Early Days~ Warriors Roleplay discussion

16 views
William's Characters > Fireash of ThunderClan

Comments Showing 1-6 of 6 (6 new)    post a comment »
dateDown arrow    newest »

message 1: by William (last edited Sep 23, 2010 04:29AM) (new)

William (williamtkdluke) Name: Fireash
Gender: M
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Warrior
Appearence: http://www.freewebs.com/hollyfeather/...
Personality: Fireash is full of energy and loves to catch fresh kill. Although he's not perfect at it he still loves it. He and his brother are both proud to be part of ThunderClan. He also loves wandering aimlessy. One day he hopes to earn an important role in the clan like leader of deputy. His fighting is okay but he's not the greatest fighter, what's okay though is his defense.
Kin: Silentwind (brohter)
Crush: ?
Mate: ?
Apprentice:
Other: lost his mother after birth.


message 2: by William (last edited Sep 23, 2010 04:31AM) (new)

William (williamtkdluke) Name: Silentwind
Gender: M
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: ?
Appearance: http://www.itchmo.com/wp-content/uplo...
Personality: Silentwind is excellent at fighting for he can stalk really well, but he is not very good at catching prey. He moves fast which is another one of his advantages. He and his brother are both proud to be part of ThunderClan. He enjoys patrolling the border and watching for enemy cats. His brother is giving him a few pointers on how to be a better hunter and it appears to be working.
Kin: Fireash (brother)
Crush: ?
Mate: ?
Apprentice:
Other: lost his mother after birth.


message 3: by Kayla, ...that she'll never see again! (new)

Kayla | 1115 comments Mod
They are supposed to be in their own separate folders for each character, but those actually look pretty good. Try to elongate the personality, history and appearance. You could put a link for the appearance.
The rank would be warrior or elder since all the Importants are taken. He would have an apprentice, not a mentor. :P Basically same for both of them.


message 4: by SpazzyJazzy (new)

SpazzyJazzy I would add something, but Kayla's pretty much covered it. The Appearance must be 3 sentences long, and the Personality and History five. Other than that they look like they're going to be some awesome characters ^.^


message 5: by SpazzyJazzy (new)

SpazzyJazzy By the way Yum-yum, it's seperate topics. Not folders :P


message 6: by Kayla, ...that she'll never see again! (new)

Kayla | 1115 comments Mod
I knew that. :P


back to top