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message 1: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 18 comments Name: Jag Onyx
Age: 110
Appearance: Dark dragon with black scales, red eyes, and blue horns. Rare feathered wings that are mostly black with a few pink and purple feathers. Claw scars on right cheek, giant vertical scar on chest.
Things you know about the character so far: She is cruel, quick to get angry, is always prepared for a fight and always on her guard. Shows no mercy in a fight. Questions anyone who is stupid enough to wander into her cave. Extremely loyal to her two friends.
Things you know about the character's past: Nothing much
Where you think the character will end up: Huh?
What you want help with: She isn't being mean enough in my story. I haven't found many ways to make her mean.


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Perhaps she's really snappy and rude.


message 3: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments Maybe whips her tail around while she walking, being kind of arogant as she is, and then says it was an accident when she breaks things a little too inocently.


message 4: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 18 comments Skitts wrote: "Perhaps she's really snappy and rude."

Exactly.


message 5: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 18 comments She nearly killed a unicorn a couple days ago…


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