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message 1: by Jodi (new)

Jodi Langston (JodiLangston) | 6 comments Love

A delicate flower
whose beauty enraptures us
drawing us into each silken layer
until we get too close
fragile souls caught on sharp thorns
we struggle desperately to be free

message 2: by Nyghtmare, My heart is dead and cold. I'm just truly Nyghtmare now (new)

Nyghtmare | 540 comments Mod
I like it.

message 3: by Jodi (new)

Jodi Langston (JodiLangston) | 6 comments Loveless Sea

One day you walked beside me
The next day I was free
Adrift on the endless ocean
A sailor lost at sea

No steady hands to guide me
As I face the violent storms
No light shines in the window
No harbor safe and warm

Alone I drift through time
Upon the loveless sea
A lost and lonely sailor
No heart to pine for me

message 4: by Jodi (new)

Jodi Langston (JodiLangston) | 6 comments Laura wrote: "I like it."
Thanks :-)

message 5: by Rachel (new)

Rachel | 24 comments I like the way you write :)

message 6: by Meagan (new)

Meagan Patterson | 17 comments I loved the second one. I really enjoy rhyming poems and not many people write them now the second was my favorite!

message 7: by Jen (new)

Jen | 279 comments Mod
Both poems are great, but I agree with Meagan that the second one is my favorite! Keep up the great work:D

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