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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

hey! please read my story, beauty liquid! there is only one chapter up at the moment, but I will be stringing together the second in a few hours. thanks for commenting & liking!

message 2: by Paige (new)

Paige (thewordshakermockingjay) sure, but can you post a link to it?

message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

i am such an idiot. i forgot the link.



message 4: by Paige (new)

Paige (thewordshakermockingjay) So far, I really like and can't wait to hear what happens to Claire. It really is an interesting idea you have going on!!! Whatever you do, you MUST write more! :)

message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

thank you. :D do you have anything you would like me to change? is anything confusing?

thanks again for 'liking' it! i will definitly write more.

message 6: by Paige (new)

Paige (thewordshakermockingjay) I just looked over it again, and seriously could not find anything to change or that was confusing! Tell me when you write more!!!!

message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

:) alright then. i will update on this topic once i have another chapter up.

message 8: by Paige (new)

Paige (thewordshakermockingjay) ok, thanks!

message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

chapter two is up! its mostly about claire's view on beauty, her realizing that she might have been mean to people, sort of being "brainwashed" by the girls that she is doing the right thing, and a short excerpt of the future, after she becomes "beautiful."

message 10: by Paige (new)

Paige (thewordshakermockingjay) Again, it was really good!

message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

i wrote a small "note" that explains some views on beauty that i have been thinking of.

message 12: by Paige (new)

Paige (thewordshakermockingjay) it's really interesting. hope you write more

message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

thank you for following it! im glad somebody's enjoying it.

message 14: by Paige (new)

Paige (thewordshakermockingjay) sure no problem!

message 15: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 18, 2010 09:50AM) (new)

third chapter is up. i'm bringing in the male character. i think im going to just write a small outline ... and then add the details.

message 16: by Paige (new)

Paige (thewordshakermockingjay) I like this chapter a lot, but I thought it was a little weird that you went from first person to third person. and i'm not sure how nate fits in with the story, but I guess I'll find out!

message 17: by Paige (new)

Paige (thewordshakermockingjay) are you going to write more? Just curious...

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