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message 1: by Emilie, La Scriba Bella (new)

Emilie (mrslestatdelioncourt) | 301 comments Mod
“Prologue”
Her heart hammered, her breath came quick and sharp. Her eyes darted to the couple standing 100 feet in front of her and to the danger they faced. She looked at the young man cradling the sobbing frightened young woman. He looked straight at her with wide terrified eyes. “Help us!” he seemed to cry. Her body darted forward without her mind telling it to, the decision was made long ago. It was something she didn’t have to even decide, it was her fate. There was a blast and then she, the boy, the crying girl, and the danger were all engulfed in darkness.


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Nice lol. Very nice.


message 3: by Emilie, La Scriba Bella (new)

Emilie (mrslestatdelioncourt) | 301 comments Mod
Grazie


message 4: by Emilie, La Scriba Bella (new)

Emilie (mrslestatdelioncourt) | 301 comments Mod
I have this up on writing under the title Bimini. Go check it! please..


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