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message 2351: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) Antoine definitely - Then the killer could still be Bastian. Found out his wife was a whore etc and about the baby.


message 2352: by Sarah (last edited Jun 11, 2012 08:34AM) (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "Antoine definitely - Then the killer could still be Bastian. Found out his wife was a whore etc and about the baby."

Wrong again, but there were possible suspects in the chapter where the estate agent fell down Charlene's cellar steps trying to escape the hounds from hell! And I underline the word possible!


message 2353: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) Damn it! i will have to wait to see what unfolds.


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Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "Damn it! i will have to wait to see what unfolds."

Yep, if you deleted the relevant chapter you will have to wait while the ball of wool unravels.


message 2355: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) I have not deleted any of the chapters, but I will wait, because I am sure you will add more twists and turns in to it ;o)


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Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "I have not deleted any of the chapters, but I will wait, because I am sure you will add more twists and turns in to it ;o)"

Yep good choice! I had better do the dishes from lunch before Alain gets back to watch the pesky football!


message 2357: by Sarah (last edited Jun 12, 2012 12:29AM) (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Morning hun

I give in, Lori doesn't want me to do anything she just wants to walk away. I told her that wasn't a good idea the devil's spawn needs a lesson in humility but she's having none of it.

I can't undo the stuff I've done so I'll wait and see if anything comes of it if it doesn't Lori will become another statistic!

I'm not happy about letting her down but its her choice not mine, you can't help those who won't help themselves.

How are you today, better I hope, the suns out here lol it might dry the washing I put out yesterday which got thoroughly soaked when it rained.

You gave me an idea for another twist when you thought it was Antoine, a brilliant twist even though I do say so myself, and yes you are going to have to wait and see to find out what!

Mean aren't I!


message 2358: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) I know what you mean, poor Lori. I hope her sister burns in hell for what she has done to Lori.

Another twist - oh I love it. Don't worry I have the patience, I love it slowly unfolding, hence if you go down the route you spoke about, i.e. with the agencies, A tangled Web is the perfect title.

Well the swelling has gone down considerably but the eye lids are still red and a little sore now. I have my eye drops and my eye wash. The skin around the area feels very tight as if I have been crying for a week non-stop.

How are you today? Unfortunately it is still raining here. Not stopped since Saturday.


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Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "I know what you mean, poor Lori. I hope her sister burns in hell for what she has done to Lori.

Another twist - oh I love it. Don't worry I have the patience, I love it slowly unfolding, hence i..."


Me still pissed off with Lori's sister and wondering why she told me those things and expected me not to try and do something to help?

I should have been going to a funeral today but I would have to go alone, catholic mass too, I'll just get a condolance card and send it I didn't know the person that well, he played boules with us a couple of years ago. Alain knows his family but he's at work and I'm not taking mother to another funeral while the memory of burying her eldest son is still fresh in her mind.

The tangled web that was a suggestion for The thin blue line, not the house of death - I'm torn between Cally's Secret and the things we do for love!

Did your specialist suggest wearing dark glasses to protect your eyes from the glare?


message 2360: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) I knew that - LOL I am having a blonde day clearly!!!

I think it is more then Cally's Secret - as they all seem to have secrets. Maybe secrets among friends!

No dark glasses, there is not much glare on my screen plus I have anti glare coating on my glasses.

Besides should be a little quiet today, clinics going on all day, will need to type tomorrow so my eyes can rest a bit.


message 2361: by Sarah (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "I knew that - LOL I am having a blonde day clearly!!!

I think it is more then Cally's Secret - as they all seem to have secrets. Maybe secrets among friends!

No dark glasses, there is not much ..."


Friends and secrets, or just plain secrets! I don't know I was supposed to be going in to Pontivy this afternoon with Alain to look at a new fridge, a big fridge as we have two on the go at the moment but they're old 14 years and not energy efficient. reason I said going, the suns out and Alain will cry off to plant his leeks that he couldn't plant yesterday.

The offer's on until 17th so one afternoon this week we'll go and look hopefully.

Lol I forgot you said you wore glasses, I'm getting quite a little following collecting on Twitter every day sees three or four new followers, other writers, literary agents, publishers, actors.


message 2362: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) Same here. You requested to follow me, but when I went to approve it, it was not there!

I only wear them for computer work and sometimes reading.

maybe Friends With Secrets!


message 2363: by Sarah (last edited Jun 12, 2012 01:29AM) (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "Same here. You requested to follow me, but when I went to approve it, it was not there!

I only wear them for computer work and sometimes reading.

maybe Friends With Secrets!"


You're already following me, I must have been having a blonde day there, I have been mentioned on twitter by a man writing an article on Indie authors and books. I told him what was happening with regard to my book as yet I haven't given him their name but I have intimated I am prepared to name and shame if they don't respond to my last email where I informed them they are in breach of contract!

They do say god works in mysterious ways, perhaps this is my reward for trying to help Lori, this man falling in my lap so to speak!


message 2364: by Sharon (last edited Jun 12, 2012 01:28AM) (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) Whats the saying - Swings and Roundabouts. I think it will all work out perfectly to your liking, when you eventually hear back from them. Especially after the last email you sent them - robbing gits!


message 2365: by Sarah (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "Whats the saying - Swings and Roundabouts. I think it will all work out perfectly to your liking, when you eventually hear back from them. Especially after the last email you sent them - robbing ..."

An acknowledgement they were actually looking into it would have been nice I sent it Friday afternoon, they would have been open for business they are 6 hours behind me.

I am cold, although the sun is out it isn't warm and it still looks as if it might rain later.

Lol Alain went very quiet when England scored first last night! I watched without sound, I had my mp3 plugged into me tabs made it bearable, just!


message 2366: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) LOL then France equalised!

It is yucky here today, I am a little cold as well. I have a healthy chicken and spinich lasagne for lunch today. Need something warm inside me! Think I need another cup of coffee to warm me up a bit.


message 2367: by Sarah (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "LOL then France equalised!

It is yucky here today, I am a little cold as well. I have a healthy chicken and spinich lasagne for lunch today. Need something warm inside me! Think I need another ..."


Yeah - life sucks and then you die! and I'm sure there was a handball incident right before the ball went into the net, it was touched by an english player before the goalie. I miss nothing and the player that scored the goal was telling everyone to keep quiet, he kept putting his finger to his lips and according to the commentary he said Ta geul which translated means shut your mouth!

I demand an enquiry!

And coffee sounds great, I'll swith the old expresso on and fire up a decaff frothy coffee!


message 2368: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) I'll be round in 5, I'll bring the biscuits. ;o)

I was on my way home from work so saw none of it. Don't particularly think I am missing much.


message 2369: by Sarah (last edited Jun 12, 2012 01:49AM) (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "I'll be round in 5, I'll bring the biscuits. ;o)

I was on my way home from work so saw none of it. Don't particularly think I am missing much."


Yeah but the ref was blind and biased towards the French! I annoy Alain when I watch because I shout out in English!


message 2370: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) The ref's always are. I still say the best ref was that Bald Italian one that was around for a few World Cups.


message 2371: by Sarah (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "The ref's always are. I still say the best ref was that Bald Italian one that was around for a few World Cups."

I don't think I know any bald Italian refs, I have an iteresting character coming into play, he's Italian works in the pizzaria down from Charlene's house, goes by the name of Antonio Giovanni, see if you can work out where he fits in!


message 2372: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) Antonio - Antoine very similar - hmmm the young girls love interest!


message 2373: by Sarah (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "Antonio - Antoine very similar - hmmm the young girls love interest!"

Very good, but I'm not going to tell you the what's and the wherefor's all I will say he is a crucial piece of the the puzzle behind the murders!


message 2374: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) Hmmm, a witness - a twin brother - sorry I am digging now. I can wait ;o)


message 2375: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) Hmmm, a witness - a twin brother - sorry I am digging now. I can wait ;o)


message 2376: by Sarah (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "Hmmm, a witness - a twin brother - sorry I am digging now. I can wait ;o)"

Yep and you need a larger spade, cold, very cold almost glacial!

Lunch is on couscous today the girls will love it Alain will eat it and pick out the courgettes and peppers that he can see andput them on my plate, he always does and both of us will skirt around the chick peas cos they are always as hard as bullets!

And before you say why add them they were in the frozen bag of couscous veg I bought, Lazy moolie that I am!


message 2377: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) LOL - Damn it!

I quite like couscous minus the courgette of course.


message 2378: by Sarah (last edited Jun 12, 2012 03:39AM) (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "LOL - Damn it!

I quite like couscous minus the courgette of course."


Right I now have to scoot off for a while TTYL


message 2379: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) TTFN


message 2380: by Sarah (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "TTFN"

The Couscous disappeared like it was going out of fashion, kids are amazing the things you think they won't eat because they are spicy they love!

Lol all the courgettes have disintegrated Alan won't be able to pick them out, he will have to eat healthy today whether he likes it or not!


message 2381: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) LOL - oh dear poor Alain.

I might have an early lunch, getting hungry now.


message 2382: by Sarah (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "LOL - oh dear poor Alain.

I might have an early lunch, getting hungry now."


Not much chance of that still waiting for Alain good job I had a bowl of porrige for breakfast, good for chloresterol I don't have and other stuff and I love it, without sugar or salt just natural, Sophie eat it the same way.

I just had an energetic moment and hoovered up the dog hairs, eclair is adorable but hairy and moulting!

Sun is still shining so no chance of dragging Alain to Pontivy this afternoon, his leeks will win by a head!
Talk of the devil he just arrived!


message 2383: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) Men - as punctual as ever - lol


message 2384: by Sarah (last edited Jun 12, 2012 05:45AM) (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "Men - as punctual as ever - lol"

Yes bless, he's kn*ck**d eaten couscous left the chickpeas didn't find the courgettes or peppers now I know why the girls wolfed it down, it was really nice!

First time I've made couscous too! I'm being followed thick and fast today at least 10 hits! And a free ebook to thank me for following him which I started reading When the Siren Calls by Tom Barry a suspense romance, it is really quite good, the bit I've read definitely our kind of book!


message 2385: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) Hmmm impressive and that was nice of Tom Barry.


message 2386: by Sarah (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "Hmmm impressive and that was nice of Tom Barry."

I thought so too, on both counts.
Mr Snoozy is snoring gently on the sofa!


message 2387: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) That sounds just like my other half, always falls asleep after eating, hence we eat late during the week otherwise I wont see him at all.


message 2388: by Sarah (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "That sounds just like my other half, always falls asleep after eating, hence we eat late during the week otherwise I wont see him at all."

Alain doesn't always fall asleep but the poor thing has been up since 3.15 this morning! Trouble is in order to get up at this ridiculous hour he has to be in bed for 9.00 p.m.


message 2389: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) Mine is normally in bed by 9.00-9.30 bless him, we are both up at 5 and then he is driving all day. When he goes to bed I have me time ;o)


message 2390: by Sarah (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "Mine is normally in bed by 9.00-9.30 bless him, we are both up at 5 and then he is driving all day. When he goes to bed I have me time ;o)"

Me too, Dr House last in the present series this evening, pity for Sophie she wanted to watch George of the Jungle with me. Not a chance!

Hang on a minute you need to get your beauty sleep too, I get mine in two halves Midnight to 3.15 and then 3.30 to 7.30! The things we do for love lol, getting up and making his breakfast was novel for the first month and now he expects it!


message 2391: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) I don't sleep that much anyway. When he has gone to bed, is normally when my programes come on or the chick flics. And if I have a good cry whilst watching any films, he wont be taking the mick out of me - lol


message 2392: by Sarah (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "I don't sleep that much anyway. When he has gone to bed, is normally when my programes come on or the chick flics. And if I have a good cry whilst watching any films, he wont be taking the mick o..."

Alain usually ends up in tears too he's a big softie, we both cried at Lassie in our younger days!


message 2393: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) Monst is always crying and I try and hold it in - lol


message 2394: by Sarah (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "Monst is always crying and I try and hold it in - lol"

So why does he take the mick out of you? Men!


message 2395: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) He doesn't, but I feel that he would - me being silly - lol


message 2396: by Sarah (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "He doesn't, but I feel that he would - me being silly - lol"

What are you like! Chapter 22 got interupted by a mercy dash to rescue my washing from the rain!


message 2397: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) Oh no, it has finally stopped here, but it will probably start just as I get of the train, as per usual.


message 2398: by Sarah (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Sharon wrote: "Oh no, it has finally stopped here, but it will probably start just as I get of the train, as per usual."

Well it looks as if it's set for the night here!


message 2399: by Sarah (new)

Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments Afternoon,

I've been wading through my new followers lists it took me a while to get going on twitter, its one of those new fangled things like web cams!

Mrs Robinson is still on the prowl despite the fact her new boyfriend is coming over next week she's still window shopping! Tart!


message 2400: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Atkinson (darkened_angel) Afternoon (almost)

I know what you mean, twitter can be very addictive.

Maybe your Mrs Robinson should read Fifty Shades - LMAO - Did you ever get the picture?


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