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message 1: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
Post any song's that you have written here!


message 2: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
i haven't written any songs of note....


message 3: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
((Your on!))


message 4: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
((yes indeed....yes indeed))


message 5: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
((lol))


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) I've tried to write songs, but I dnt like them


message 7: by Sandy (new)

Sandy (sandycrow) | 8 comments I've written 30 songs, not all of them finished and some of 'em stinnnkkk


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) I'm sure they're good


message 9: by Sandy (new)

Sandy (sandycrow) | 8 comments Okay I'm posting my first song here - it's rather sappy, and a month or two after writing it I realized the chorus is mostly copying another song. Haha, anyway I'm paranoid about plagiarism so I won't post any of my good songs :D

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Saw the look you gave me in the library;
Quickly looked back down as if I wouldn't see.
Drives me crazy when you act like you don't care;
I know even you must see something there.

CHORUS:
If you could turn the lights back on,
Maybe then you'd see
Everything that's going on
Should drive you back to me.
All of the hurtful things you said,
I thought you really meant them.
Emotionless, as if you're dead,
The feeling's coming back -again.

I wish you would stop playing with my fragile heart;
All the things you said to me tore me apart.
It's obvious that everything is changing now;
I wish that I could stop it but I don't know how.

If you could turn the lights back on,
Maybe then you'd see
Everything that's going on
Should drive you back to me.
It's different, but I don't know why;
I see it in your eyes when
You look at me, and that's when I
Can tell it's coming back -again.

BRIDGE:
Simply say, "I love you";
It's the least that you can do.
Those words went unspoken;
Both our hearts are broken now.

Would you just turn the lights back on,
And maybe then you'd see
Everything that's going on
Should drive you back to me.


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) I think that sounds good.


message 11: by Sandy (new)

Sandy (sandycrow) | 8 comments Lolz you don't have to say that ;) I wrote it about two years ago, and now I really don't agree with the message. It's kind of self-centered like, "You know you waaaant me, dude…come baaack…" Yeah. Dating isn't all that great. :D


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) It isn't. lol. And I see what you mean about the message, but I still like it way better than any of the songs I've tried writing.


message 13: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
lol, none of my poems are long enough to be made into songs!


message 14: by Juniper (new)

Juniper (junielove) all the songs ive written end up turning weird


message 15: by Keara (last edited Feb 14, 2011 07:39PM) (new)

Keara (kearachristine) I've written a couple. >_> I only have one slightly-good one though...

Another Want

I want a nerd boy
Somebody funny
Someone obsessed
With the original trilogy
He’d get my jokes
Might even laugh
Nerd boys
Are just where it’s at.


Am I asking too much?
Just overthinking?
Narrowing it down
To slimmer pickings?
I don’t care
Though I prob’ly should.
Be mine forever?
I just know he would.


I know it sounds strange
But I really don’t care
How much money he makes
Or his color of hair.
We’d be in love
Our love won’t quit.
Watchin’ “Addams Family”
To laugh at cousin It.


He’d be great at English
Science and math.
Tuesday nights
We’d give our dogs a bath.
He’d have glasses
That were actu’lly prescription.
Know his way
Around a decent kitchen.


So
In conclusion
According to this song
I guess I’m losing.
‘Sides the Vlogbrothers
Boys aren’t like this.
My nerd boy
Simply does not exist.



message 16: by Juniper (new)

Juniper (junielove) thats rly good! and funny!


message 17: by Keara (new)

Keara (kearachristine) Thank you! ^_^


message 18: by Juniper (new)

Juniper (junielove) us welcome! lol


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) i made this up yesterday.

Soldier

So many miles away
Seperated by the deepest seas
But it has to be this way
Have to stand up for what I believe
I know it's hard for you, it's hard for me too
But this is what I have t do,
Don't worry I'll be coming home soon

CHORUS:
The American flag waving beside me
Have to stand up for what I believe
Please don't shed any tears for me
We both knew someday I would leave
Off into war I go
Pray for me,
Soon I'll be coming home.

Battles fiercer than I thought I'd ever see
I close my eyes and say a silent prayer
But still don't cry for me,
I'm safe behind yet another layer
I know it's hard for you! (x2)
But this is what I have to do
Don't worry I'll be coming home soon

CHORUS:
The American flag waving beside me
Have to stand up for what I believe
Please don't shed any tears for me
We both knew someday I would leave
Off into war I go
Pray for me,
Soon I'll be coming home.

BRIDGE:
Say a prayer for me, I'll be coming back soon
Sooner than you can believe, I'm growing sick of what I see
I'm coming back home, to wipe the tears from your face
Close your eyes, I'll softly bring your lips to mine
Say a prayer for me, because I'm coming home sooner than you believe

CHORUS:
The American flag waving beside me
Have to stand up for what I believe
Please don't shed any tears for me
We both knew someday I would leave
Off into war I go
Pray for me,
Soon I'll be coming home.

(yeah)
Off into war I go,
Pray for me,
Soon I'll be coming home

Just say a prayer for me!
I'm coming home sooner than you think


message 20: by Sandy (new)

Sandy (sandycrow) | 8 comments OH MY WORD I LOVE THAT :')


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) Thanx! :)


message 22: by Keara (new)

Keara (kearachristine) That's incredible. O_o Thanks for making me feel inferior. :P


message 23: by Sandy (new)

Sandy (sandycrow) | 8 comments Hahaha me too


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) Thanx. And your guys songs were good! lol


message 25: by Keara (new)

Keara (kearachristine) Mine wasn't!


message 26: by Sandy (new)

Sandy (sandycrow) | 8 comments Ya really DON'T SAY THAT!!! Lolz btw, hi Keara. *waves* :)


message 27: by Keara (new)

Keara (kearachristine) YO SANDY. :D

Long time, no see.


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

Sandy wrote: "Okay I'm posting my first song here - it's rather sappy, and a month or two after writing it I realized the chorus is mostly copying another song. Haha, anyway I'm paranoid about plagiarism so I wo..."

I love that! I totally have a tune in my head! I actually should be doing my work, but I'm homeschooled, I almost always get my work done!!! ^.^


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) MYHAPPYMONSTER wrote: "Mine wasn't!"

yes it was! i liked it


message 30: by Keara (new)

Keara (kearachristine) xD Okay, you're the only one then.


message 31: by Sandy (new)

Sandy (sandycrow) | 8 comments ♫♪Music is Life♪♫ wrote: "I love that! I totally have a tune in my head! I actually should be doing my work, but I'm homeschooled, I almost always get my work done!!! ^.^"

Hey I'm homeschooled too!


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

Sandy wrote: "♫♪Music is Life♪♫ wrote: "I love that! I totally have a tune in my head! I actually should be doing my work, but I'm homeschooled, I almost always get my work done!!! ^.^"

Hey I'm homeschooled too!"


Yeah, I know cause you're ina group called Homeschoolers. I'm in it too. Crazy huh?


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

MYHAPPYMONSTER wrote: "I've written a couple. >_> I only have one slightly-good one though...

Another Want

I want a nerd boy
Somebody funny
Someone obsessed
With the original trilogy
He’d get my jokes
Might even laugh
..."


That's so funny!!! I have a song, it's just that it isn't ready yet.


message 34: by Keara (new)

Keara (kearachristine) n_n Thank you. :D


message 35: by Juniper (new)

Juniper (junielove) I've got part of the first verse of a song im currently writing.

I've been holding onto the dream,
I'm gonna let it all seap through the seems,
I'm gonna scream and shout,
Till my lungs run out,
I'm holding onto the dream.



Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) sounds kool


message 37: by Juniper (new)

Juniper (junielove) thanks :D


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) welcome :)


message 39: by Juniper (new)

Juniper (junielove) i had weird music going with it too, but it sounds weird


message 40: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
MYHAPPYMONSTER wrote: "I've written a couple. >_> I only have one slightly-good one though...

Another Want

I want a nerd boy
Somebody funny
Someone obsessed
With the original trilogy
He’d get my jokes
Might even laugh
..."


that's practically everything i want too! i have few other requirements though...

i USED to be homeschooled :( not anymore though. bummer.


message 41: by [deleted user] (new)

I'd do a lot to be public-schooled again. D :


message 42: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
that's weird! i guess if you grew up with it though...
i loved being homeschooled!


message 43: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
Wow, these songs are amazing!!!! I couldn't ever write a song lol,
@ Ebony- you are/were home schooled???


message 44: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
yeah! didn't i tell you?? i can't believe i never told you!! i was homeschooled until 6th grade when i started at lansing!


message 45: by Kiele (last edited Mar 06, 2011 07:25AM) (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
you did really good in school even though it was the first time :)


message 46: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
well thanks! i thought so too! XD


message 47: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
XD


message 48: by [deleted user] (new)

Urgh...I'd do anything to be PS again! I pretty much lost my best friend because of this stupid homeschooling! Now she wears make-up (and it looks terrible on her) and's cussing and everything and now I'm afraid she doesn't want to be my BFF any more because she might think I'm such a goody-two-shoes! I feel like I'm gonna cry now...I've been raised in a Christian family which is why I HATE cussing! I'd do anything to KILL IT!

..........now I need a donut with maple frosting/icing/whatever-the-heck-it-is. *weak smile*


message 49: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
I'm sorry :( I'd hate to lose a best friend that way. I agree with the hating cussing. Hope you get your donut. *weakly smiles back*


message 50: by [deleted user] (new)

naw. I don't really need a donut. I'm gonna get fat if I get one. LOL! And I think I may have found a better match for me. Still, it's really hard to let my former BFF go, just like that. I guess it happened over the winter time, you know, to cold to go outside early in the morning. She doesn't even put make-up on right. She looks terrible with it on. *sighs* I guess I ought to just...I can't say it. Anyways, I don't want to make you feeling bad too, so let's switch topics.


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