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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

The title says it all :)


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

oh my goodness. i got shivers.


message 3: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
I wanted to cry!!!!!!!!! but i really want to be the first one to comment on it!


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

If you are confused with my post, please know that Scarlet is being forced to write in that notebok. She must write about how it was back home from her point-of-you from a judge. Later on in the story, it will make sense.
Please, by all means, make up your own twists and turns to this story.


message 5: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
point-of-view*


and i totally got it. It's amazing.


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

really great story! its going to be a harder one to do though. more serious stuff


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeaaa, I was hoping for that. But we all gotta take that serious stuff in...a lot of it has happened before. :(


message 8: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
saddly that is true. I am the happiest person ever! So writing stuff like that is a challenge. But it makes me think about how lucky i am.


(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃 | 1050 comments Mod
it is very realistic


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

Thank you, S. (:


(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃 | 1050 comments Mod
anytime marissa!


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

This story is depressing...
:(
and the last post I made isn't the end of it, by the way.


message 13: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
we know. It takes time to think of ideas. remember that. usually the first page is always the slowest part.


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

it's going to take me a little while to adjust to the serious writing


(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃 | 1050 comments Mod
yes i agree, i will have to read a english or europian realistic fiction


message 16: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
i just can't to romantic stuff. Its terrible


(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃 | 1050 comments Mod
i can sometimes, like if its a roleplay, and sometimes by myself, but i find myself trying to think of what i would draw... like a anime of it or something


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

I really like it...I mean I don't, its so terrible and such, but its really great :)


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

EMMA!!! <3
thanks for joining :)
and thanks for the nice comment.


message 20: by [deleted user] (last edited Sep 07, 2010 03:46PM) (new)

MARISSA! <3
Haha, no prob.
You are very welcome.


message 21: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
yeah, you should post on it sometime!


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

My last post almost made me cry. I don't know how I put up with it all.


message 23: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
i must read!


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

readreadread.


message 25: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
the bathtub parts don't make much sense. Like i said she went up to take a SHOWER and then it went to taking a bath, and then i wrote she fell asleep in the tub, and woke up like an hour late, but then marissa said that the water was still running and overflowed. Wouldn't it had overflowed a long time ago if she fell asleep?

Idk, but i do find it hard to remember what is said, and what not. and its not that big of a deal. but just please read like the three posts before a post if you want to post, just to get an idea of what happened.


(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃 | 1050 comments Mod
?? john, i think you could comment on TDAC now if you want..


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