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message 1: by Emily -The Rabbit Keeper, What's This Group About Again? (new)

Emily -The Rabbit Keeper | 42 comments Hello Unknown Anonymity members! I think it may just be the fact that I'm joined to a few different groups made for writing, but I happen to know that everyone wants to publicize their writing, so post links here!

Plus, can you please not post your actual writing here? It drives me nuts to have to scroll past an extremely long chapter, even though I love that we are writing uber long chapters!

Anyway, this is a chance for everyone to get their writing out there, and get some reviews.

Ready? SET! GO!


message 2: by Ji Mei , Let's ♫♪♫♪!!!! (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 765 comments Ok, yeah, so if you want help with your writing, you can post the link to your writing so we can view it and please tell us want you want us to help with. Names, places, how to spell, you know, that kind of stuff. My writing is lame, but if you want to look, this is one of them:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

You could just go to your friends, look at whoever's profile, scroll down, and there you can find their writing! =)


message 5: by David (new)

David jones | 18 comments Rozara I put the think on here for my knew story, can u read the prologue of it?


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Ok!


message 7: by Emily -The Rabbit Keeper, What's This Group About Again? (new)

Emily -The Rabbit Keeper | 42 comments Here's a couple of chapters from a story I'm writing (very slowly). Comment porfavor?

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 8: by Ji Mei , Let's ♫♪♫♪!!!! (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 765 comments How's life?


message 9: by Emily -The Rabbit Keeper, What's This Group About Again? (new)

Emily -The Rabbit Keeper | 42 comments Crazy. I'm so busy i haven't been on goodreads for at least a week.


message 10: by Ji Mei , Let's ♫♪♫♪!!!! (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 765 comments yeah, i try to stay off, because i need to do homework.


message 11: by David (new)

David jones | 18 comments The small car sped down the highway, toward its home. The man behind the wheel was sergeant John Thompson, who worked with the military scientists. He swerved onto the exit and raced toward his house. He threw himself out and-
"What is it honey?" asked his wife.
"We need to go NOW!! The military is after me. I am infected with the virus, they want to kill me!!" he screamed.
His wife Linda asked, "What virus?"
"I am infected Linda, get the kids and get them out of here NOW!!!" Sweat streamed down his face.
"Are you sure?"
"YES!!! GET THE KIDS AND GET THEM INTO THE CAR! THE MILITARY WILL BE HERE IN-" The screeching of tires.
Linda raced back into the house, grabbed the kids, packed several things and then she was ready. The kids were loaded into the car. John threw himself into the car, helped his wife in, and put the petal to the metal.
The car swerved around the corner, fish tailing the car, nearly hitting a nice looking Mercedes. Horns honked as the car sped- BAM! A sudden shotgun blast reverberated through the night.
"They are here!" A humvee was chasing after John and his family.
There was a chatter of machine gun fire as the soldiers manned the turret on top of the humvee.

i want some feed back how does this sound for u guys


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

Wow really good. You always start really good with super-action-packed beginnings=)


message 13: by David (new)

David jones | 18 comments ikr?! thnk u


message 14: by Ji Mei , Let's ♫♪♫♪!!!! (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 765 comments yeah, definitely action-packed beginning. What are you going to do with it? Are you going to continue or make it just a random scene?


message 15: by David (new)

David jones | 18 comments idk i may continue it later
i started another story tho called bloodfather u shuld check it out


message 16: by Ji Mei , Let's ♫♪♫♪!!!! (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 765 comments sure! sounds dark and scary! O.O


message 17: by David (new)

David jones | 18 comments its not rlly scary
its like a scifi thing


message 18: by David (new)

David | 4 comments its rlly cool lolz
(btw this is my new profile)
ji mei can maybe send me a couple of friend requests to me tht used to be my friends on my old profile?


message 19: by David (new)

David | 4 comments u*


message 20: by Ji Mei , Let's ♫♪♫♪!!!! (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 765 comments hmm? me confuzzled a little bit.


message 21: by Ji Mei , Let's ♫♪♫♪!!!! (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 765 comments i added a random scene to my random scene thing... so check it out if you want! The similarities though were sooo unintentional. XP


message 22: by David (new)

David | 4 comments kool


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

That's nice


message 24: by Ji Mei , Let's ♫♪♫♪!!!! (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 765 comments you looked Rozara?


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

yeah


message 26: by Ji Mei , Let's ♫♪♫♪!!!! (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 765 comments oh


message 27: by Ji Mei , Let's ♫♪♫♪!!!! (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 765 comments I added something to one of my writing things.


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

kewl


message 29: by Ji Mei , Let's ♫♪♫♪!!!! (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 765 comments not really


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

okay


message 31: by Ji Mei , Let's ♫♪♫♪!!!! (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 765 comments I added a new writing piece! this one is random scenes of a dude and not a girl so don't get them mixed up!


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

Awesome! But I'll have to check it out later: Nanowrimo and all that.


message 33: by Ji Mei , Let's ♫♪♫♪!!!! (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 765 comments I have another writing! you didn't look at the one I meant for you to look!


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

Oops dude I'm on the laptop at school next to my flute buddy emily/sen!!!


message 35: by Ji Mei , Let's ♫♪♫♪!!!! (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 765 comments good for you?


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

yes


message 37: by Ji Mei , Let's ♫♪♫♪!!!! (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 765 comments I put something new up on my writing.


message 38: by Emily -The Rabbit Keeper, What's This Group About Again? (new)

Emily -The Rabbit Keeper | 42 comments OOO! Must go check.


message 39: by Ji Mei , Let's ♫♪♫♪!!!! (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 765 comments Thanks!


message 40: by ♫♫☺Allie☺♫♫, Don't interrupt me while I'm reading a book. I <3 Julian Smith! (new)

♫♫☺Allie☺♫♫ (alliwicious) | 130 comments http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

This is my story. It doesn't have a title yet.


message 41: by Ji Mei , Let's ♫♪♫♪!!!! (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 765 comments I'll look at it!


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