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message 1: by Carina (last edited Oct 09, 2010 11:32AM) (new)

Carina Hokey Dokie! So this is a poem that I wrote yesterday. I have no idea what to call it though.

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Oh formidable foe!
How fierce your facade.
The web you weave
Tumultuous.
Your spinner’s hands
Deception.
Oh formidable foe!
My friend.
My dear
Poison.
My siren
Song.
Oh formidable foe!
How I pity you.
So disgraced
Your reputation.
Your lack of wit
A joke.
Oh formidable foe!
How lovely the day.
So sweet
Without you.
No more
Despair.


If anyone has critiques or comments, I'd love to hear them :D


Everley Sharp, the Clankinist (theawesomeestreaderpersonevah) | 39 comments Long fancy cool words!


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

I love the word 'formidable' it just sounds so epic. Thumbs up from here! C=


message 4: by Jen (new)

Jen great job! love it


Everley Sharp, the Clankinist (theawesomeestreaderpersonevah) | 39 comments Facade, formidable, and foe are all cool.


message 6: by Angela (new)

Angela (angelasuba) | 15 comments Nice poem!


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