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message 1: by ~Tormiester~ (last edited Jun 25, 2011 12:25PM) (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 23 comments Hello. I have this topic in many groups, but for those of you who do not know of it... This is where I post my story and many others post their stories. I do promise to read every one of them. For some strange reason...this topic never changes, no matter where I go. It's a place where I feel safe, or, rather, at home? Whatever the case may be, this is my place and I love to share it with all of the great writers out there. Enjoy. -Critic

Ignore the top. This is just my writing, but if you post your stuff too, I'll read it. =^)


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this is a really nice idea but dont we already have a writing topic?


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~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 23 comments I've got two new stories that people seem to like a lot and so here they are (with short chapters!!!)

The Perfect Pretender

What if being perfect could help you escape something you never wanted to deal with again?
That's what Gwendolyn Thaler aka "Brownstone's Jewel" thought. However, it is not true. It's only hiding you from the truth, by lying, pretending.
Little Miss Perfect will meet her match, and find out she can't pretend to be something she's not.
But, with her kind of backround, that "match" will see, who wouldn't want to pretend?
"Lying, my friend, is my salvation. After all, who wouldn't want to be perfect, even if it is just pretending?"

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Imperfect Virgo

Dorina Scott is a Virgo in the astrology world.
Her name means "perfection" in her astrology month of September.
She is suppose to be the following:
modest and shy,
meticulous and reliable,
practical and diligent,
intelligent and analytical,
a perfectionist, and
criticizing anyone and everyone she meets.
However,
Dorina is none of those things, wants to be none of those things. She wants nothing more than to be herself, someone that doesn't base their life on a stupid sign. Though, that is exactly how her life is, and everyone around her. How can she fight back if she's outnumbered 11 to 1? And that's with her sign, something that she doesn't plan to use.

Oh, and there's one more thing.
A Virgo's enemy opposite is the Pisces, for Dorina that's the ever annoying, ever naive Julian Moonstone.
Only now, he's suddenly become a threat, and that threat is aiming straight for her heart.
What will happen to her goal when he's in her way?

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 4: by ~Tormiester~ (last edited Jun 25, 2011 12:40PM) (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 23 comments My finished works of short story awesomeness!!!!

Dead, Until We Meet Again. ;^)

Mini-story about A girl named Abigail (Abby) who-every morning-woke up and made a funny face out her window at her best friend George (Georgy), whom did the same to her. Abby died when the window closed down on her head, causing her to lose consciousness but appearing as if dead. Now they are both older. Abby hasn't seen George since the accident, and George thought Abby was dead all of these years. Abby finally gets to move back to her old neighborhood, though not in the house next to Georges' who she thought moved away. Their rival schools cause them both to meet again, but will they be the same as they once were?

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Parallel Hearts: Set Me Free (Romance)

My first finished story! I hope you enjoy it! It's a story of love, loss, and sadness.

"If you love something, set it free." Sound familiar? It has been two weeks since the nuclear explosion, which killed thousands with only one survivor. That survivor was Keith. Keith was transported to a parallel universe, which has a flower shop where the nuclear factory is in his own world, or-at least-was. He had landed in the flower shop and met the store-owner, Alice. It has been two weeks since he arrived, and after freaking out and asking a million questions, he regained his sanity and now works in the shop with Alice. He wants to get out of this "parallel world" and return to the one he belongs to, but...how?


http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

My Freedom Come

Italian immigrant Lucetta travels to america with her family.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 5: by ~Tormiester~ (last edited Jun 25, 2011 12:35PM) (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 23 comments Alright, this story has completely been abandoned by viewers, so if anyone wants to read it while it's still up, feel free!

A Fighter's Spirit: Kat Masaru

Kat Masaru lives in her grandfathers Dojo and trains with his martial arts classes. She is a tough Fighter whom refuses to lose, especially to men. Most importantly she has a weakness for the statement: "I can't hit a girl." But will that statement blind her from seeing what she's really doing? Will she be blinded by the pain so much that she won't realize the cost of her own life?
"You can take away the fighter, but the spirit still remains."


http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 6: by ~Tormiester~ (last edited Jun 25, 2011 12:35PM) (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 23 comments I Serve You

Kylie Steven’s family, as well as the many other branch houses, have served the Main House (The Van Holdgens) for centuries. However, tragedy struck as the other Branch Houses vied for serving the family when their leader, Edmond Van Holdgen, goes away on business. Many of the branches murder each other while the Van Holdgens, such as seven-year-old Chester, hide in their rooms. Kylie goes to comfort Ches (pronounced Chess) despite the death of her family. Ches commits himself to protecting her, from other vampires like him, for he isn’t the only vampire that finds her blood alluring...

Now, the brooding and seductive school star Chester, and Kylie, attend Goodwin Academy, where not only the living lurk, but the dead, equally as beautiful, thrive.
As Kylie refuses to accept Chester’s servant-hood, and Ches himself is protecting other vampires of the night from drinking her blood, the Van Holdgen family is plotting her destruction. As the dangers escalate and girls keep attacking Ches, figuratively and literally, can Kylie wake up to the reality around her, and delve into feelings she’s always held back?
Can Ches live up to his commitment, or will he die protecting her?

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


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~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 23 comments You Are...My Sunshine

Victoria Morganstar is the sixteen-year-old heir to the Morganstar bloodline. Her father is the king of the land known as Cordelia. While Cordelia itself is stuck in olden ages-having being stranded surrounded by large mountains-it has gotten shipments of new clothing from the outside world. A world that wants nothing to do with Cordelia's people, especially Victoria. Victoria's skin, for some bizarre reason, sparkles when it reaches sunlight. all of the people who originally live inside Cordelia's walls accept Victoria with open arms, but the newcomers that pass through aren't as welcoming. However, one little boy she meets doesn't throw rocks at her or calls her a freak, no he smiles at her. Who is he? Also, who is the mysterious voice inside her head?

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


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~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 23 comments Cecile

"Popular kids mean nothing but trouble," that's what outcast Amy Summers always believed. So what happens when the super-hot popular kid, Zach Hurston, shows that he doesn't mean trouble? Meanwhile, Amy's other half, Cecile, remains dormant inside of Amy, but she starting to wake-up and she wants out. Is Cecile the one responsible for Amy's outbursts and blackouts? And when things get too far, will Zach and Beth help save Amy or let Cecile take control?

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 9: by ~Tormiester~ (last edited Jun 25, 2011 12:47PM) (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 23 comments Alright, I told you all that my writing can get pretty disturbing, no? Well this next story is really my pride and joy, my first big project that I never get tired of writing. Every time I write a chapter, I never get bored with it like my others, even if it isn't so popular, I don't care, since it makes me happy. I read the chapters over all the time and even laugh sometimes, as if it wasn't my writing, my story. That is why this story is so special to me, so I hope you all can glance at it if not through my perspective.

Beautiful Fear

Description: Everyone has a fear, and a killer is no different. With the POV's of both Alex, a former killer, and Travis, whose parents were murdered by a killer, watch as they go under one roof and find that pasts can connect, whether they like it or not.

This story is a bit gory, and makes me shiver at times, but it really is cute to watch such a strong girl realize her own weakness. Her blushing just makes me want to giggle! ^-^

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


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