and I'll go write book logs. BREAK.


message 37: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments YUE GO STUDY.


message 38: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments STO FLIRTING AND GO STUDYING YUE.


message 39: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments That was last night. XD I finished my homework AND MY CHAPTER OF TVW.


message 40: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments OOOH. I didn't look at the times...hehe.

Good luck with that.


message 41: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments With...what? o.0
I'm thinking about writing more WTSH tonight.


message 42: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments I read it wrong. Oops. SO OUT OF IT AND WOOZY AND RAMBLY AND WEIRD.

OOOOH. What's that short for again? xD SUPER BAD WITH ACRONYMS.


message 43: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments Where Things Stay Hidden. It's my current novel.


message 44: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments YAY. I need a drink reaaally bad. Chips and salsa without water=BAD IDEA.


message 45: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments Alright, I uploaded almost everything we have ready of TVW right now on Goodreads, which I had forgotten to do for a long time.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 46: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments Go read what?


message 47: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
The Virginity Wars is up to date again.


message 48: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments I need to read that sometime.


message 49: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments Emily [FANGIRL POWERS ACTIVATE] wrote: "I need to read that sometime."

YES YOU DO. IT DOES THE FOLLOWING:
1. Gives you an opportunity to read both mine and Yue's writing in one setting.
2. Makes you chortle.
3. Helps guarantee that Yue and I don't go insane and kill each other.
4. Gives you an entirely new outlook on life!
5. It's a story. About sex. You're a teenager. Of course you want to read it.


message 50: by Colby (new)


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