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message 1: by Angel♥ (last edited Jul 01, 2008 07:35AM) (new)

Angel♥ (angellover512) | 179 comments Ok, I'm going to write a short story, and people can comment on it!!


Where am I? she thought. Lost in the middle of the night in her own neighborhood was kind of embarrassing, but in the middle of the night it was scary. She tugged her bike along slowly, looking all around her for the familiar new home she moved into a few days ago. She swung her leg over her bike and pedaled along on the never ending sidewalk.

"Helen!"

She turned her head and almost cried out loud. Her mom had drove the car around the neighborhood just to find and guide her home. "you're almost home, Helen." her mom said.

As in response to her mom's word, she saw the familiar trampoline next to her. Across the street, she could see her grandparents in the driveway waving their arms. she pedaled over to her home and put her bike in the garage. She was home at last.

please comment!


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

If you had turned it into a real story, there could've been a lot more, but really, it was good.


message 3: by Angel♥ (new)

Angel♥ (angellover512) | 179 comments its a short story. that actually really happened to me!!


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

cool!


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

It's really good though!


message 6: by Kataury (new)

Kataury haha! Better than I could ever hope to do! Brilliant Eileen!


message 7: by Angel♥ (new)

Angel♥ (angellover512) | 179 comments its short!!


message 8: by Kataury (new)

Kataury Its true!! hahah! :D


message 9: by Angel♥ (new)

Angel♥ (angellover512) | 179 comments :p


message 10: by Kataury (new)

Kataury "D


message 11: by Angel♥ (new)

Angel♥ (angellover512) | 179 comments lalalalalalalala!!!!!


message 12: by Kataury (new)

Kataury dee dum due dee!! ;D


message 13: by Angel♥ (new)

Angel♥ (angellover512) | 179 comments wah?????


message 14: by Kataury (new)

Kataury HoO!?


message 15: by Angel♥ (new)

Angel♥ (angellover512) | 179 comments ????????? weird.


message 16: by Kataury (new)

Kataury odd true... ?? :D


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

What's going on?


message 18: by Kataury (new)

Kataury Short stories... they're hard...


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» Yeah. Oh Elise, I emailed you something. I've been anxiously waiting for replies, but no one has replied thus far.


message 20: by Kataury (new)

Kataury huh? like email?


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

whoa . . .


message 23: by Kataury (new)

Kataury What?


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

idk


message 25: by Kataury (new)

Kataury what? haha!


message 26: by Angel♥ (new)

Angel♥ (angellover512) | 179 comments what?????howd this start???


message 27: by Kataury (new)

Kataury no idea Eileen!


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

hmmm. short stories anyone?


message 29: by Kataury (new)

Kataury nope I got notin! nada!


message 30: by Angel♥ (new)

Angel♥ (angellover512) | 179 comments hm... oh who here has read the percy jackson and the olympians short story??


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

short story?
not i.


message 32: by Angel♥ (new)

Angel♥ (angellover512) | 179 comments oh i read it and now I cant find it! but it's pretty good! I'm gonna go look!


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