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Mistclaw padded into camp with a mouthful of prey. He dropped the prey onto the fresh-kill pile and began to groom himself in the middle of the clearing.

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Blackwater padded up to Mistclaw. "Mistclaw, will you go on border patrol with me?"

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"Of course." Mistclaw's deep voice purred.

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Mistclaw padded out of camp with Blackwater.

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Mistclaw scented the air. "The territory markings are old on the Starpack side. We need to go renew them."

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Mistclaw led the patrol towards the boundary. "What's wrong, Hollystar?" He murmured.

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Mistclaw scented the air. "Yes......."He muttered. "What do you think it is?" He asked.

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Blackwater turned around in surprise. "Hollystar! ow did you get here?"

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Mistclaw shrugged. "She followed us. Besides, we don't need to question our leader."

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Carson Lovepaw sat down next to the entrance of camp and waited for the patrol to get back.

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Mistclaw scented the air again. What is that smell? He wondered.

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MIstclaw stayed behind to make sure no one was left behind. He ran behind the rest, making sure everyone got away.

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Mistclaw ran as fast as he possibly could, avoiding falling rocks. "COME ON!" He roared at the wolves lagging behind.

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Mistclaw suddenly appeared at Hollystar's side. He picked her up like a mother would a pup and ran full speed with her in his mouth.

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Mistclaw stood stock-still. He was speechless and couldn't move. Half of his clan was gone.

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Mistclaw bounded over to him. "Hold on!" Then with the strength of Whisperpack, he pressed his flank against the boulder and rolled it off of Pantherpaw.

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Mistclaw began to help Pantherpaw with his wounds.
((who's the med dog?))

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Mistclaw nudged Pantherpaw with a paw. "You should try to get up."

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"Yes! Where are you?" Mistclaw barked for Hollystar.

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Mistclaw barked and barked, catching on to what Hollystar was doing.

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((attracting attention so that other dogs can rescue them?))

Mistclaw barked until his throat was sore but he kept on barking.

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Mistclaw heard a, "Where are you???" He padded towards a hole in the rocks that no one had noticed before. "HERE!" Thundered Mistclaw with all his might.

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((the fire explodes?))

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Mistclaw sprinted after them, taking two dogs by their scruffs into his mouth. One was Pantherpaw.
((can there still be a hole that they are given stuff too?))

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((oh then how do they survive))

Mistclaw dropped the two wolves a safe distance from the fire. Then he ran back to get more wolves, grabbing three pups at once.

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Carson Lovepaw looked wildly around. She ran away from the fire.

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Carson Lovepaw heard a voice calling for help and turned around. "Hollystar!"Lovepaw said running back to her leader.

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((does she have to die?))

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Carson ((I know its so sad!))

Lovepaw nodded mutely and started to pushed the rock out of the way.

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Carson ((OMG Thats the saddest death I'm going to cry!))

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Mistclaw roared, "NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

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Mistclaw shook his head. "We've lost too many," He said, sorrowful

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Carson Lovepaw nuzzled her mother back. "I'm glad your okay too."she whispered. "Is Candypup going to be okay?"

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Mistclaw shook his head. "She will be happy in Whisperpack."

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Mistclaw bit his lip, waiting for his daughter's reaction.

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Carson "No! No! She didn't! I don't believe you!"Lovepaw cried stepping back.

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Mistclaw shut his eyes and buried his muzzle into Lovepaw's side.

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Mistclaw nodded.

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Carson Lovepaw shut her eyes. "I'm not going to look. She didn't die. She didn't die. She didn't...."Her voice trailed off and she started to sob.

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Mistclaw pressed his flank to Hollystar's in comfort.

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Carson Lovepaw felt sick. The tears came down freely now. "I-I miss her." She gasped.

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MIstclaw almost teared up. But he was too tough for that. "Let's pray to Whisperpak. We'll need their help."

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Mistclaw howled in sorrow.

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Carson Lovepaw nodded. She was not helping her pack by crying. "What can I do?" she asked.

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Mistclaw said, "There's no hope unless a pack finds us."

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Carson Lovepaw looked at her father. "We can try," she said.

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MIstclaw nodded. "Of course." he padded away into the darkness.

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Carson Lovepaw watched him go. "Are you sure I can't help?" she asked Hollystar.

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MIstclaw returned. "Well, it's blocked off but the wall of the cave seems thin."

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Mistclaw grinned and nodded. He backed up as far as possible, then sprinted forward and broke into the wall.

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