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message 1: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 16, 2010 11:27AM) (new)

Discuss The Traveler here


message 2: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
Omg i am writing a book with a person named Anna as one of the main characters too! And she is also 16!


But i'm not posting on there anymore until DA does. I don't want to change it too far off track of what is originally intended.


(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃 | 1050 comments Mod
yes ill wait to get the feel of it.


message 4: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
Yeah i know! Writing in the beginning of a story is the intro and it is the course that the whole story sets on. if you say something wrong. Then it will be taken a different way and could change everything the story would be.


(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃 | 1050 comments Mod
yep! i totally agree, but it seems intresting!


message 6: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
yes it does. And Kat added a nice thing to that. The Fairies and lions and beasts thing. Or was that Marissa that added that?


(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃 | 1050 comments Mod
idk... lol!


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

I wrote that :P


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

I wanted to set like a medavil kind of feeling. And I do not know how to spell that...


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

lol. i like what you guys have done with it


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm scared to write more on this story. Because once I have an idea, it totally twists the orignal plan. I wait for Dark Angel to write so I won't mess it up. xD


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

go for it, marissa. i don't really have any plans


message 13: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
I must say Marissa that was a great add on to the story. You always put on great twists to the story.

Making her aunt be the person that traveled there.

But when the time comes i do have an idea that will shake up the story even more.


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

i can't wait :P


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

Haha, thank you! And go for it, John.


message 16: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
no no no, it hasn't come up yet and it won't come up for im guessing about another 50-100 posts. I'll just play along with it for the moment, but when the time comes i'll put it in there.


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

gah! i'll die of suspension then


message 18: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
mwahaha >:) so be it!


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

lol


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

so i tried to find a picture that was like the one in the story. i found one that was sort of close and added it to the photos section. just imagine it more colorful and cheerful looking :P


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

sorry, i tried to write the next part, but it kept sounding lame.


message 22: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
It didn't sound lame!

"Only if you can find her" sounded actually cool!



Yes we all have made the story kind of seem, kid themed, but it will be fixed when someone gets stabbed in the face.


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

thanks. yeah, we should start making it older


message 24: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
yeah. well that crap that i said "The greatest spy in the world" was like a 3rd thing and i felt ashamed to writing it X'(


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

hey, it worked though. it was better than all the ideas i had of getting through the forest.


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

that wasn't crappy, marissa.


(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃 | 1050 comments Mod
i think its all coming together well


message 28: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
yeah. the story is basically established. All we need is more action.


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

Thank you, Dark Angel. :)

Yeaa, more action!! I have a lot of ideas in my head, but I don't want to mess up the whole story line.


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

i have no plans. go wild!


message 31: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
lol, great pep talk DA


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

XD


(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃 | 1050 comments Mod
did a little jig and whooped! lol! I love wilber!


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

I love Wilber too. His name suits him well. :)


message 35: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
he's okay i guess. but i really like Anna.


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

i like the bad guy you introduced. i can't wait to see what happens with him


message 37: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
thanks. But i don't know how to get him back, someone else will have to do that.


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

lol, he could just pop up randomly


message 39: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
if he thought about it, i guess he could.


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

what?


message 41: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
the story is, if you think about it, then it comes true, so if he wanted to just pop up, he could.


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

*smacks forehead* i can't believe i forgot that


message 43: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
*face palm** -.(\


message 44: by [deleted user] (new)

lol


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