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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

Great! Can't wait to read them!

message 2: by Carina (last edited Sep 18, 2010 07:07AM) (new)

Carina Separating the dialogue would make it a bit easier to read but if you don't want to have it that way then we're not forcing you. I'm wondering what the humans want the horses for and why the horses feel that they have to run away. An awesome beginning, Arwen! I hope you continue :D

message 3: by Locé (new)

Locé Styx Ảrwen Undomiel (epic) wrote: "You are not my boss. Nope, I have seen some other authors put it a diffrent way. So, sorry.

And I can use what words I want"

good for you :)

message 4: by Carina (new)

Carina Oh that makes sense! Maybe you could put that somewhere in the first chapter or hint at the fact that they're scared of humans for just that reason. Just a suggestion :)

message 5: by Locé (new)

Locé Styx i like it :)

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