The Traveler Discussion

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[John, (~^u^~)V]

Omg i am writing a book with a person named Anna as one of the main characters too! And she is also 16!


But i'm not posting on there anymore until DA does. I don't want to change it too far off track of what is originally intended.

[(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃, Samurai]

yes ill wait to get the feel of it.

[John, (~^u^~)V]

Yeah i know! Writing in the beginning of a story is the intro and it is the course that the whole story sets on. if you say something wrong. Then it will be taken a different way and could change everything the story would be.

[(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃, Samurai]

yep! i totally agree, but it seems intresting!

[John, (~^u^~)V]

yes it does. And Kat added a nice thing to that. The Fairies and lions and beasts thing. Or was that Marissa that added that?

[(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃, Samurai]

idk... lol!

[[deleted user]]

I wrote that :P

[[deleted user]]

I wanted to set like a medavil kind of feeling. And I do not know how to spell that...

[[deleted user]]

lol. i like what you guys have done with it

[[deleted user]]

I'm scared to write more on this story. Because once I have an idea, it totally twists the orignal plan. I wait for Dark Angel to write so I won't mess it up. xD

[[deleted user]]

go for it, marissa. i don't really have any plans

[John, (~^u^~)V]

I must say Marissa that was a great add on to the story. You always put on great twists to the story.

Making her aunt be the person that traveled there.

But when the time comes i do have an idea that will shake up the story even more.

[[deleted user]]

i can't wait :P

[[deleted user]]

Haha, thank you! And go for it, John.

[John, (~^u^~)V]

no no no, it hasn't come up yet and it won't come up for im guessing about another 50-100 posts. I'll just play along with it for the moment, but when the time comes i'll put it in there.

[[deleted user]]

gah! i'll die of suspension then

[John, (~^u^~)V]

mwahaha >:) so be it!

[[deleted user]]

lol

[[deleted user]]

so i tried to find a picture that was like the one in the story. i found one that was sort of close and added it to the photos section. just imagine it more colorful and cheerful looking :P

[[deleted user]]

sorry, i tried to write the next part, but it kept sounding lame.

[John, (~^u^~)V]

It didn't sound lame!

"Only if you can find her" sounded actually cool!



Yes we all have made the story kind of seem, kid themed, but it will be fixed when someone gets stabbed in the face.

[[deleted user]]

thanks. yeah, we should start making it older

[John, (~^u^~)V]

yeah. well that crap that i said "The greatest spy in the world" was like a 3rd thing and i felt ashamed to writing it X'(

[[deleted user]]

hey, it worked though. it was better than all the ideas i had of getting through the forest.

[[deleted user]]

that wasn't crappy, marissa.

[(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃, Samurai]

i think its all coming together well

[John, (~^u^~)V]

yeah. the story is basically established. All we need is more action.

[[deleted user]]

Thank you, Dark Angel. :)

Yeaa, more action!! I have a lot of ideas in my head, but I don't want to mess up the whole story line.

[[deleted user]]

i have no plans. go wild!

[John, (~^u^~)V]

lol, great pep talk DA

[[deleted user]]

XD

[(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃, Samurai]

did a little jig and whooped! lol! I love wilber!

[[deleted user]]

I love Wilber too. His name suits him well. :)

[John, (~^u^~)V]

he's okay i guess. but i really like Anna.

[[deleted user]]

i like the bad guy you introduced. i can't wait to see what happens with him

[John, (~^u^~)V]

thanks. But i don't know how to get him back, someone else will have to do that.

[[deleted user]]

lol, he could just pop up randomly

[John, (~^u^~)V]

if he thought about it, i guess he could.

[[deleted user]]

what?

[John, (~^u^~)V]

the story is, if you think about it, then it comes true, so if he wanted to just pop up, he could.

[[deleted user]]

*smacks forehead* i can't believe i forgot that

[John, (~^u^~)V]

*face palm** -.(\

[[deleted user]]

lol