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message 1: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) heres where we will do the story, i will begin,

the lights flashed on and off, the girl sat there trying to figure out what to do, run or attack, she had to escape!!!!!


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

(ooh, scary.)
They beings closed in around her, where should she go?


message 3: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) she jumped straight up reacing for the low rafters and climbed on top of them.


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She covered her head with her arms, but she was too late.


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(so, right now for me, it's 10:40. is it already 12:30 for you people?)


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(i know!)


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

(I don't want to say . . .it's dangerous on the internet.)


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

(okay bye!)


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

(hmm,)
She disappeared from the place she was in, and didn't wake until hours later.


message 10: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) when she awoke she was tied up and in the middle of a large field.


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She tried to see where she was, but a strong hand forced her head back down into the grass. She could feel the bugs climbing up and down her face.


Xerxes Break(Vivian Ephona) (ephona) "So you have the prisoner?" A deep voice said.


message 13: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) "yes" another answered, she grunted in discust


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"Yes," a being beside her growled.
(what's her name?)


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T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) ((ummmmmmmmm....))
she turned her head and saw the being who had said yes, it was a cat! she gasped and tried to scramble away


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

But it grabbed her, and pulled her back.
The being the furthest away chuckled, "quite the squirmy one you've got there."


Xerxes Break(Vivian Ephona) (ephona) "H-How did you..."
"Pipe down!" The cat hissed.


message 18: by Kataury (new)

Kataury Brook quieted. Not exactly keen on having a scratch by a giant cat.


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The other one became serious, "Brooklyn, I've heard that name before . . ."
Brooklyn cringed, she knew she had blown her cover that last time.


message 20: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) please donr knoe who i reallt am she wished


message 21: by Kataury (new)

Kataury (what?)


message 22: by Soumya (last edited Jun 29, 2008 02:57PM) (new)

Soumya (( *" Please don't know who i really am" She wished,* that's what Taleoflostink said, i think that is what she said.))

"hm, i can't recall her name," the other cat said. " Thank god," Brooke thought in her mind.


message 23: by Kataury (new)

Kataury (oh! I get it!)


message 24: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) she wondered how she got here


message 25: by Soumya (new)

Soumya ((to the place she is in right now, where ever she is))


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

(now i don't get it.)


message 27: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) had these strange creatures kidnapped her?


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

(oh, now I remember!)


message 29: by Soumya (new)

Soumya the cats came back, " What should we do with her?" one of them asked.



message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

"She should be of some use to us, she's a citizen of the O'Mire, (pronounced, Oh'Meerae)and supposedly very close to the President, she's of great use to us."
The other cat nodded, "I guess it could work."
They were obviously reading eachother's minds again.


message 31: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) she struggled again, wishing she could get away from them


message 32: by Kataury (new)

Kataury (WHoa! the president's daughter? Or the presidents certain helper or co worker or somethin?)


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

(friend)


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

(thank you, back to story.)


message 35: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) she really needed to find out why she was here so she decided to ask.....but it came out more as a scream "WHY AM I HERE?!"


Xerxes Break(Vivian Ephona) (ephona) "Because of the prophecy," The cat yowled. "It has been said that a red haired human would destroy the peace in our land and we will not allow it."


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"Destroy the peace?" She muttered, "Yeah right."
"You're the ones that captured me!"


message 38: by Kataury (new)

Kataury The two cats looked at each other. (wow this a lot like warriors kind of....)


message 39: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) "you are just disrupting my peace i have no plans of destroying anything


message 40: by Novin, the one who has lost track of the stories;;(( (new)

Novin | 15 comments Mod
S'rry if we're disturbing your peace, but you are red haired & it's said that you would destroy our peace so we had to capture you !!


message 41: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) well i wont do anything so let me go!


message 42: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) "she waited ther and when they still paid her no attention she started edging toward the cliff ten feet to her right.


message 43: by Kataury (new)

Kataury She had almost made it when she heard one of them yell.


message 44: by Mystery Girl (new)

Mystery Girl (mysterygirl) | 34 comments "Hey! Get back here!"
She whirled and stepped off the cliff.


message 45: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) she fell for eternity, her life did not pass before her eyes but peacefullness filled her mind


message 46: by Mystery Girl (new)

Mystery Girl (mysterygirl) | 34 comments Suddenly, she felt solid earth beneath her feet. The force of her fall making her crumple on the small, grass-covered outcroping.
She layed in a heap, shocked that she had landed alive. Her senses slowly returned and she shifted to peer over the edge.


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

It was a cliff.
(what's happened?)


message 48: by Mystery Girl (new)

Mystery Girl (mysterygirl) | 34 comments (cliffs have outcroppings. I figured the story was too young for her to die)


message 49: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) the fall was at least 300 ft, she pulled her head back and gasped


message 50: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) why had she thought she was hundreads of feet off the ground before, she jumped off the ledge and landed


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