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message 1: by MollyRena (new)

MollyRena give us something you have wrote and share it with us.

message 2: by [deleted user] (last edited Oct 24, 2010 11:03AM) (new)

I have written a ton of stuff :). Here is a link to a short story I wrote entitled "The Beast Within".

message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks, Nate, I'll check 'em out. Feel free to check mine out, too. Comment to your heart's content :).

message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

Hey, Nate. I read the "Prelude" from the link. It's really good so far. I was just wondering what kind of feedback are you looking for?

message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Well, so far I really like it. I was mainly asking about grammar/spelling/typo kinds of things. I'm not brutal with this, but I just wondered if that was something you might be looking for.

I'm still on the first chapter, and I really like it. The prelude with Alex and Nate was really interesting. it made me want to keep reading :).

message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Well, if you want a proof-reader, I'm your girl :P. If you want, I could copy and paste your story into Word, and if I see anything that needs correcting, I can do it in a different color font, so you can see the corrections.

But this might not be what you're looking for, so just let me know :). Either way, I'm loving the story.

message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Well, so far, I've only seen a couple of things. I'm not that far into the first chapter, so I'll start over from the beginning and make any needed corrections as I go. Do you want me to email it to you when I get done?

message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

That's cool. I keep mine private too.

message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh, one question. Is this story supposed to be in present tense or past tense? It jumps in tense a few times, so I just wanted to know which one you were going for.

message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay, will do.

message 11: by S.E. (new)

S.E. Carter (lovesecarter) hey, so i've writen a lot, but here's one Im most proud of right now

message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

Link? :)

message 13: by S.E. (new)

S.E. Carter (lovesecarter)

is called dusk and i hope you enjoy it!!

message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

Do you want comments?

message 15: by S.E. (new)

S.E. Carter (lovesecarter) yes please i would love people telling me what to write more into and all but right now its in a draft mode

message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

Actually, I already started reading it earlier. I think got about five chapters or so read...but I haven't had time to make any comments. I'll leave them when I finish it, though :).

message 17: by S.E. (new)

S.E. Carter (lovesecarter) cool how do you like it so far? is it okay? i'm woried about a few things, but those can be ajusted if needed

message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay, Sarah; I just finished it :). I love Anita and Dimitri's story. It's sweet without being too sweet. You can tell they really love each other.

There were some grammar/spelling/punctuation errors, but the story was really good :).

And, I really like a happy ending. Honestly, when I saw the title for the last chapter, it had me worried; but everything came together very nicely :).

I actually think you could expand this into a larger story if you wanted; but the beauty of what you've written is that it stands well on its own. You should be proud of it; I really like it :).

message 19: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 33 comments I am writing a book called, War of the Wolves, it's not finished yet, still working on it, but I do have six chapters out. :D

message 20: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 33 comments Here's the link,

And thanks for inviting me. :)

message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

Hi Amelia. First off, I love your name :). Secondly, when we read this, do you want comments?

message 22: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 33 comments Thanks, :D

And yes, I'd love comments on what people think of it, and if it needs something more.

message 23: by MollyRena (new)

MollyRena I'll go ahead and say I have writen a few books. one is called moonstar and i only have the frist chapter done on my page that rempids me i mite want to type some more on it.:)

message 25: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 33 comments I'd love to read all of your guys stories sometime. :D

message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

There are way too many to read, right? :)

message 27: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 33 comments I know! >_<

message 28: by S.E. (new)

S.E. Carter (lovesecarter) Candace (Amare Infinitum) wrote: "Okay, Sarah; I just finished it :). I love Anita and Dimitri's story. It's sweet without being too sweet. You can tell they really love each other.

There were some grammar/spelling/punctuation ..."

omg thanks! im actully just working my brain to what i could totally put in and sorry bout grammer and all that i think i've always gotten a b or c in english class and i just don't edit quite to much like i should and thank you so much for saying all good things it means i'm getting a little bit better! when i first started it i thought total reck but its come out nicly if you have anything i could read it would be great to read somthing of yours i'll post more of my stories as i get more well good at letting other read my work bye!

message 29: by S.E. (new)

S.E. Carter (lovesecarter) molly i'll have to come over and help a bit with writting you need to have the diologe all spaced out i'll show you at school if i ever get my notebook back from em!

message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

Hey Sarah,

Here is a link to one of my short stories.

But these at this link below are significantly shorter, so whichever appeals to you more :).

message 31: by S.E. (new)

S.E. Carter (lovesecarter) k thanks!!

message 33: by S.E. (new)

S.E. Carter (lovesecarter) k so here are all the stories i have ugh some are bad if you ask me!!

message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

I read your poems. They're incredible :). You are really talented.

message 36: by Mitch (new)

Mitch (i-am-not-real) Thank you, Candace. I just wrote one a few minutes ago:

message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

You're going to get me hooked, Mitch :P.

message 38: by Mitch (new)

Mitch (i-am-not-real) Thanks.

message 39: by [deleted user] (new)


message 40: by Mitch (new)

Mitch (i-am-not-real) :)

message 41: by S.E. (new)

S.E. Carter (lovesecarter) just wrote two more things!! lol
so i didn't mean for me to get stuck in more things to get caught up in, but i just kinda happened. I was in the car and just could not read! so i wipped out my phone that has a notepad in it and started typing awat on the keybord. I wrote up two things
Skyliee's journy
With my Lef
both kinda sad or what i waant is for them to be sad. lol so here is where you can see them!

1. this is skyliee's journy (Sky-lee i is like non-exsisting!)

2. this is with my Lef

and I also have one called one way ticket

message 42: by S.E. (new)

S.E. Carter (lovesecarter) @nate
posted back on my page

message 43: by S.E. (new)

S.E. Carter (lovesecarter) Nate wrote: "Sarah wrote: "@nate
posted back on my page"

replied lol"

has replide

message 44: by MollyRena (new)

MollyRena hey hey

message 45: by S.E. (new)

S.E. Carter (lovesecarter) so i've finnished this one little story. I still need to prof-read it but its a cute little story for youngsters

message 46: by Nate (new)

Nate @Amelia Left a comment on your gr page. Very good descriptions, the sceen was easy to picture.

message 47: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 33 comments Nate wrote: "@Amelia Left a comment on your gr page. Very good descriptions, the sceen was easy to picture."

Th-thank you so much! That's one of the best comments I've ever gotten when I started writing!

-happy tears and hugs-

message 48: by Nate (new)

Nate @Amelia LOL np ...I always try to give some type of feed back if i have time, cus i hate when ppl just say 'I liked it' ...I want feed back! that's why a friend and me started our own writers group 'Quill & Ink' ..for ppl who really like to write, & want to get/give feedback. We try to help each other out.


message 49: by MollyRena (new)

MollyRena hey!!

message 50: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 33 comments @Nate. Thanks. :)

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