Writing up a storm!! discussion
Group stories!!!!
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The story
(ooh, scary.)
They beings closed in around her, where should she go?
They beings closed in around her, where should she go?
she jumped straight up reacing for the low rafters and climbed on top of them.
She covered her head with her arms, but she was too late.
(so, right now for me, it's 10:40. is it already 12:30 for you people?)
(I don't want to say . . .it's dangerous on the internet.)
(hmm,)
She disappeared from the place she was in, and didn't wake until hours later.
She disappeared from the place she was in, and didn't wake until hours later.
when she awoke she was tied up and in the middle of a large field.
She tried to see where she was, but a strong hand forced her head back down into the grass. She could feel the bugs climbing up and down her face.
"So you have the prisoner?" A deep voice said.
"yes" another answered, she grunted in discust
"Yes," a being beside her growled.
(what's her name?)
(what's her name?)
((ummmmmmmmm....))she turned her head and saw the being who had said yes, it was a cat! she gasped and tried to scramble away
But it grabbed her, and pulled her back.
The being the furthest away chuckled, "quite the squirmy one you've got there."
The being the furthest away chuckled, "quite the squirmy one you've got there."
"H-How did you...""Pipe down!" The cat hissed.
Brook quieted. Not exactly keen on having a scratch by a giant cat.
The other one became serious, "Brooklyn, I've heard that name before . . ."
Brooklyn cringed, she knew she had blown her cover that last time.
Brooklyn cringed, she knew she had blown her cover that last time.
please donr knoe who i reallt am she wished
(( *" Please don't know who i really am" She wished,* that's what Taleoflostink said, i think that is what she said.))"hm, i can't recall her name," the other cat said. " Thank god," Brooke thought in her mind.
((to the place she is in right now, where ever she is))
had these strange creatures kidnapped her?
the cats came back, " What should we do with her?" one of them asked.
"She should be of some use to us, she's a citizen of the O'Mire, (pronounced, Oh'Meerae)and supposedly very close to the President, she's of great use to us."
The other cat nodded, "I guess it could work."
They were obviously reading eachother's minds again.
The other cat nodded, "I guess it could work."
They were obviously reading eachother's minds again.
she struggled again, wishing she could get away from them
(WHoa! the president's daughter? Or the presidents certain helper or co worker or somethin?)
she really needed to find out why she was here so she decided to ask.....but it came out more as a scream "WHY AM I HERE?!"
"Because of the prophecy," The cat yowled. "It has been said that a red haired human would destroy the peace in our land and we will not allow it."
"Destroy the peace?" She muttered, "Yeah right."
"You're the ones that captured me!"
"You're the ones that captured me!"
The two cats looked at each other. (wow this a lot like warriors kind of....)
"you are just disrupting my peace i have no plans of destroying anything
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well i wont do anything so let me go!
"she waited ther and when they still paid her no attention she started edging toward the cliff ten feet to her right.
She had almost made it when she heard one of them yell.
"Hey! Get back here!"She whirled and stepped off the cliff.
she fell for eternity, her life did not pass before her eyes but peacefullness filled her mind
Suddenly, she felt solid earth beneath her feet. The force of her fall making her crumple on the small, grass-covered outcroping. She layed in a heap, shocked that she had landed alive. Her senses slowly returned and she shifted to peer over the edge.
It was a cliff.
(what's happened?)
(what's happened?)
(cliffs have outcroppings. I figured the story was too young for her to die)
the fall was at least 300 ft, she pulled her head back and gasped
why had she thought she was hundreads of feet off the ground before, she jumped off the ledge and landed
the lights flashed on and off, the girl sat there trying to figure out what to do, run or attack, she had to escape!!!!!